Asya FF Sun Zara Chapter 4 , page 11 updated !!

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hi guys, this is my first ff on Asya , hope you enjoy it and please tell me if i should continue it or not , how it is and please hit the like button ⭐️

Sun Zara


Chapter 1

Asad was standing in front of the window of his cabin, he was wearing a black shirt with two buttons open and black trousers... he ws the owner of a leading company and zoya was her wife as well as an engineer there...

Kabhi jo baadal barse
Main dekhoon tujhe aankhein bharke
Tu lage mujhe pahli baarish ki duaa




It started raining and his eyes fell on zoya, She was standing out of the building ... and wws enjoyng the rain... Asad got lost in her and stood there watching her..lovingly ...after some time , He came back to his senses and realised it ws tme to leave the offce ... he left... but because his heart as now getting restless to see zoya ...


Tere pahloo mein reh loon
Main khudko paagal keh loon
Tu gham de ya khushiyaan
Seh loon saathiya





He came out of his office ... his eyes saw what he was wiling to see ... Zoya... enjoying the rain ... his steps lead towards her ... unkowngly, unwantedly its like he wasnt thinking at all... just doing...He was getting completely wet... He was right behind her ... The next moment he placed his hand on zoyas waist and pulled her towards him... She collided agaibst his chest ...

Koi nahi.. tere siva mera yahaan
Manzilein.. hain meri to sab yahaan
Mita de sabhi aaja faasle
Main chahoon mujhe mujhse baant le
Zara sa mujhme tu jhaank le
Main hoon kya?

At first zoya got a little surprise ... But then... She saw his ring and sheibstantly rexognized asad... Zoyas breath was getting faster ... Asad with his fingers moved her hair to the front of her shoulder... Zoya was feeling his hot touch inthecold rain and the touch made her shiver...he lowered his head and placed a kiss in her shoulder ...as gentle as a raindrop ...zoya closed her eyes ...


Woo.. aeee.. aeee.. aaa.. sathiyaa..
Ae ae... aa...

Zoya turned around ... Asad removed his hand of her waist... The rain slowed down ... And zoya looked at asad with her beautiful big eyes ... Asad was looking at her... Lost in hus eyes... They had an eyelock... Soon... Asad realized that they were getting wet and if they continue standing there ... Theyll both get ill...

Pahle kabhi, na tune mujhe gham diya
Phir mujhe, kyun tanha kar diya
Guzaare thhe jo lamhe pyaar ke
Hamesha tujhe apna maan ke
To phir tune badli kyun adaa
Yeh kyun kiya?

He took her hand in his and ran towards the building ... And entered their building... A classy building of a leading company ...With few lights on... And nobody there ... It was raining ... And it had started to thunder...

A. Bahar bahut baarish pad rahi hai zoya ... Hum... Aaj yahan hi ruk jate hain...

M. Ji mr khan ...

And she went towards the lift ... Asad was looking at her with eyes filled of love and affection... She looked back... In order to see asad ... Shhe found him staring at her... His eyes met with hers ...she entered the lift and till the lift door got completely closed he stood there staring at her... And she was looking at him ... With pain in her eyes... As well as love ... and went to the top floorof the building... The 10th floor... She entered his cabin... A cabin instead of walls ... There were windows ... Huge windows which were surroundinh his cabin... From where you could see all the buildings and places of bhopal... She walked towards on of the windows and stood there... Looking at the beautiful city of bhopal in a rainy night... Not everyone has the luckto wittness such abeautiful sight... She thought of the moment she spent with asad few minutes ago... That pull... That kiss... Those eyes... A smile drew on her face... But it didnt last long... She remembered how they got married...thise circumstances... And the person why they gotmarried...Razia...


Kabhi jo badal barse
Main dekhun tujhe aankhein bharke
Tu lage mujhe pehli barish ki duaa

Asad was still at the reception... With his eyes on a the transparant door ..staring at that beautiful rain... Which had poured on him and her few minutes ago... He wil never forget this beautiful moment ... Never...ever... A moment where they were so close... But then... He remembered how zoya must be feeling ... How they ended up being together ... His unconditional love towards her... He loved... More than his life... He loved her more than anyone in his life... Thats why...he had to take the step... He coukdnt let her life be destryed by razia...never... He loved her... But... He didt knew ... Whether ... She loved him or not...


Tere pahloo mein rah loon
Main khudko pagal kah loon
Tu gham de ya khushiyaan, sathiya..



guys please tell me if i should continue it or not andf hit the like button 😃⭐️


Index

Chapter 1 : page 1

Chapter 2

Chapter 3

Chapter 4




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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome Start Dear
Loved AsYa romantic scene wid one of my fav song
Why Asad married Zoya?
Razia ka kya connection hai?
Luks like Zoya hates Asad atleast in front of him
4m next time, try to write longer parts
Edited by angel_juhi04 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Cntinu soon.
I lk it.asya r marraid bt undr sm circumstances due 2 razia.
Both r in love bt didnt say each othr.
Interesting.cnt soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: angel_juhi04

Awesome Start Dear

Loved AsYa romantic scene wid one of my fav song
Why Asad married Zoya?
Razia ka kya connection hai?
Luks like Zoya hates Asad atleast in front of him
4m next time, try to write longer parts




Thank you do much 😃 ⭐️


Im glad you liked it 😃 ⭐️


This is the suspense of the story and it will be revealed as the story progresess hope you will like it

I have written a short update as i dont know if people are interested in my story or not ...

Thank you so much 😃 ⭐️
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Beautiful start dear
Really very interesting
Please continue soon 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Great start and nice song choice!!! Yeah, I think yuo should continue!!! 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow interesting start
So Asya married
Seems due to some circumstances
He loves her but don't know if she does and seems vice versa
Love the song my fav
Continue and thanks for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Very well written. Please. Continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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thanks for the comment 😃😃⭐️⭐️
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wonderful dear
Nd it was my favorite song
Totally loved it
U patriyoted very well

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