SwaSanians Peep In

Hey guys... Need your opinion and suggestions...
So the video below is a teaser of the VM.. I am working on... Its not turning out as I want .. I am blocked @ where I should add Swara POV and how...I will be most grateful if you guys will help me.
Or is it not worth it.. I should scrap it..?? Please give your input..

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dcOJvfRmg14[/YOUTUBE]

Nityah, please do continue.🤗

wow looking forward to it!! do cont :) its really good!! it ll b like Sansker ll try to harm & swara ll get to knw & shw the right way & then they ll b friends :)) isnt it ??

The teaser looks promising. You could include where Swara shouts that he might have never loved anyone in his life and doesnt know the pain of separation. Swara trying to identify who is giving her yhe drugs snd wanting to stop the marriage. The temple chase scene where SwaLak try to find Sanskaar..

Originally posted by: leelaa9

Nityah, please do continue.🤗

🤗🤗 Thanks Leela... I will then... 😳

Originally posted by: -Liana-

wow looking forward to it!! do cont :) its really good!! it ll b like Sansker ll try to harm & swara ll get to knw & shw the right way & then they ll b friends :)) isnt it ??

Thank you... 🤗 Its actually SwaSan journey VM... how the got to the point where they are today... The place where I am blocked is when did Swara suspected Sanskaar that he is just pretending?? 😕 Is there certain event when she got doubt on him?

Originally posted by: bgscribe

The teaser looks promising. You could include where Swara shouts that he might have never loved anyone in his life and doesnt know the pain of separation. Swara trying to identify who is giving her yhe drugs snd wanting to stop the marriage. The temple chase scene where SwaLak try to find Sanskaar..

If you are portraying the change as well then, the hospital scene where Sanskaar asks Swara to reach wedding venue instead of crying on the hospital bed.

Hope this helps!!

Thank you so much...🤗🤗🤗 it definitely will help me... when is temple chase scene?? I havent watched the show from the start

Originally posted by: ll_megha_ll

Wow...

Yaar continue kt

😳😳 Ok I am continuing re... 🤗

Noo please do continue! 😊

Originally posted by: ros_aavir

Noo please do continue! 😊

You could include the scene where Sanskaar says 'Swara' in a monologue and she turns around and asks if she was called. Swasan always had a connection. 😳

I believe Swara started suspecting Sanskaar after RagYa engagement was stopped when Shomi fainted and Sanskaar started to get really irritated. Swara turns her head around and gives him a look when they're all leaving MM. I kinda watched the show on-off then, so forgive me if I'm wrong. 😊

Thank you so much dear... 🤗gonna find this scene then... 😳