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Posted: 9 years ago
#51


thanks a lot 😃😃⭐️⭐️😃

im glad you liked it 😃😃😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
#52

Originally posted by: suearmaniac

sun zara meri baat viny
kitna accha likhtio he tu
awesome the dono chapters👍🏼
just read
both songs are too gud...m still humming zara zara😆
and why u stopped there???
i want to read more
and i guess there is more to this story...some suspense
pls pm for next part



thanks a lot sue!!!!!!!!!!!

im glad you liked it 😃😃⭐️

wil pm you next time 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: suearmaniac

ek aur cheez viny 😆
wo shayri kamaal ki thi
badiyaaa



thanks a lot sue 😃


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Posted: 9 years ago
#54

Originally posted by: anopama

Nice update

So Asya so lost in each other
They don't want to be apart but none is voicing their feelings
Love the hug and the caresses
Continue



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im glad you liked it 😃😃


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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: angel_juhi04

Awesome Part Dear👏😊

Loved AsYa's romance😃
Loved Zara Zara song wid their romance😊
I am confused whether they r 2gthr or Zoya angry wid him?😕



thanks a lot 😃😃⭐️⭐️😃

im glad you liked it 😃😃

they are together ... but as their wedding took place in a rush ... thats why 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: shailu123

hey just read 2 chapters and it was lovely yaar excited to read more continue soon😛



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im glad you liked it 😃😃⭐️
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Posted: 9 years ago
#57

hi guys, i have updated the story with what i could... actually got 5 exams next week ... will sure update the next chappy longer 😃😃⭐️⭐️ please leave your feedback and likes 😃😃⭐️⭐️


Chapter 3

The storm was becoming fiery and it thundered ... Which made zoya come out of her trance ...she moved her head up and looked asad who was shocked at her sudden reation ... He took his hands off her and she got up ... Really nervous... Asad got up as well ... Zoya just wanted to leave the place , after all what happened she was feeling really embarresed and gence wanted to go to her cabin... when she got up ... the door closed

... asad got up to try to open the door ... bit he couldnt ...

a. oh god !

z. kya hua ?

a. ye lock kharab tha ... maine isse theek karvane ko bola tha... but mausam ki vajah se aa nahi pae the .. kal ayene ko kaha tha

Z. Are you serious asad ?

A. Khud dekh lo...

He moved back and zoya tried to open the door but couldnt open it

He went towards his desk and then turned to look at zoya ... Crossed his arms ... Zoya turned to look at him ... She could see the rain pouring on the huge cristals and asad infront of the desk ... she realized ... The whole night has to be spent with him inside his cabin ...

Asad was wet ... He ... Looking at zoya ... Started slowly to remive his tie ... Zoya loooked at him ... She was afraid... What was he thinking to do ?

Why was he removing his tie ? They were alone in the office ... No familymembers ... Just asad and zoya ...

Iss tarah se khudse aa mujhko jod tu

Thoda bhi mujhme na mujhko chhod tu

Na yaad teri tujhko

Na yaad mujhe hoon main

Aa mujhko pehan le tu

Aa tujhko odh loon main

Asad, after removing his tue and keeping it aside , started stepping towards zoya ... Unbotting his shirt ... Slowly ...looking at that zoyas eyes opened wide and her heartbeat got really fast ...

She just couldnt undetstamd what he was doing and why ? Was he gonba do what she was thinking ?

Z( inher mind) no ... Aisa nahi kar sakte mr khan ... Woh toh ek ache insaan hai ... Hai na ? Haan... Of course woh aise kisim ke insaan nahi hai... I think...( she bit her tongue ... Which made asad glare more pationate ) Yeh main kaisi baatein soch rahi hoon ?

Katra katra main girun

Jism pe tere theharun

Katra katra main girun

Tujh mein hi kahin reh lun

He had unbuttoned two buttons ... And part of his chest ws visible now ... Asad was stepping towards her ... Slowly... Steadily... Zoya didnt know where to go... She blushed a light pink ... Actually she didnt want to go anywhere ... She wanted. To stay there ... With him... Close to him...

Dariya tu khaali kar de

Mujhme saara tu bhar de

Tujhko aa main pee jaaun, pyaas bujha do..

Zoyas light pink blush turned into a dark pink blush when asad started to unbutton the third button. ... She literally lost control on her heart ... And her mind ...

She was getting weak and that when he was still far away from her ... He was enjoying her dark pink blush .. he knew very well what she was feeling ... Zoys heart was beating so fast that ... For moment ... She felt that her heart was a horse and was racing ...

Z. ( in her mind ) yeh mujhe jya ho raha hai ? Mera dil... Yeh ... Kya hua hai mujhe ?

Asads eyes were looking at her pationately ... Intensely ... And not even fir s moment ... Looking at anywrer e else ... But zoya ... his eyes were staring at her ... His lips gave a very pationate smirk to zoya ... Zoya felt a weird nervous feeling ... they were sharing a very intense eyelock and outside tye rain was pouring wildly ... The lights in his cabin ... The huge windows surrounding them ...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice update dear
Like their romantic intense moment
Update soon after ur exams
All the best for exams
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Omg why you stopped right there ?

I'm so excited for next update !

Well written update sweetie !
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice
So now Asya is locked in his office
No where to run Zoya
Omg Asad tease he starts undressing
And Zoya is all hot and bothered
But we know he is just teasing tht sexy smirk
Continue

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