October inter forum fest - Contest 1 HQ! - Page 5

Originally posted by: advil

Meena, did you read my PM? As per Bhaijaan, better to have 4stanzas and a total of 16 lines as maximum ....

can we do something to cut it a bit short?

I'll resubmit this.. I dont think this is too long.. everything is pretty meaningfull.. Thanks everyone.. especially Ahmed Jii..😳

Saath suron se sajta hai pyaar ka yeh sangam,
IF SRGMP section ke sargam hain, aap aur hum,
SRGMP series' ke saath jud gaya hum sab ka naata,
Sangeet ke maamle mein karte nahi hum koi samjhauta…

SRGMP jaisa section dhoonte reh jaao ge,
Kahin bhi chale jaaoo vapas yahanhe aao ge,
Haamare parties ke khane main hain itna dum,
Ki sab do baar khate hai aur khete hain yum yum…

Sangeet na ho hasti mein, to besur hai zindagi,
pagalpan na ho masti mein to akeli hai bandage,
Jeet hogi us ki jis ki awaz mein rehega dard,
Mukaddar ka hai ek sikandar, chahe aurat ho ya mard…

Section humaara hai mastaana,
Moderator ko hum banaye deewaana,
Warning humein kahin na mil jaayee...

Thread sabhi nasheele, Mast Members haii,
har waqt nashe mein saara Section haiiiiiii,
kabhi Judges ek doosree see takraayeeee,

Unke anokhe andaaz hamien khoob hasaye…

Singers se Singer milte hai aisee,
Din mein taaree dikhte haii jaiseee,
Singers se Singer milte hai aiseee,
premi ke bahoo mein tum ho jaiseee...

Mauj masti, shaitani aur sab kuch payenge,

Bohat saare singer aur shayer yaha payenge,

Naara hai Lets rock, yalgaar , hit it aur josh,

Yaha ke andaaz se ud jayenge aapke hosh…

Anu Bhaskar Barnali di, hai section ki aan,

Kuch bhi karo lekin karna na inhe pareshaan,
Inse dushmani mehngi tumhe padege,
Phir mat kehna ke kiya nahi tha saawdhaaan...

Agar phir bhi aapko yakeen nahin aaya toh humaare section ko visit karo,
Kissi se na pucho, Kissi se na daro. Tum bas sangeet ki fizao me jhoom lo,
Hum to guarantee dete hain ki aap to kabhi vaapas hi naja pa sakoge,
dekhte hi dekhte humse rishta jurd jayega, bandhan kabhi chuda na pa sakoge…