Poetical ideas on the meeting of ViDha's hands and the chat of Vipu.

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Hi my dear people ,I am back yet again with my poetical verses,this time ,I have got suggestions from fellow people buddies in terms of pouring out my poetical ideas on two wonderful scenes of ViDha .
Those are
*Dhani giving her hand to Viplav and Viplav's smile marked a wonderful moment
*The next one is the chat walla Vipu making everyone happy.
These two were suggested by Stranger2Rose and Hammie respectively ,thank u soo much people for ur suggestions,I hope I will do a decent job in marking ur suggestions.
POEM 1# AN ODE TO THE REJUVENATED RELATIONSHIP.
The birth of a new born flourishes happiness to the world,
A revolution can create great chaos as well as innumerous useful transformations to the world,
A life that is full of compromises and dedications promotes joy to this world,
These trances can make people get influenced and exposed to different scenario in this wonderful world,
But here comes a flower a newly blooming flower which lost it's happiness in it's early stage of blossom,
It was rejected as per the normal concepts of materialism and plucked way before it's time of blossom,
But the time it reached the ground,their was a pot of water,which by mistake landed inside the pot,
The pot provided the flower with proper nourishment and the mighty power of the water made the flower bold and beautiful and the flower was so happy with the pot,
The pot in a matter of few days became attracted to it's flower and was proud and amazed of the flower ,which by now is a fully developed one,
The fragrance of the flower attracted the pot a lot and it began to care so much for it's lovely one.


One fine day the flower in the pot was about to drain because of a human who poured jugs of water into the pot ,
The flower screamed with fear,while the pot's heart trembled with the longing of forbidding its lovely one,
It attained it's strength and I began to create cramps on it's body to rescue the innocent lovely one,
While it was involved in that process,it was tangled in a situation of destroying itself,
While the flower who can't tolerate the pain of it's saviour gave an helping hand by jumping out from the pot by gathering it's strength all alone by itself.

The hands of the rose meets with it's pot,
And there flashes the rejuvenate smile in the eyes of the beholder the pot,
That smile had everlasting reasons for a lifetime,
A relationship,a journey for lifetime,
The smile of the pot can attract anyone in this world,
But it's heart longs only for it's sweet blossomed lovely flower ,
This relationship becomes more rigid and sticky as a fevicol,
From here it is a rejuvenation because,it symbolises purity of love in it's unique form which going to make these two stick together and act as a lovely fevicol,
Can life become a burden for the flower or the pot,
Never ever the mark of revolution signifies the happy intro to the mesmerizing affection of the flower and the pot,
Many personifications hit me with a stick,
As,I have glorified the metaphors to it's peek,
The metaphors have them attained divinity by resting on the lovely humans,
And the serene combo of the flower and the pot defines refine qualities to the folks of the world that is to the humans,
My people by now you would have guessed the identity of the flower and the pot,
Oxymoron and hyperbole are actually feeling bad for not employing them with this innocent pair,
Even the dictions and similes get quite shy of this lovely pair,
All the literary devices on the whole tend to reveal the holy people's bonded relationship,
Who is none other than the flower born Dhani and the covering pot Viplav's pure caring relationship.


POEM 2# CHAT VS CHAT WALLA.
Chat itemsalways are delicious,
But have we ever noticed the chat walla here is a one who is in a tough competition with his chat because he is more delicious,
Omg! ! I don't have plans of proposing open flirts for the chat walla,
Which ,I normally do while looking at him in the TV walla,
Delicious here holds multiple and innumerous perspectives of the ravishing chat walla,
His chat was so hot with a lot of spices added to it,is that too hot than the chat walla,
Hot in the sense the warmth the love,unique care for the fellows of Ashram and the longing for their smile,
The chat may bring smile to the one who eats it but the chatta walla's smile was the most beautiful smile,
It is because it was the smile that came out of a satisfaction,
It was bringing joy in the hearts of the Vidhwas as we can crown it as hearty satisfaction,
The drooling effect created by the chat made everyone happy,
While Dhani accepting and praising the chat made the chat walla happy,
The mirchi pointed towards the chat walla made him so mirchi walla,
He went to pounce on it like an angry walla.
A chat that was served as a mixture of Allos with lot of spices and chatpatha masalas,
But as the hands of the chat walla made magic that is was a chat that was served with the combo of joy ,faith ,love ,sarcasm,satire and emotional masalas,
Is that the chat or the chat walla the greater in bringing happiness to Vidhwas be profounded as a debate,
Dulaari,will refuse to accept neither of them and say let's clear the debate,
While if the question is transferred to Sita Mai she will profess that the chat as well as the chat walla are volunteers for spreading joy ,
If the question is claimed to Dhani about the volunteer of joy,
Her answer would be one and only chat walla alone,
Because she has understood ,her heart swears that Vakil Saab can only make them happy and he is their saviour risking his life for them alone,
As our Mother India itself who cares for other happiness alone has provided an conclusion to the debate,
The winner of the mighty mock epic is none other than our lovely chat walla who's disguise covers all the flavours he used in his chat according to Dhani can be proclaimed as the honourable winner without any debate.
I HOPE U PEOPLE ,LIKE IT AND ONCE AGAIN THANKS TO MY BUDDIES FOR THE TOPIC SUGGESTIONS😳😳


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bookmarked...
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thanks a Jenny truly delicious creations by you , the flower and the pot was beautiful, and the chaat drool worthy.
well done.šŸ‘šŸ¼šŸ‘šŸ‘ it's always great to read whatever you pen down but today i don't know which to choose to personally preferring one above the other...
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Originally posted by: tarun1234567

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Tarun busy bee u are I know it ,do complete ur work first ,I just love pics do make it first tarun.
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Wowww...wowwwšŸ‘šŸ‘
This is fantastic ; awesome ; brilliant 😳😳
As always you nailed it with beautiful lines šŸ˜›šŸ˜›
Thanks Rose & Hammie was suggesting so that We got such lovely poems šŸ˜‰
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Originally posted by: tahera57

thanks a Jenny truly delicious creations by you , the flower and the pot was beautiful, and the chaat drool worthy.

well done.šŸ‘šŸ¼šŸ‘šŸ‘ it's always great to read whatever you pen down but today i don't know which to choose to personally preferring one above the other...

ohh thank u soo much tahera dr,i am glad that u loved it😳😳
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Originally posted by: Guruvishva

Wowww...wowwwšŸ‘šŸ‘

This is fantastic ; awesome ; brilliant 😳😳
As always you nailed it with beautiful lines šŸ˜›šŸ˜›
Thanks Rose & Hammie was suggesting so that We got such lovely poems šŸ˜‰

My dear Sweety girl ,thanks a lot for ur beautiful comments chellam😃😃😳
Luv u loads dearšŸ¤—
ya they both deserve appreciation more than me for suggesting ,they r my muse.
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Originally posted by: pressu

Soo good dear😳

Thanks a lot di😳😳
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gr8 job di...😳😳am speechless once again di...šŸ‘
u r simply awesome...😳😳
in every poem u bring sm new essence...n as a result we all r left awestruck...😳😳

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Originally posted by: abshcool

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gr8 job di...😳😳am speechless once again di...šŸ‘
u r simply awesome...😳😳
in every poem u bring sm new essence...n as a result we all r left awestruck...😳😳

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Ohh thank u soo much Shruthi dear,šŸ˜›šŸ˜›ur comments are as sweet as u dear😃😳 and I am so happy to hear it from u my cute little sis😳😳

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