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Posted: 9 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: asifiqbalsh

Nice start dear
Asya married but in different circumstances. Liked their little romantic interaction. Asad loved her but didn't knew her feelings and same look like with zoya. Update soon plz. Do pm me if u can. Thanks



thanks a lot 😃⭐️⭐️

im glad you liked it 😃😃⭐️

i will send you pm 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: sasir

Loved it.
Very interesting..
Wanna read more..
Awesome.
Plz update soon...
Plz pm. Me



thanku so much 😃⭐️

will pm you and will update this night hopfully😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
#33

Originally posted by: Mehek25

Awesome start dear...

Very interesting story...
Please continue soon...
Thanks for pm Dear..


thanks alot 😃😃

im glad you liked it 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: heartbroken1



thanks a lot ⭐️

im glad you liked it ⭐️

will update maybe tonight 😃

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Posted: 9 years ago
#35

Originally posted by: Asheley

ufff such a lovely update

Asad love her

What this Razia do??

She is such a 😡 . I know she must try to harm zoya or she must be planned something because of that Asad may married Zoya

what would have happened??

Thanks for PM dear

Sorry for late reply



thanks a lot 😃😃⭐️⭐️

im really happy you liked it ⭐️😃

you know about the past of them when the story will unfold 😃⭐️
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Posted: 9 years ago
#36

Originally posted by: -Crazy4AsYa-

Awesome start

Made me curious to know the razia angle!
Continue soon



thanks a lot 😃😃⭐️⭐️

im really happy you liked it ⭐️😃

razia ... at least ... she brought asya togehter 😆😆😆😳

will update in a moment 😃⭐️
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Posted: 9 years ago
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thanks a lot 😃⭐️

im really happy you liked it ⭐️😃

will post he next chappy in a moment 😃😃⭐️😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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hi guys, sorry for the late update actually got a maths exam , heres the next chappy hope you enjoy it and please leave your feedback and likes 😃😃⭐️⭐️


Chapter 2

Asad stood there stading watching the rain ...

A. ( in his mand ) Zoya ... Tum kahan ho ? tum Mujhse itni door kyun chali gayi ?

He thought of messaging her

Asads Message :

Mrs khan ... Kahan hai ap ?

Zoyas phone rang .. She saw the message ... And wrote

Zoyas message

Mein 10th floor mein hoon mr khan ... Ap aajaye

She sent it ... Abd after sending she niticed that she had written aagaye ... When he didnt asked her if he coukd come or not ... She bit her lower lip

Zoya ( inhermind ) yeh meine kya likh diya . ...

Asads phone rang ...

He saw the message ... A slight smile drew on his face ... He went to 10 th floor

In asads cabin

Zoya ( in her mind ) woh pakka khudkw cabin aayenge... . I should leave before he sees me in his cabin

So she goes towards the door ...

Asads reaches the 10th floor and goes to his cabin. He opens the door and collides with Zoya ... They couldnt maintain their balance and zoya fell over asad ... With her head on his chest ... And asads hands on her lower back ... After the fall... Asad looked at zoya ... Her eyes were closed ... She was waiting to fall on the floor ... But instead ... Underneath her was a body ... She fell on asad ... She opened her eyes... And saw him... Asad was lost in her big beautiful dark briwn eyes... She saw him...

Zara zara behekta hain mehekta hain
Aaj to mera tan badan
Main pyaasi hoon mujhe bhar le apni baahon mein

Her eyes were staring at him... Their wet faces were bearly few inches away ... And their wet lips... With still few raindrops on them... Asad looked at her wet lips ... Zoya ... Unknowningly ... Was leaning forward towards asad ... Like she understood evrything... When she herself was getting closer to him ...


Zara zara behekta hain mehekta hain
Aaj to mera tan badan
Main pyaasi hoon mujhe bhar le apni baahon mein
Hai meri kasam tujhko sanam door kahin na jaa
Yeh doori kehti hain paas mere aaja re

Zoya was leaning more ... . And more... Until their lips were only few militeres away from each other... Asad was spellbount ... She was looking extremely beautiful ... He never had her so close to him ... He wanted to pause this moment ... Or ... Pause it a bit later ... Zoya was completely lost in him ...

Yuhi baras baras kaali ghata barse
Hum yaar bheeg jaaye is chaahat ki baarish mein
Meri khuyli khuli lato ko suljaaye
Tu apni ungliyon se main to hoon isi khwaayish mein

Asad looked at Her wet hair ... And few dropltes falling on his face... But a droplet that fell on asads eye ... For which he had to close his eye ... And open it ... . Made zoya come back to her senses ... But asad didnt wanted her to came back to reality ... He wanted her like that a bit more... More closer to him ... Zoya couldent believe what she was going to do... She ... Got really nervous and looked evrywhere but him... She tried toget up ... But she again fell on him with her head on his chest ...


Sardi ki raaton mein hum soye rahe ek chaadar mein
Hum dono tanha ho na koi bhi rahe is ghar mein
Zara zara behekta hain mehekta hain
Aaj to mera tan badan
Main pyaasi hoon mujhe bhar le apni baahon mein
Aaja re aa re

She looked up... With her worried innocent eyes.. ... Asad stared at her ... Intensely ... He was lost in her ... And zoya forgot evrything when she looked at his eyes ... Asad placed his hand on her lower back... Zoya closed her eyes due to his touch ... She felt a shiver run through her body ... She had only one wish ... She just didnt wanted this moment to end ... She wanted to stay so close to him... For ever.. ... She could even listen to his heartbeats ...

Tadpaye mujhe teri sabhi baatein
Ek baar ay deewani jhootha hi sahi pyaar to kar
Main bhooli nahin haseen mulakaatein
Bechain karke mujhko mujhse yun na pher nazar
Roothega na mujhse mere saathiyan yeh vaada kar
Tere bina mushkil hain jeena mera mere dil mein

He then placed his other hand on her back and hugged her ... Zoya closed her eyes to feel his touch ... His black shirt was wet... She was wet ... Even though it was cold ...she felt warm and srcure in his arms ... It was still raining heavily...and that could be seen in those The huge windows -kind - walls if Asads huge cabin on the top floor... Zoya didnt wanted to get up ... She just wanted to be on his arms in a stormy night... Away from everyone ...


Zara zara behekta hain mehekta hain
Aaj to mera tan badan
Main pyaasi hoon mujhe bhar le apni baahon mein
Hai meri kasam tujhko sanam door kahin na jaa
Yeh doori kehti hain paas mere aaja re
Aaja re aaja re aaja re

The hug turned into an extremely pationate and intense embrace ... Caressing her back softly... And then carresing her head and passing his fingers thriough her hair... then... He again placed his hands on her back hugging her tightly...feeling her bodys warmth .





this a little shayari written by me for this chapter on asya , hope you like it 😃😳


Dilon ko kaise samhalen

Jhazbadon ko kaise bas mein karen

Dil toh dil hain

Yeh kisi ki na sunen

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Posted: 9 years ago
#39
Intezar ka phal meetha hota hai
Had just listened to it before but now i believe in it too
After a long wait we finally got a wonderful chapter
It was very intense
Loved reading it
Please continue soon 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#40
Nice update
Loved it
Asad & Zoya, both lost in each other. Both wanted to stay like thar forever. Hope they will confess their feelings soon. Thanks for pm

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