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Sorry to say, after 1 yr of the show the worst writing of the storyline I'm seeing is with this Maha sangam crapđĄ I don't know about TEI, but I can vouch for a fact that with this idiotic decision of the channel JR has reached a terrific low in terms of story line with illogical editing, patch work and fillers.
Just because they have to integrate TEI and JR, they just make Sid & Kunj - Twinkle meet out of blue without any reasoning or justification. I really want to know whether it is the TEI CVs or JR CVs or ZeeTV people writing the integration scene which sucks big timeđĄ Without context they add it anywhere and everywhere.
For eg. the Sid - Kunj - Twinkle chunri scene.. Was that supposed to be before Roshni going to jail or after??đ„± I'm sure they shot the scene just like that, added it somewhere, w/o thinking Roshni is in jail. B'coz Sid was very normal and Twinkle who was very concerned while giving CD didn't ask a word about Roshni being in jail. I feel really feel bad for Ravi, b'coz for the first time in the history of watching JR I didn't find his acting convincing.. I'm sure he himself don't know where a scene goes and which scene comes after whatđ„± The entire Sid's role is made a mess with this Maha crap and he is made to do extra hard work which adds nothing to JR.
Out of nowhere Sid meets twinkle or Kunj.. Atleast give some explanation where Sid is roaming around. Complete loophole in writing. Yesterday Kunj said Sid was his friend. They met the previous day and today again when they met, it is like " what a pleasant surprise??"đČ Like they are meeting for the first time in yearsđ Then what was Sid doing with chunri, was it Roshni's?? I didn't get the head and tail of that sceneđđThen twinkle's dialogue about how much Sid has done for herđČ What has he done for her?? Its just sometime back Sid met her during Chunri sceneđ
This is one of the most unconvincing way someone can write a storyđ„± No comments about the HADDI scenesđĄ and other useless drama..JR gets 15 mins and out it 10 mins is just pure useless đ€ą
P.S The Roshni torture scene was nicely done by Niađ It was a disgusting scene but she did it wonderfully.. Other than that the entire episode wasđ€Ź By the end of Mahasangam, the remaining viewers of JR too would be lost and most probably the TRP would go below 1, if they write the episodes like thisđ€ą
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