ViDha Special::Teri Meri..Teri Meri Kahaani..

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Teri meri teri meri kahaani

Ik daastan nayi purani

Chori chori yeh kahani chali hai

Theheri thi jo tere aa jaane tak

No matter how hard the world tires, these two always get a peaceful time, alone, that they can spend with each other...enjoy each other's little little things...and the same goes again...They were all left alone...walking aside of each other, though they had a huge crowd surrounding them, but none of them existed...it was all about each other for them...about exploring each other more...they stopped by the hidden , buried desire of her...the colorful bangles, who are just waiting for her, to come out of that lost world, break herself free, grab them and enhance their beauty by wearing them on her hands...symbolizing the new life showing up doors for her to enter and let the new opportunities shower her with happiness...and the key to that door is standing next to her..compelling her to hold his hand, walk into the doors to a new beginning...compelling her to face it and not to turn her back to it as usual...but he fails again...she still is keeping hold of the harsh past, a dead memory which is tagged her reality...he realizes its not the time...he needs to break her free slowly..step , by step, un-tie her...He switches over to the other desire...the one that can be fulfilled for the moment...





Har disha rastaa naya

Har kahin raahein nayi nayi

Meri raahein tujhe paake

Tujhpe hi tham gayi

And they head towards every girl's weakness...paani puri...even reading this gets the girls watery mouth..what could have been better temptation to get a small glimpse of the real dhani out today...viplav hits a bulls-eye and provoked her to enter into a competition with him...competition, just an excuse, to check that to which limit can she free herself with such a small thing...they get into a little cute faceoff...the spice running through eyes, filled with satisfaction and joy...their determination to win over each other, bringing parts of her confidence out, making her more comfortable...even before she could reach her limits, he lost it...proving yet there is lot more of her to be explored...but this win was of both of them...he won, as he managed to make her smile, make her enjoy, make her forget the bad...and she won, not only because she won the competition, but also as her newly developed faith goes stronger...she don't want her newly found friend, to loose ever, and she will not let him loose...
Finally they have accepted each other's flaws, qualities, and want to fulfill the missing gaps of each other's lives...he takes another step towards it by initiating his efforts to introduce her to the so called modern language...

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pj1519 thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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SMILES
HUGS
SMILES AGAIN
OH MY GOSH
THIS IS SO PRETTY
Guruvishva thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow Roops wonderful yaar 👏👏
Just loved the lines 😳
Lovely lines on ViDha😳
Please do write more 🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago
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lovely post roopal very nicely written , you put their emotions in a beautiful way, they both won, they both accept each other for what they are a little joker yet kind hearted young man, and an angelic young women who isn't aloof by choice she had to become that to build a shield around herself for society's sake.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: pj1519

SMILES
HUGS
SMILES AGAIN
OH MY GOSH
THIS IS SO PRETTY


😳

Thank u pj(hugs)
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Guruvishva

Wow Roops wonderful yaar 👏👏

Just loved the lines 😳
Lovely lines on ViDha😳
Please do write more 🤗


OMG vishwa this time😲

Thanks a lot dear...(hugs)
Lolz this was a comeback, m Deffo gonna continue now😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: tahera57

lovely post roopal very nicely written , you put their emotions in a beautiful way, they both won, they both accept each other for what they are a little joker yet kind hearted young man, and an angelic young women who isn't aloof by choice she had to become that to build a shield around herself for society's sake.


Thank u very much dear (hugs)

Nd perfect titles for ViDha by u 👏
Joker yet kind hearted young man, angelic young woman..
The sound beautiful 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey Roopal, that was so beautiful! Was missing your posts, good to see your bang on comeback post on our dear ViDha! Absolutely loved your description on their cute Golgappe tiff!😆 Great writing⭐️
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Great post..Loved how you analysed vidha scenes..
Do write more..😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
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These two scenes highlighted the acceptance, rejoice and mutual understanding between them.. How beautifully expressed in your lines.. Keep on writing dear Roopal.. Loved reading it..!!

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