KR FF 'Forever... Jabtak Saans hai' part 7 on pg 12 - Page 7

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Posted: 10 years ago
#61
wow it was superb...😳
loved it 😳😳😳
do continue soon...😳😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
#62
It ws jst fab...👏 plz update next part soon...cnt wait to read next part...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Part 7


Rey, Swayam and Sharon were sitting in the hall. Kriya came her back packed. They stood up and Kriyaansh shared a eye lock.

Kriya(in mind): Yeh kya kar diya? Kam se kam ek mauka toh diya hota. Kya sach much itni der ho gayi hai?

Rey(in mind): mere pass aur ki rasta nahi tha... main aur chance lena nahi chahta hta. Sayad ab bahut der ho gayi hai.

Sharon goes to her.

"Kriya.."

She shows her palm and signaling not to say anything and hugged her. She looked back at Rey.

Kriya: Airport aap mujhe chodenge ya main khud chali jayun?

Rey: main chod deta hun.

Kriyaansh got out of the car and looked at each other.

Rey(in mind) : Main tumhare bina kaise jiyunga Kriya??

He put his hand forward but she moved ignoring.

Rey: Kriya...

Kriya: Maine decide kr liya hai rey, ab main piche mudkar nahi dekhungi Rey.

She moves inside the airport and rey gets confused in this situation. He sees kriya not responding, and sits in the car. He drives.

Kriya sits on a bench and recalls all the moments spent with him. Rey, vice versa. Both starts having tears. Kriya sobs loud and Rey tried to control. Suddenly he saw a truck in front and shouts "KRIYAA"

"Rey!", kriya exclaimed. Then see looked here and there. Everyone was looking at her. She says sorry and all ignores. Kriya was feeling uneasy but was helpless. She can't understand what that was. Why was she feeling like that? Suddenly, she heard and announcement. There was a call for her. She went to the counter. She was Sharon in the phone.

Sharon: My god kriya tum phone kyun nahi utha rahi?

Kriya: Boarding k liye off hai.. kya hua Sharon? Why r u so tensed?

Sharon: Kriya, Rey ka accident ho gaya hai!

Kriya: What?

The phone fell from her hand.

HOSPITAL

Kriya entered and saw Swaron sitting.

Kriya: Swayam, Sharon, Rey...

Swayam: Kriya.,..

Kriya: Wo thik hain na? yeh hua kaise? Kab kahan? Matlab..

Swayam: Kriya, Kriya relax! Rey thik hai. He is out of danger now. He is alright.

Kriya got her life. She entered the cabin and saw Rey sleeping with bandage on his head. She goes near him and cries, moved to go when he held her hand.

Rey: Tum dar gayi thi na?

She stayed quite.\

Rey: Agar mujhe kuch ho jata toh?

She couldn't controlled, looked at him and again turned to go.

Rey: Kriya,

She stopped.

Rey: can I get a hug?

She looked at him lovingly.

Rey: Kriya aaj mene realize kiya k life ka koi bharosha nahi, aaj jo b hus, uske baad, I need a hug.

She turns her face, he loosens his hold.

Rey: kya mere pyar ko itna b haque nahi hai?

Now without wasting a moment, kriya turned and hugged him tightly. He hugged back.

Hum Tere Bin Ab Reh Nahi Sakte

Tere Bina Kya Vajood Mera

They broke the hug and he kissed her forehead. Then he moved a little cupping her face and kissed on cheeks.

Tujhse Juda Agar Ho Jayenge

To Khudse Hi Ho Jayenge Juda

He then moved to her lips. First he placed a soft kiss on her lips and then hold her lower lips. To his surprise, she responded.

Kyun Ki Tum Hi Ho
Ab Tum Hi Ho
Zindagi Ab Tum Hi Ho
Chain Bhi Mera Dard Bhi
Meri Aashiqui Ab Tum Hi Ho

Soon it turned to a passionate one. They were married so long, but it was their first kiss. Better than anything, sweeter than anything. They broke the kiss. Both were breathing heavily. They looked in each other's eyes. Kriya blushed and smiled a little.

Rey: Kriya,

She looked up.

Rey: Agar yeh accident nahi hua hota, toh yeh sab kabhi nahi hota na?

Kriya(smiled): kabhi na kabhi toh hona hi tha. You know, I love you...

Rey was having mixed emotions. Surprise, happy, peace and relief.

Kriya hugged him.

Kriya: I love you Rey, I love you a lot!

Rey: I love you too.

They hugged happily.

Rey: We will be together na?

Kriya: Forever, jab tak saans hai..

So guys, it was the last part, and the epilogue is coming soon. I thank everyone who supported my story and encouraged me. I request all my regular as well as silent readers to plz comment this time so that I could know my success so far. If any of you have any concept or want me to write more, please share everything with me through PM, Scrap or post in my writing gallery. Thank you Once again.

Love,

Shirisha😊

Edited by ShirishaTeddy - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#64
Superb ending
Kriyaansh kiss was so romantic and passionate
So hpy dat finally they realised their feelings and confessed it
Waiting 4 epilogue
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Posted: 9 years ago
#65
love the ending
kriyansh kiss was so romantic finally dono ne confess kar hi diya i'm so happyyy
waiting for the epilouge
thnx for the pm
aise aur bhi kriyaansh ke stories likhna plzzz
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Posted: 9 years ago
#66
Awesome.story it is..
and.a nice end too...

Waiting.for the epilogue
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Posted: 9 years ago
#67
superb ending
but i want more
plzzz
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Posted: 9 years ago
#68
wow gr8 yaar...😳😳
waiting fr mr work frm u 😳😳
gr8 job👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
#69
awesome update really loved it finally they confessed n the kiss..awww bt I'm sad tht its ending waiting fr the epilogue p.s. strt a new stry, would love to read more abt KR
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Posted: 9 years ago
#70
jaldi se epilogue do
and also the prologue of a new KR story

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