#2 FF: 'Love Starts After Marriage' pt.33, pg.143, dt.25/12 - Page 30

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: karamukku

Hi dear, when r u going to give us next update? I am addicted to this story. I come here every now and then to see if you updated. And fills my hunger by reading other comments and ur replies... Please update soon, if possible... U have increased our curiosity and interest to that level, that it has become very difficult to wait... Love ur writing..



Aww... Thanks dear... U all are making me cry... I m having happy tears... Seeing the way u all love this stoey...
I simply dont know how to express my gratitude for appreciating me wholeheartedly... Ur words means a lot... Its actually a driving force to write better...

Hehe... Even i m addicted to this story... Thats y i didnt end this story... I m planning to stretch this story... As long as possible... As i love this couple so much... I have planned a lot for this couple... So much of funny crazy romantic loving updates r up ... I want show their true love side from now on... & thats mainly to make u all happy...

Glad to know u come often just to check i have updated or not & i do notice u check my replies... Thanks... I will mostly reveal few upcoming scenes or suspense in my comment lol... Like the one u guessed abt all the parents playing along...

I was away from for three day... & today is my sister's bday... So i was busy all day... Couldnt write next update... I will write tonight... Then write some tmrw on my way to colg or whenever i get free time & will try hard to post tomrw as i hate to make u all wait for long...

Thanks dear... Love u too...
Edited by madhurish - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
the first which i like the most in this story is th
e age diffrence between rk and madhu .7 years .i like this caring rk and childish madhu .plzz updatee soon
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: madhurish



Sorry dear... I didnt write the update yet... I was little busy today as its my sister's bday... With all the partying i didnt gey time to write... I will write tonight & try to post tmrw... If i complete... So please wait a little longer... Thanks..

Hey its okay no sorry buddy enjoy first take your time and write!! A very very haaapy bday to your sister from my side !! May she get all the happiness !! So many birthdays in oct even mine too lol !!
Edited by shruthi14 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: leena45678

the first which i like the most in this story is th
e age diffrence between rk and madhu .7 years .i like this caring rk and childish madhu .plzz updatee soon


Thank u so much dear... For letting me know what u like in this story the most... It makes me feel that u r all really into this story... & like something abt this story... Thanks...
Yes... Even i like their age differnece... I always feel guys shld be little older than the girl... Then only the caring bond will form...
Glad u like this caring rk & childish madhu...
Will surely update soon dear... Thanks!!
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: shruthi14

Hey its okay no sorry buddy enjoy first take your time and write!! A very very haaapy bday to your sister from my side !! May she get all the happiness !! So many birthdays in oct even mine too lol !!


Aww... Thank u so much for ur wishes... I will surely convey it to my sis... I wish the same that my sis gets all the happiness in her life...

Thanks for understanding dear...

Oh wow... Ur birthday in this month... Great... I dont know when... Pls do tell me in ur comment... I will try to post a spl update of this story for u... Though i couldnt promise as i m really busy with colg works... But surely will try & also will wish u.. As u r one of my most fav readers... More than that u r like my little sis...
Edited by madhurish - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: madhurish


Aww... Thank u so much for ur wishes... I will surely convey it to my sis... I wish the same that my sis gets all the happiness in her life...

Thanks for understanding dear...

Oh wow... Ur birthday in this month... Great... I dont know when... Pls do tell me in ur comment... I will try to post a spl update of this story for u... Though i couldnt promise as i m really busy with colg works... But surely will try & also will wish u.. As u r one of my most fav readers... More than that u r like my little sis...

Aww that lil sis comment always makes me happy and it seriously feels nice !!
Well i thought u will guess from my username shruthi "14" yup my bday is on 14th of this month !!
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: shruthi14

Aww that lil sis comment always makes me happy and it seriously feels nice !!
Well i thought u will guess from my username shruthi "14" yup my bday is on 14th of this month !!


It does feel nice for me too..
I dont have little sis... But got so many here... U r all spl to me... Love u...

Oh yaar.. I missed it... If u asked me to guess... Then i would have crushed my brain to find this simple thing which is so evident from ur UN but that thought didnt come so i asked u directly...

So coming wednesday ur bday... Hmm... Should i delay & post the next update on ur bday?? Lol...
Well if i complete the update tmrw then i will post it tmrw itself & write one more update for u too... & post on ur bday... Lets see what i can do..

Anyways... Happy birthday dear (in advance)
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Posted: 9 years ago
Thanks for all ur likes & comments lovelies. You all made me smile.

Dedicating this part to - my virtual world little sister Shruthi / shruthi14 as her birthday gift...

Well her birthday is on 14 October but i dont know for sure i could post an update on that day... So I m posting & dedicating the update ready in hand... A advance gift...😆

But I will really try to post one update exactly on ur birthday too for u dear... If i fail then forgive me please... As i m really busy with college studies & intership.😳

Happy birthday dear (in advance)
I wish God grants all ur wishes.
Stay blessed & happy.😊


Part 21 - Partying or Parting??

(Rk's POV)

I walk to my room leaving my baby brat in the pool. I only left her there but not the first 'intense' kiss we shared. It's still lingering in my mouth. I am surprised to see this bold side of my Madhu. I know she is bold & brave & always 'ready to pull a fight' girl but when it comes to love, romance & intimacy, she is so innocent & naive. But now she has changed, I guess finally her romantic side triggered in. she really is in love with me, she really is ready to be my better half finally & that's what she is trying to prove by getting all touchy & kissy as she was scared of romancing her friend back the time we were together & not now. I guess trishna is one good tutor. I really enjoyed my baby brat's little seduction session in the pool. But... Gah! She made me wet by dragging me into the water. I need a shower. I asked Sultan to wait in my room but I couldn't find him. I wonder where the hell he has gone but I am glad too to not see him in my room as I don't want to answer any of his bullshit questions.

I step out of the bathroom after taking a quick shower & pull my closet wide open to take my cloths out, I didn't bother to wipe my body, I mostly don't do as I like my shirt clinging to my wet body showing my perfect fit abs as I f**king love girls drooling at me, but I never bother to give them two hoots, just love to tempt & tease them. I quickly pick my lenin white shirt & blue jeans & put it on. Before doing my center buttons & cuff buttons, I decide to close the wardrobe but I didn't do as I want to check few things in my drawer to make sure everything is in place when I was away from home & not using this room. I pull the drawer & my eyes instantly catch something special & my lips quiver up to a smile. I take out the precious thing in my hand, well, its a pacifier, of course it's my madhu's. I love collecting... surely not STEALING... just collecting small small special things of hers which she loved the most & surely this pacifier is one among them as you know she was a cry baby. I chuckle at the thought. I could open a mini 'Madhu's museum' with all the things I have collected all these years. I don't even know why I collected all these things, may be this was my hobby like few have stamp & coin collection as one or it was my love.

Well, I got this pacifier exactly on this day, on Madhu's birthday but 20 years back, on her first birthday. So yeah, Mr. pacifier do have a little story. You can never see my baby without this pacifier in her mouth when she was a baby. Her cute baby pink lips will always be hidden behind this damned buttefly shape pacifier. Only at the time of feeding her mom forcefully pull this out of her mouth & make her eat some semi liquid food. I loved to play pulling this thing out from her mouth & make her cry. Gosh! She screams bloody murder if I do so. On her first birthday she looked like an angel dressed in ivory colour fluffy silk gown. I was holding her & making her to pose for the photos & I hate the thing in her mouth so i pulled it & threw it away but she didnt cry immediately as she was so excited & curious seeing the flash coming from the camera & then at the time of cake cutting she started crying, missing her beloved pacifier, i dont know where exactly i threw it so i couldnt find it easily, it hurt me so much to see her crying inconsolably that too because of me, so i thought to do something, i took the cake cream with my index finger & inserted it in madhu's mouth & there she stopped her cry as she got a replacement. My finger. Once finish licking the cream from my finger cleanly she giggled & gladly left it & also forgot her habit of using pacifier & thats how i got this pacifier as she didnt use it after that though i found it later & I tried to give it back to her.

"Rishuuu..." Madhu barges into my room pushing the door noisely.
"I m here" I shout back & within a second she is in my view dressed in floor length silver gown. The dress I approve as its elegant & fully covered. I also like her hair do. She has gathered all her hair to one side curling over her chest.
"Rishu, how I look?" She models her dress for me. She looks stunning but I m inthe mood to tease her.
"Yeah, you look like frankie roll wrapped in a silver paper" I smirk at her. She pouts cutely in disappointment.
"Can I go change then?" She asks.
"No. I just teased you, baby. You look so beautiful in this dress" I give her a quick peck on her cheeks & she blush adorably tempting me to kiss her hard.
"You didnt get ready?" She asks.
"Why should I get ready?" I ask acting innocent.
"My party is gonna start, Rishu" she reminds me as if I dont know. Well, lets test the water.
"I told u I wont come"
"Oh please. I know you will come. If not also I will drag you forcefully." She grins.
"No, Madhu" I deny her.
"Its my birthday, please" she looks with her pleading eyes.
"Madhu..." I start but she shushed me.
"I cant plead anymore. Come on get dressed like a good boy" she orders & starts buttoning up my shirt. Well, I dont like my hands kept waste so I put it on her waist & pull her little closer to me. She didnt struggle to escape out of my hold but smiles shyly.
"Show" she asks for my cuff links to be done. I hold out my left hand for her & then my right hand in which I m holding her pacifier.
"What are you holding?" She asks curious.
"Nothing" I say.
"Show me" she demands.
"Madhu, stop being a demanding baby" I admonish her.
"Its my birthday so u have to show me"
"Don't you think you have used that card so many times today?" This girl uses her birthday to the fullest by getting all the demands done.
"This is the last time I will use this card. Please" she swears pinching her throat.
I shake my head & walk past her.
"Rishuuu..." She screams but i turn quickly & put the pacifier in her mouth shutting her up & I start laughing.
"You look cute" I say & quickly take my mobile & click few pics. She doesnt react. She simply stares at me still holding the pacifier in her mouth. After a beat she comes to reality & pulls the pacifier out & examines it closely.
"What do you have to do with this thing?" She asks me.
"I dont have any business with that thing. It was used by u baby when you were a baby" I explain her. Her eyes went wide.
"You still have this?" She asks in surprise. I nod. She hugs me burying her face in my chest.
"Don't cry & wet my shirt" I warn her. She hits my arm playfully.
"Come" she tucks her hands in my arm & drags me to her house for her party & I didnt have the heart to deny her, besides I know what's comimg up for this evening.

"I m so happy, Rishu..." Madhu smiles as we walk in to her house. Omg! Such a huge crowd. Can't their parents throw a simple party for this little girl?
"Why?" I ask nonchalantly.
"For you coming to my party" her happiness is written on her face.
"I didnt come on my own... You are dragging me" I tell mockingly. Though I knew i would have surely attended her party even without her pestering me. I will never do things which will end up hurting her.
"Anyways, I m happy you are here with me" she says slipping her hand on my waist & hugging me sideways.
"Rishab!" Padmini aunty yells my name. I turn towards her with a smile.
"Try this. I made this specially for you" she says & stuffs some roll in my mouth not even letting me see what she put in my mouth.
Then I bite the roll & take the rest in my hand.
"How is it?" She asks.
"Frankie roll... Hmm... Super... I love it. Thanks aunty" I say but my eyes are placed on madhu & she is eyeing the roll in my hand wrapped in silver paper. The color of her dress. I smirk at her remembering the funny comment i made on her dress.
"You want?" I ask madhu. She shakes her head in no.
"I will come now." She says.
"Wait. Where you are going?" I ask.
"To change" she says pissed.
"Hey, you look really good in this dress" I assure her.
"Nope." She is adamant.
"Go!"
"You dont go, okay? Wait for me." She says. I nod & walk to my friends to chat with them.

(Madhu's POV)

"Stupid you, madhu. You should wear something which pleases, Rishu. You know its a big day for you both." Trishna scolds me.
"Trish, I really am clueless. I don't know what to wear" I says looking through my wardrobe.
"You like this?" I pull out a pink color knee length dress.
"Oh great. He will comment you look like a cotton candy"
I groan in frustration & show her a red wrap dress without strap. I myself know very well Rishu will hate to see me in this revealing dress.
"I guess orange will look good on me" I say to trish l.
"Yuck! You will look like half litre Miranda bottle" Trish smirks.
I pull out all my cloths from the cupboard & discarded them on the floor as I didnt like none of them.
I hear a knock & I open it with irritation ready to blast whoever it is but quickly I changed my facial expression & smile at Radha aunty.
"Madhu, busy?" Radha aunty asks.
"Um... No aunty. Just finding dress for me to wear for the party. Come in"
"Oh why? You look good in this dress." She says walking into my room.
"Yeah. But i want some thing even better than this"
"So u found one" she asks looking the mess i have created.
"Um.. No" I tell embarrassed.
"Hmm... Okay, here is my gift for you" she hands me a gift wrapped box.
I say thanks & quickly unwrap it & i smile seeing a beautiful white lacy saree with pink roses knitted on it. Its simple & elegant.
"Can i wear this now?" I ask her.
"Of course you can. Its yours." She smiles.
"Madhu, I will wait down. You get ready & come" Trish says & runs before i could stop her.
"Um... Aunty can you help me drape this? As I don't know how to do" I ask hesitantly.
"Sure, dear"
Quickly i rush to my changing room to remove my gown & put my saree blouse & in skirt. Then I call radha aunty in to the changing to help me with the saree.
"Madhu, you remember right? You surely will show my future bahu tonight nah? I don't want to delay as Rishu might change his mind & refuse for marriage" Radha aunty says. I blush looking myself at the mirror. Rishu will never take back his words. But I will never let him marry any other girl.
"Yeah. I do, aunty"
"Who is she? Tell me madhu. This suspense is killing me" she asks eagerly.
"Make a guess, aunty" I test her. Tell my name... Tell my name... Please, aunty. I mutter a silent prayer.
"Do I know her or Rishu knows her?" She asks for hint
"Yep. You both know her so well." I smile. She wonders tapping her chin with her index finger.
"I got it" she shrieks.
"Who?" I ask holding my breathe.
"Trishna, right?" Hearing that all the breathe evapourates from my lungs. Trishna??
"I really love, trishna. She is such a nice sweet girl. I know she will make my Rishu happy" she says excitedly. I stare at her through the mirror not even blinking my eyes.
"But Rishu?" No. Rishu will not agree to marry my friend. She is just a friend to him. I am his true love.
"I know Rishu won't agree. But you convince him. As he gave you the right to choose his wife. Even in this party we can announce Rishu & Trishna's engagement. I know even trishna will agree for this marriage. Who will not want to marry my son?" She asks. Her voice filled with pride. Yes. Rishu is a sweetheart. Probably he will be the world's best husband & I was lucky enough to have him in my life once but he go slipped through my fingers. I couldnt hold him & love him back the way he loved me. I really don't deserve a second chance. I really don't deserve his love. I am not the one for him. God! I messed everything.
"Perfect. You look beautiful" Radha aunty drapes the saree perfectly showing my curves.
"Thanks, aunty" I mutter. She kisses my cheek & tells me to come down. I simply nod. Before going down I open my cupboard & take out an important thing with which I will end things once & for all & give Rishu & myself peace.


I walk down the stairs & my eyes search for my Rishu. He is at the far corner chatting with his friends. I march straight to him & the moment his eyes land on me, he dazzles me with a heartmelting smile. I guess he is delighted to see me in saree.
"You look beautiful. Not that u didn't before, but now u look thousand times more beautiful" he says in a husky voice sending shivers down my spine. Then he plants a soft kiss on my temple.
"Thanks" I smile weakly & grip his arm tightly as if my life depends on it.
"Are you okay, baby?" Rishu asks me. I nod & lean my head on his arm.
"What's wrong?" He probes. He can easily say that something is bothering me.
"Look at me" he tips my chin up to face me eye to eye.
"I am sorry, Rishu" I whisper to him with tembling lips.
"For what?" He asks confused.
"For everything I put you through" I tell swallowing the lump on my throat & keeping my tears in bay.
"Baby, what's wrong?" He panics. I try to release myself from his hold but he grips me even harder by my waist.
"You are cutting me to the quick here. Just tell me whats going in your f**king head" he says gritting his teeth.
"You are my sunshine, my only sunshine..." I whisper near his ears & gently push him away from me.

... To be continued

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Well, what you all think about this update??😉

Filler update nah?? Nothing much in this update as u all expected right?🥱

Sorry, i couldnt write the party update fully. It was getting so long... I was so tired to type... That too from phone as my laptop went to coma again... Lol. Soon i will dispose it in trash can...😆
I couldnt use my dad's PC as he don't know about my writing stories in forum & all... I dont want him to find anyway... Lol... & my sis will nevef lend me her laptop... She is very possessive of her things...

Still i will type & update from my phone... As u all know i m crazy...😆
But dont expect regular update & do expect short updates...😆

Good or bad... Pls do share ur views & pls kiss the like button... 😃

Thanks to all in advance...😊

Love,
Sudha
Edited by madhurish - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
I commented before your pm I was stalking this page from long!!! Yippee I m first for first time!!!
Overwhelmed with your dedication and thanks for wishes love uouuu!!!
Sorry couldn't comment yesterday stupid exams!!
Coming to the update it was superb!!! Omg what is now madhu having in our hands? Again the confusion queen is back she took a nice decision by happily living with rk now radha's words is she again going to leave him? I think now our hero should take the matter in his hands tell his mom about madhu!!

I m just frightened what will she do trishna hope she is safe becoz crazy madhu can do anything!!
Lol a frankie roll hahaha I was literally imagining!! I thought that saree was given by rk to madhu but naah radha wanted her work to be done hun!!
Hey that pacifier scene was too cute how can someone be so passionate about somebody or love this much!!! this makes me love rk more and more!!
Thanks for pm
Edited by shruthi14 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
What was that thing that madhu carried in her hand?
I think magalsutra?
Update soon dear.
I guess rada playing prank wit madhu, will see

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