SwaSan TS : Jealousy (Part 2 & 3 updated on Page No. 11 & 12)

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SwaSan Three Shot (TS)

JEALOUSY

(SwaSan has filed for a divorce n court suggested them to stay together atleast for 6 months...so today swara is going to her sasuraal for next six months)

Swara-maa

Shomi-haan shona

Swara-maa main market tak jaati hoon thoda kaam hai

Shomi-jaldi a jaana...sanskaar ek ghante mein a jayega...aur scooty lekar jaana

Swara-ji maa

(she was riding her scooty n the market place was so crowded suddenly her scooty hit a girl...that girl falls on the ground)

Swara-m so sorry

Girl-its okk...my fault mainey dekha nhi

Swara-ohh god u hurted ur elbow...mera ghar pass mein hi hai aap a jaiye main aapka dressing kar doongi

Girl-no its completely fine

Swara-no plzz come na otherwise i'll feel guilty...ohh by the way I m Swara Gadodia

Girl-hii m Shonali Singhania

Swara-come

Shonali-yeah n thanks

(they both reached gadodia house)

Swara-maa

(shomi n dadi came)

Shomi-swara who is she n oh my god beta ur elbow

Swara-maa she is shonali n shonali she is my maa n my dadi...maa mainey inhe scooty se thok dia

Shomi-swara

Shonali-its okk autny n hii

Dadi-arey yaa chori ke haath se toh khoon nikal rha hai

Shomi-swara first aid box le aa

Swara-ji maa

(they did her dressing)

Shomi-toh beta r u from Kolkata

Shonali-no aunty m from delhi...came here to meet my frd...SK

Swara-toh mein kya kar rahi thi woh bhi luggage ke saath

Shonali-long story

Swara-toh suna do

Dadi-haan vaise bhi isey dusron ke phattey mein taang adaane ki aadat hai

Swara-daadi

Shomi-shonali beta tum batao

Shonali-okk my frd loves Kaju Katli...so i just went to buy that n i was calling him for last half n hour n that stupid not even picked up...oh god m in a huge trouble...Kanha ji what to do

Swara-sidha uske ghar chali jaao...uski family ko toh jaanti hogi na tum

Shonali-of course i know them...especially suju aunty ki toh main fav hoon

Swara-suju who

Shonali-his mom...but na mujhe unhey surprise dena tha...n that stupid

Shomi-tumhara call nhi receive kar rha

Shonali-yeah(suddenly her phone starts ringing) papa...excuse me

(she went from there n sanskaar entered)

Sanskaar-namastey maa namastey daadi maa(he touched shomi n daadi's feet)

Shomi n daadi-khush raho beta

Sanskaar-chalein swara

Swara(with an ignoring look)-hmm

Sanskaar-thik hai phir tum(suddenly he heard a voice)

Shonali-haan papa bas woh stupid gayab hai

(sanskaar was shocked...he starts looking here n there)

Sanskaar-Am I dreaming

Shomi-kya hua sanskaar

Sanskaar-kuch nhi

Shonali-haan papa khyaal rakhungi

Sanskaar-no no no no(he pinched himself)m not dreaming

Daadi-sanskaar beta key hua aisa kyun kar rha hai aur

(suddenly they heard a voice with full of excitement)

Shonali-SK

Sanskaar(he turned)-shona

(shonali just came n hugged him tightly n sanskaar too responded)

(swara felt weird...first he called her shona n then hugged her...but she ignored that feeling...but)

Swara(monologue)-wait I m shona na toh sanskaar kisi aur ko kaisey shona bula sakta hai

(they broke the hug n shonali hit sanskaar lightly on his chest)

Shonali-kahaan tha tu

Sanskaar-tu bta Kolkata kaisey aur shona tune mujhe kyun nhi bola...main tujhe pick kar leta na n by the way what r u doing here

Shonali(in a childish voice)-chot lagi...scooty se thuk gyi

Sanskaar(with a concerned voice)-oh my god shona yeh toh bohot jada lagi hai

Swara(monologue)-haan haan kyun nhi...behave toh aise kar rahi hai jaise mount everest se giri ho aur sanskaar toh chipke hi jaa raha hai

Sanskaar-dard ho raha hai...wait kon tha woh stupid jise scooty chalani nhi aati thi

Swara(with an irritated look)-galti se ho gya jaan bujhkar nhi thoka mainey

Sanskaar-tumne kiya

Swara-haan woh

Sanskaar(in a rude voice)-swara tum dekh nhi sakti thi

(swara wasn't expecting this)

Swara(with a hurt look)-galti se hua main toh bas

Sanskaar-kya tum bas swara...just look at her elbow...kuch ho jaata toh

Shonali-okk okk guys leave the topic n by the way sanskaar how do u know her

Sanskaar-she is swara my

Shonali-ur ex wife

Swara-not ex haan

(sanskaar looked at her with an amused look)

Swara-kya divorce nhi hua hai abhi

Shonali-toh ho jayega...aur main toh yeh maanti hoon ki kisi ke jaane se zindagi nhi rukti aaj nhi ho toh kya hua kal ex ban jaogi...simple kyun SK

Sanskaar-yeah she is right

(swara felt bad)

Shomi-accha swara tu apna samaan le a tumhe jaana bhi hai na

Sanskaar-chaley madam

(Swara was about to respond)

Shonali-bilkul ji

Sanskaar-swara tumhara samaan

Swara-laati hoon(she went to take her luggage)

Shonali-tune meri call kyun nhi receive ki

Sanskaar-tune call ki thi...sorry phone ghar par chutt gya

Shonali-waah

(in swara's room...she is talking to herself)

Swara-waah mainey konsa jaan bujhkar thoka tha galti se hua aisey rudely baat karne ki kya zaroorat thi(she had tears in her eyes)log na apne per par kulhaadi martey hain mainey to kulahaadi par per nhi sar de maara hai...that shonali nhi nhi shona(trying to mimic sanskaar)shona bohot jada lagi hai kya...my foot mujhse bhi poocha ki tum thik ho ya nhi

(ragini entered)

Ragini-swara R u alright

Swara-haan main thik hun

Ragini-pakka

Swara-haan

Ragini-nhi...ek salaah de tumhe hamari tarah zindagi mein aisi galti mat kar baithna ki jise sudhaar bhi na pao

Swara-matlab

Ragini-waqt rehte apni priorties ko samajh lo...kahin aisa na ho ki bohot der ho jaaye

Swara-ragini tum kya kehna chahti ho

Ragini-khud socho(she hugged her)wish u a happy n peaceful life a head swara...chalo sanskaar tumhara wait kar rahe hain

(they both came outside)

Shomi-sanskaar dhyaan rakhna

Sanskaar-ji maa

(they all goes to the car sanskaar opened the door...swara was about to sit when shonali came n sit)

Swara(with a what the hell look)-shonali

Shonali-arey khadi kyun ho baitho na

Swara-kahaan

Sanskaar-peechey bohot jagah hai

Swara-peechey

Sanskaar-haan kyun koi prolem hai kya(with a confused look)

Swara-nhi toh

(she go n sat there n sanskaar started the car)

(for the first time she was feeling ignored n somewhere in her heart she want his attention but alas today she isn't getting it)

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SwathyS thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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😆
I think swara needed this .
Well she is taking sanskar for granted.
Dont give any respect or value for him.
Servers her right😃😛😊

But still swara is his shona no other shona shonali manali ki sarurath nahi hai😡

Nice story
Keep writing will be waiting for next update
Edited by swa291 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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How cute 😆😳
Jealous Swara haan? Loved it 😛
Finally kuch kuch hone laga usse Sanskar ko Shonali ke saath dekh kar 😉
Lol 'Mount Everest se giri hai' 🤣
Awesome Sona 👏
Waiting for the next part 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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its just awesome love to see jealous Swara...i want to see this in show also
waiting for next part
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Smilelicious

How cute 😆😳
Jealous Swara haan? Loved it 😛
Finally kuch kuch hone laga usse Sanskar ko Shonali ke saath dekh kar 😉
Lol 'Mount Everest se giri hai' 🤣
Awesome Sona 👏
Waiting for the next part 😳

thanks preet😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Kushimian89

its just awesome love to see jealous Swara...i want to see this in show also

waiting for next part

thanks dear😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Loved jealous Swara..😛
"Mount everest se giri ho..." 🤣
Hope we get to see it in show as well...
Loved it totally...❤️
Continue soon Sonu...😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Asha122

Loved jealous Swara..😛

"Mount everest se giri ho..." 🤣
Hope we get to see it in show as well...
Loved it totally...❤️
Continue soon Sonu...😳

thanks ashu😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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it was awesome
continue soon plz
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Posted: 10 years ago
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aww amazing...👏
you r a superb writer. oh my god i just loved jealous swara. two shona..😆
won't be surprised if she tells sanskar to call her shona now onward...🤪
i m just wondering is it plannned by someone to create jealousy in swara's heart..??😛
whatever it is just loved this update...😳
i didn't understand ragini's part here. what did u plan for ragini? after truth is she with laksh or divorced..??😕
update next part soon...😳

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