a new fresh story....mabye a fanfic....

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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey guys i'm making a fanfic😳 this is my first ever time i have done something like this.and this time the characters are all changed by nature. i hope you don't get angry or upset that the dmg characters are changed like this and i'd like to say thank you to maya because she is the one who sort of insipired me. this fanfic is a bit funny and romantic . basically all emotions mixed together:

THE CHARACTERS

Dr. Armaan : A very handsome😳 boy and very intelligent. girls go fida on him but he thinks they are just a waste of time. anyone would like to have him as a damad😆 or a perfect husband😳 . he has become a new intern in the sanjeevni hospital and he hopes that he would do well as a doctor and that his future will be bright. in other words studious. he like playing basketball😉 and singing😕 he's a very talented chap and very accomplished ( see what i mean by damad)

Dr. Ridimaa: Finding out that Angali ( whose going to come later) is not her sister she gets really upset. she thinks to herself that she has no identidy😭. she changes completely into a sweet simple girl into a girl who doesn't care about anything ( basically she's changed like angie but don't worry) she pretends she's bad because she trying to hide her sadness inside she is really the samr old ridzy😉 during this time she becomes an intern in the sanjeevni hospital and deep down she tries her best to be a good doctor but doesn't show it. but then Dr. Armann gets in her way...........😉

Dr Angali: she is Ridimaa's older sister . when she found out that she not angali gupta she changed herself too. ( now she's become like ridzy😆 ). a sweet simple girl trying her best to be a very generous doctor as a new intern in sanjeevni. but inside she's still the same angie ( i swopped them two around😆) now lets wait and see will she be able to hide her true self and ridz too......

Dr.Atul: a complete lover boy . he always tries to see if he can woo any girl. he thinks he's good looking but really girls don't care about him. he becomes a new intern in sanjeevni hospital. he came there because he thought they would be lots of nurses he can woo😆😆. they are just his time pass. but deep down he does care about other people and how he would treat them as a very kind doctor just like his dad (😭 too emotional) he does but then one nurse steals away his heart....... guess who.......... NURSE......... LOVELY😆😆

Dr Sapna: a very stubborn girl. when she finds out that her parents want her to become a new intern in sanjeevni hospital she was shocked ( changed he oppositley😆) she wanted to get married as quicky as she can to her drem boy . but her parents won't let herbe married . she does find the boy of her dreams................... Dr. Armaan😆

Dr. Shubanker: a boring doctor in Sanjjeevni hospital his life is so somple. he wants to do something exiciting in is life. slowly the most biggest thing happens in his life. he falls in love with the beautiful Dr. Sapna😆. she is stubborn but she is his dream girl and he always dreams that she will get married to her some day😉

Dr Kirti: studious doctor and very strict but she the five interns get on her nerves . she doesn't understand what to do. some play pranks on her.😆

wait and find out what tricks she tries to play on them.....................😉

hope you like the characters..........thanks do comment😛

p.s this story is completely imaginative please don't take it seriously😃

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mannyz_1 thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
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😭 😭 😭 no replies pleae reply 😭
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😭 😭 😭 no replies please reply 😭 😭
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Posted: 18 years ago
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aw klw FF plz continue ... ha dis is DIFFERENT ff klw 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
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yeah thats soooooo much i'm so happy 😛 😛 😃
thanks this is the first time i've done this i'm so happy
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Posted: 18 years ago
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it is supposed to be a bit same like the serial i just swapped the characters ummmmm how shall i change it? 🤔
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Posted: 18 years ago
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sounds interesting plz continue soon n don't take really long writing the next part😳

Love Iram😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
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ok i won't try and disappiont you lot here its goes my first go.............. i'll try to make it a bit comic


dr.armaan enters the sanjeevni hospital and chants
'ragupati raghav raja ram pati thapavan sita ram hey baghvan mujhe ek ache doctor banado'
he touches the entrance with his hands and respects .
as soon as he walks he hears singing ........
its dr.atul singing to lovely
'jadoo teri nazar kushbo tera badaan tu haan kar ya nar kaar tu hain meri lovely ' and runs like mad after her.
armaan is 😕

meanwhile ridimaa wears her jeans and top and enters too and then bumps into armaan. they both fall down . ridimaa: tum deckar nahi chal sakte kya
armaan looks at her.they stand up. he sees that her hairs all messy she look awful .poor girl he thinks
armaan: aap yaha ki patient hai kyan
ridimaa : patient! no way mai toh nayi intern hon
armaan lookes at her apperance thinking to himself ' who on earth made her a doctor' he grins to him thinking but i'm more smart.
dr sapna enters too on her phone
sapna: ha mama ha tum phikar mat karna mein sab patients ki dhain rako gi'
atul, ridimaa. and armaan go to the locker room.
ridimaa: di kaha hai?
angie comes with a pink churidar
' hi everyone mera matlab hai namaste' says angie folding her hands.
dr kirti comes in and says
'welcome sanjeevni mein app ka swagat aap log ek baat samjna ke yeh ek hospital. you lot are young thats why explainnig that this is a serious work place you shouls do nothing but work here'
armaan listens carefully
ridimaa: yeh yeh jo bhi hon can we go now?
dr kirti gets angry
' DR. RIDIMAA! aap ko yeh bhi nahin pata ke bhado se baat kaise ki jahti hain . your better mind your tongue'...........

soz guys g2g dmg coming hope you liked the part i tried my best bye thanks 😊

Edited by mannyz_1 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey Manny... this is cool.... different...
please go on... I'll be here reading 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
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lol 😆 😆 it wuz pretty funnie...i cant imagin Anjie in a churidar Armaan prayin n Ridz talkin lik dat 😆 😆 😆

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