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ShyNomad

@ShyNomad

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Posted: 10 years ago

#11

OMG Loveleen...loved this so much!!!

It was beautiful, the emotions, the self-doubt, the longing, the love-making...

I will be back with more on this for sure...❤️

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loveleen3

@loveleen3

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: ronitfan
Loveleen!
Even in my wildest dreams, I would not have imagined the preview was part of this amazingly beautifu land unique piece.. aww the poor babe that Ragini is.. worrying about her super gorgeous husband not finding her attractive! And him thinking she's not into him nowadays! They are so adorable, so beautiful!😳

And you wrote it all so well.. especially the way he calmed her down and reminded her how much he loved her and claimed her again <3 LOVE LOVE LOVE!

😳

🤗

You ROCK!

Sukhi! 🤗
I am so happy that you liked it! 😊
I had written the ending first for this one. I had an idea of what I would write in the beginning, but I was sure of how I would like to end it. 😃
And yes, both of them are adorable, lovable, sweet and cute.. I am so going to miss them!

You please update "Your Place or Mine" ! 😳

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neiralove

@neiralove

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: loveleen3

Shikhaaa! Come back sooner! :D

Thank god you liked it! :D

I LOVED it!
Comments tomorrow for sure dear--sorry!

P.S. I love how everyone is writing love-making stories now...☺️

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loveleen3

@loveleen3

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Posted: 10 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: ShyNomad
OMG Loveleen...loved this so much!!!
It was beautiful, the emotions, the self-doubt, the longing, the love-making...

I will be back with more on this for sure...❤️

Nidhi!
Come back sooner! 😃
You know show's Ragini is confident not just in her character, but her beauty too. And then Pallavi is gorgeous! She carries herself perfectly! 😊
So, I wrote this but I'm not sure of something like this could have happened in the show. Or maybe this is something that they would never talk about! 😆

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roneeta

@ronitfan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: loveleen3

Sukhi! 🤗
I am so happy that you liked it! 😊
I had written the ending first for this one. I had an idea of what I would write in the beginning, but I was sure of how I would like to end it. 😃
And yes, both of them are adorable, lovable, sweet and cute.. I am so going to miss them!

You please update "Your Place or Mine" ! 😳

Yesss me too..

Going to miss them tons and tons!! But they'll always be in our special place.. our hearts.. 😳

Will update soon dear!

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ShyNomad

@ShyNomad

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: loveleen3

Nidhi!
Come back sooner! 😃
You know show's Ragini is confident not just in her character, but her beauty too. And then Pallavi is gorgeous! She carries herself perfectly! 😊
So, I wrote this but I'm not sure of something like this could have happened in the show. Or maybe this is something that they would never talk about! 😆

But see this is EXACTLY the kind of situation that any couple would go through...they skipped or glossed over so many important milestones in their lives together. At times it was like they were strangers rather than ex spouses with so many kids.

And yes 100% to how PK carries herself, always with dignity and confidence despite the presence of a supposedly sexier bombshell vying for N's attention (no offense to the actress that plays Nivi, she is pretty as well). But even someone who looks like Ragini has insecurities, magnified by hormones and twins.

This was a beautiful look at both of their insecurities coming into play, and how desperately they both just wanted to be together but R couldn't bear the imagined look in his eyes. Her cravings, her tears at how unattractive she felt to him were all so real and well done.

And of course I loved how he proved to her how beautiful she still was and truly how much he desired her, even more so now that she was carrying his children. ☺️

Of course once they started they couldn't stop 😆😳

Thanks for this very mature (and mature 😉) look at N/R's life together...it was hot but also sweet and all so real. ❤️

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neiralove

@neiralove

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#17

Loveleen darling, I don't know how you do it! The way that you tie the romance in with the emotions; Nachiket's feeling of abandonment and Ragini's insecurities and finally his making it all up to her and telling her how beautiful she really is... ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ GENIUS!

Still stunned, Nachiket gazed into her angelic face.

"I'm your wife," she murmured. "Stop looking at me like I'm an alien."
No, Ragini! Angelic, not alien!

"Feel my love through my lips," he pressed his lips on the inside of her wrists. His lips moved up her slender bear arms erotically.

Heart = mush ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

And how he made her leave the lights on! 😳 Awww! ❤️

The expression in his eyes was best described as tender love, appreciation, pride, and raw desire. The desire riding inside her, like a phoenix, reflected in his charcoal eyes.

This description...darling I'm just Your choice of words is just so perfect!

Don't you dare undo a single word of this beauty! You little ball of perfection, you! 🤗