KR FF 'Forever... Jabtak Saans hai' part 7 on pg 12

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Meghna

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Posted: 10 years ago

#41

nice update... Feeling really said for rey... He is doing so much n kria is taking everything in a wrong way...

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Kanchi..

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Posted: 10 years ago

#42

Read all the parts

Its awesome

Luvd it

Thnx for the pm

Waiting for the nxt update

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Sunaina

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Posted: 10 years ago

#43

Awesome... continue soon

N sorry for the late reply!!!!!!!

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ShiriHoonMain

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Posted: 10 years ago

#44

Part 5

Next Morning
Rey entered his room and saw Kriya trying to get off the bed.
Rey: tumhe uthne ki zarurat nahi hai.. mene tumhara breakfast yahin manga diya hai.
Kriya: I m feeling better now.
Rey: but u still need rest.
Kriya: Mujhe apne friends k saath breakfast karna hai.
Rey: f9..
He was going to hold her in arms...
Kriya: Rey, mujhe tumhari shakal nahi dekhni hai...
Rey: In that case Kriya..., tum meri pith dekho!
Before she could understand anything, he kept her hands round his neck and holds her up by his back.
He gets her down like this. Friends see this. They laugh teasingly. Kriya feels uncomforting and Rey smiles.
Sharon: how r u feeling now?
Kriya: better.
Suddenly Rey's phone rings.
Rey: hello! Oh yes. What today? But.. no no, not at all that's a great news. I'll be there. Ok. Thnx. Bye!
He puts his phn down and looks at friends. Rey raises up his eyebrows.
Rey: Sorry guys...
Simmi: sorry for what?
Rey: it's a imp. Meeting, I have to leave for London today only!
Nil: what? But yaar...
Sharon: guys, work comes first! Rey, come back soon.
Rey: as soon as I can. Thank u so much.
Kriya: tumhara bag packed hai.
Rey smiles and goes to room. Swaron follow.
Rey opens the cupboard and gets out the bad. Puts some files in t.
Swaym: Rey.. tune 1 baar b bag check nahi kya?>
Rey: why should i? Kriya ne pack kia hai... sab sahi hoga.
Sharon: tum dono ki yeh relationship hamari toh samajhme nahi aata.. ek taraf ek dusre se itna ladte ho. Aur dusri taraf ek dusre par blind believe?
Rey: tum samjhogi b nahi... kyun ki aaj tak iss rishte ko main b nahi samajhpaya hun.
Swayam: Rey... jab tum dono ek dusre se itna pyar karte ho.. toh khatam kyun nahi kar dete yeh sab?
Rey: haan Swayam.. sayad sab kuch khatam karne ka waqt aa gaya hai.
Sharon: what do u mean?
Rey: nothing. I m getting late. Lets go.
Downstairs
Rinni: Kriya, tumhe pehle se pata tha k Rey landon jaa rha hai?
Kriya: nahi toh...!
Simmi: phir tumne bag kyun pack kiya?
Kriya: wo actually unka program aise hi sudden ban jata hai.. so its my duty...
ShaReYam comes.
Vicky: lo.. aa gaye.
Rey: ok guys.. main chalta hun.. kal sham taka a jaunga..
Everyone greets him luck.
Kriya: (in mind)[ looking in his eyes] all the best Rey, I hope tumhari yeh deal tumhari life ko aur success kare.
Rey: (in mind)[looking in her eyes]: aaj main apne life ki sabse badi deal karne jaa raha hun Kriya.. yeh deal sab kuch change kar dega... yeh deal hum dono ki life badal kar rakh dega... Forever!

To be continued

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Shirisha

Edited by ShirishaTeddy - 9 years ago

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nikitashaKR

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Posted: 10 years ago

#45

Tina late update aur who bhi itna chota plz update next part soon

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sowiee

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Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#46

Awesome.update...

Pls do continue...

Can't wait to know what's the deal???

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deepasubhash

@deepasubhash

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Posted: 10 years ago

#47

Such an amazing updt. Bt lit short tha. I'm a new reader and i read al d chapters in one stretch. Its so interesting. Plz pm me whn u updt nxt part. I would luv to read this