Poetical ideas on the meeting of ViDha's hands and the chat of Vipu.

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CarpediemRose

@CarpediemRose

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Posted: 10 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: tarun1234567
i think first poem is so superb...
wow jenny u excelled so much...
great piece of writing...
ViDha has driving u crazy😆

Thanks a lot dear Tarun for ur awesome comments😳😳

And ya ur right ViDha has made me drive crazy😆😆 such an awesome couple😳😳

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samanthana

@samanthana

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Posted: 10 years ago

#22

Wonderful poem👏👏👏👏👏👏

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kashish_777

@kashish_777

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Posted: 10 years ago

#23

I'm so sorry jenny...

Really sorry...was very busy, so couldn't reply...

Really sorry...maaf kar de...

And yeah, as usual, as i came back to forum, i was greeted by your lovely poems...

I don't have any adjectives left to ddescribe dear...

TheseaTheseare heavenly...

I loved them so much...

Wonderful...

Ab chal itni tareef karungi toh tu balloon ki tarah faat jayegi...lol...

You deserve all tareef, pagli...

Love you,

Pratiti

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CarpediemRose

@CarpediemRose

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Posted: 10 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: Hamlet53
helooo our poetess.. many thanks for both the poems.. the first one is a lovely poetic representation of dhani as a flower and viplav as the pot which holds the roots to the flower... the meeting of the palms reminded me of a scene and lines from Romeo and Juliet.."palm to palm,holy palmers kiss.."
the chat walla , gathering from the response of the forum is more tasty than the delights he shares.. lovely mouthwatering poem .. I am so pleased that you elevate the memorable scenes of vidha into equally memorable poems.. thanks for your enthusiasm that you put in your poems.. cheers for your noteworthy effort you put in spreading joy on the forum..
much love hammie

Hammie dr ,thanks a lot for the awesome comments 😳😳

And I must thank u once again for acting as my muse for me to develop my poetic insights on that particular aspect😳😳

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CarpediemRose

@CarpediemRose

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Posted: 10 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: samanthana
Wonderful poem👏

Thanks a lot dr😳

I am glad u liked it😳😳

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CarpediemRose

@CarpediemRose

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Posted: 10 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: kashish_777
I'm so sorry jenny...
Really sorry...was very busy, so couldn't reply...
Really sorry...maaf kar de...
And yeah, as usual, as i came back to forum, i was greeted by your lovely poems...
I don't have any adjectives left to ddescribe dear...
TheseaTheseare heavenly...
I loved them so much...
Wonderful...
Ab chal itni tareef karungi toh tu balloon ki tarah faat jayegi...lol...
You deserve all tareef, pagli...
Love you,
Pratiti

Pratiti dr,pls don't ever apologize girl,I just love u loads,ur my bestie, u can take ur own time to read my works dr,I just want ur suggestions for my work,that's it dr,I am glad u liked it a lot,love u dear.

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fatima rukia

@rukiaa

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Posted: 10 years ago

#27

i think i always late...😆 beautiful, fabulous, amazing, majestic...and so on..i really forget more praising words to describe your poems 👏👏...i think every time i praise you in the end still my words are less...😕 seriously you are a gem 🤗 ...both poems describe those scene beautifully...⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️..keep writing😳

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CarpediemRose

@CarpediemRose

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Posted: 10 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: rukiaa
i think i always late...😆 beautiful, fabulous, amazing, majestic...and so on..i really forget more praising words to describe your poems 👏👏...i think every time i praise you in the end still my words are less...😕 seriously you are a gem 🤗 ...both poems describe those scene beautifully...⭐️..keep writing😳

Rukiaa dr u are not late at all whenever u give me ur comments, I became more boosted and powerful,thanks a lot for the awesome comments😳