Char Kadam: Safar Ab Jaari Hai (Part 6 on Pg 38) 28th Nov - Page 7

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Posted: 10 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: --abha--

yipeee i am excited...🥳

hopefully i can read on time...


Thnx abha...i hope so too😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
#62

Originally posted by: sush_rddt

wow! super excited!!

please continue soon!


Thnx sush!

Vl do soon😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
#63

Originally posted by: 12Singmeenu

Yyyeee

I am in for the khatro ke khiladi with teacher jiii


So in this also raman is a writer may be writing a story which is reallife story

Ishu reading it


Y do i have a feeling that ishu has memory loss



Hey asha!


Tu aur tere guesses

mahaan ho bhai tum to😛

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Posted: 10 years ago
#64

Originally posted by: snehac2

The prologue seems totally not Understandable but m too excited to see how the things unfold

So update soonish


Dats wat I intended to do with the prologue 😉

Vl updt soon 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
#65

Originally posted by: maanvir



Hey asha!


Tu aur tere guesses

mahaan ho bhai tum to😛



Kyu diii iss bar sahi hun ya galat 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
#66
Diii plz answer this one
Abb yeh tho char kadam ka cont ... hai na tho it must star with ishu peggy
Khai aysa tho nahi ki koi accedent mai ishu having a memoryloss and also lost the baby and vo accedent mai raman thinks it is his falt 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
#67

Originally posted by: 12Singmeenu

Diii plz answer this one

Abb yeh tho char kadam ka cont ... hai na tho it must star with ishu peggy
Khai aysa tho nahi ki koi accedent mai ishu having a memoryloss and also lost the baby and vo accedent mai raman thinks it is his falt 😉



Maine sahi kaha tha...tum mahaan ho yaar...

Kahan se kahan pahunch jati ho tum...

Koi accident nhi hua hai aur Ishu is still pregnant...

FYI ye naa hi EK mayya ki soap hai aur naa hi gaya maya k twisted ff's...😉

Aise khatarnaak ideas mt de yar
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Posted: 10 years ago
#68

Originally posted by: maanvir



Maine sahi kaha tha...tum mahaan ho yaar...

Kahan se kahan pahunch jati ho tum...

Koi accident nhi hua hai aur Ishu is still pregnant...

FYI ye naa hi EK mayya ki soap hai aur naa hi gaya maya k twisted ff's...😉

Aise khatarnaak ideas mt de yar



Ok lol cool 😆

Par fir vo prologue 😕

Ishita ishita aur raman ki story kaise pad rahi hai 😕

Ok she is still preggy 😉

But yah kuch jhool hai boss 😆

I mean khani mai ishu ne bola ki khani wali ishu bimar hai khai vo coma mai tho ya fir kuch aur 😕

Par yeh sab ek sath i mean bhoth ajeeb hai obviously yeh khani ka koi tho connection hai is story say i think yeh khani hi story ka base hai 😉

But prologue mai raman ke bare mai kyu nahi bola 😕


Ps - i think mai agar aur think karungi tho pagal ho javungi to leve it i will just enjoy the ride 😆

Kya kare ajj tak sab complicated hi guess kiya hai tho is liye dimag us direction mai hi jatha hai 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
#69
Hello to all the passengers!
I hope you all have followed the safety instructions and are ready to fly...

Before we take off I would like to address (kuch zyada formal hogaya kya?😛) the passengers who have just begun their journey with Char Kadam.

I realise u r hell confused with what's going on.
And as one of you mentioned, the first season of Char Kadam is of 68 parts and probably it will take long for u to get a hang of it.

So here I am posting a part of it's epilogue which will serve as a prologue for u.

So this post goes specially for the new passengers...

Note: CK stands for Char Kadam and Maanvir refers to the author


Epilogue/Prologue


Ishita's POV (May 2016)


Hi! Kaise ho CK gang?
Ek saal hogaya na aap se baat kiye hue!
Sorry friends! Apni life me busy hogayi thi...
Patha hi nahi chala ke Raman ke sath ek saal kaise guzar gaya...

Haan Feb me hamari pehli anniversary thi...
Sorry aap logon ko invite karna bhool gayi...
Actually mai aap logon se thodi si naraz thi...
Aap log meri shadi me nahi aye the na isiliye maine apko anniversary me bhi nahi bulaya...
I know ke sara kusoor maanvir kaa hai...usi ne aap logon ko meri shadi me nahi ane diya...

Is baar bhi fault maanvir ki hi hai...
Chahti to meri anniversary ki update bhi de sakti thi...


Anyways maanvir ko maaro goli (NOT LITERALLY😉)
Mai apko apni anniversary ke bare me bata rahi thi...
It was a very special day after all...
Itna achha arrangement kiya tha Raman ke mai bata nahi sakti...
Bata nahi sakti isiliye bata nahi rahi hun😛


Kya kaha? Anniversary gift?
Haan diya na...
Patha hai maine aur Raman ek doosre ko same gift diya!
Sounds amazing na!


Gift kya tha?
Ruko mai batati hun...

Par uske liye aap logon ko mere dressing table ke paas chalna hoga...

Chalo...


Ye raha...
Wo dekho wahan dressing table ke bilkul beech me hai...
Dikhayi diya?
Nahi?
Arrey yahin to hai saamne...

Abhi bhi nahi dikhayi diya?
Ermmm...Ruko mai Raman ko bulati hun wo dikhayenge...


"Raman...Raman"


Raman's POV

Hi!

Aap log? Yahan kaise?

Ek saal baad hamari yaad ayi?

Aaa...ermmm...actually I am sorry...Mai thoda busy hogaya tha...
I hope aap log samjhoge...
Aap logon ko to patha hi hai ke Ishita ko manvaane keliye kitne paapad belne pade the...
Ab ek saal ki mehnat ke bad phal mila to uska maza lene me bhi ek saal guzar diya maine...


Sorry anniversary pe nahi bula paaya...
maanvir ne invitation pahunchane se mana kar diya tha...
Aap log maanvir ki achhe se class le lena...


Kya kaha? Shirt achhi lag rahi hai?
Thank you...White! My favourite colour!

Oops! Aap logon ko to sab patha hai...
Yeah blue is my favourite colour...
But aaj kal White mera favourite bangaya hai...
Actually banana pad gaya hai...


Kyun?

Aaa...ermmm...You remember wo white dresswala note?

Haan wahi...To make peace the colour is whitewala note...

Ab to samajh gaye honge na...

Did we have a fight?
Yes you are right!

Also because the Boss is always right!
Obviously, the boss is not the one on your right!

PS: I am standing on your right😕


Sach bataun to pichle do mahinon se I am wearing white...
Aur jab log poochte hain ke roz white kyun to bolna padta hai ke I am loving white...
Fact to ye hai ke from last two weeks we are having a fight...


Kyun?
You will soon know!


"Raman...Raman"


"Le puttar! Tera bulava agaya" Ma says


"Raman...kahan ho aap...Raman"


"Jaldi jaa puttar warna teri biwi Raman jaap karke sare mohalle ko jaga degi"


"Kuch bhi" I blush


"Ye lo. Yahan Bahu bete ki tarah bolne lagi hai aur beta bahu ki tarah. Ek saal tak to tu Ishita...Ishita karke chillata tha har subah aur woh Kuch bhi bolke sharmati thi. Ab to do mahinon se aisa lag raha hai ke tum donon role reversal khel rahe ho"



"Raman...Raman"


"Dekha! Ab ja bhi...Warna usko chain nahi ayega"


Sorry guys! Gotto go! Warna Maa ki bhavishyavani sach ho jayegi!


"Aaya Ishita!"


Ishita's POV


"Kahan mar gaye Ravan Kumar! Kitni der lagti hai upar ane me" I mumble


"Raman...Raman"


"Aaya Ishita!"


"Kya hua Ishita?"


"Kahan the aap itni der se? Kab se bula rahi hun apko?" I fume


"Sorry! Wo mai kisise baat kar raha tha"


"Aap poora din kisi aur se hi baat karte raho. Meri to koi fikr hi nahi apko"


"Aisa nahi hai Ishita. Mai wo..."


"Jaane do. Apko to sirf ladne ke bahane chahye"


"Nahi Ishita. Aisi baat nahi hai. Dekho maine aaj White shirt pehna hai"


"To isme kounsi nayi baat hai? Wo to aap roz hi pehen rahe ho aaj kal"



"Mai ladna nahi chahta yahi batane keliye roz pehen raha hun"


"Iska matlab mai aapse roz ladti hun?"


"Maine aisa kab kaha?"


"Dekho ab aap lad rahe ho"


"Arre...mai...mai kab lada?"


"dekho aap argue kar rahe ho"


"Maine argue nahi kiya"


"Dekho ab aap mujhe galat sabit kar rahe ho"


"Nahi Ishita. Aisa nahi hai"


"Dekho ab aap meri baat maan ne se inkar rahe ho"


"Aaa...mai...kab"


"Kuch kehne ki zarurat nahi hai"


"I am sorry Jaan"


"Don't jaan me"


"Theek hai. Tum hi batao ke mai kya karun?"


"Ayyo! Aapke chakkar me mai bhool hi gayi ke maine apko kyun bulaya tha" I slap my forehead


"Ye CK gang aye hain humse milne. Aap se baat karana tha unko"


"Mai to unhi se baat kar raha tha abhi"


"Achha? Aap ne bataya kyun nahi?"


"Tumne batane ka mouka hi kab diya?"


"Dekho ab aap mujhpe ilazm laga rahe ho"


"Arrey nahi Jaan. OK sorry. Sab bhool jao. CK gang se baat karte hain. Itne dinon baad mile hain"


"Haan...right. Raman ye log hamari anniversary gift dekhna chahte hain"


"Oh Achha! Tumne bataya inko uske bare me"


"Haan maine bataya. Par wo log dekh nahi paa rahe hain. Aap thodi si help kar do na"


"Sure why not!"


"Umm...ye" Raman said standing behind me and pointing at our reflection in the mirror "Ye hamara aks" and he slowly moves his hand downwards and places it on my tummy
"Aur ye hamara Ansh" I complete it for him
"Aur hamari Rooh...Ruhi" he added



Kuch samjhe?
Nahi?
We are Pregnant!
And with two kids!
Ansh is my gift for Raman and Ruhi is his gift for me!


"Ummm...Kya kar rahe ho Raman?" I feel nuzzling on my neck


"Apni biwi ko pyar kar raha hun"


"CK gang dekh rahe hain"


"Sab kuch to dekh liya hai in logon ne"


"Sab kuch nahi dekha. Yaad hai na Lights Off, Curtain Close, Volume Mute"


"Oh haan"


"To ab chodo"


"Ummm...tumhe chodne ka dil nahi karta"


"Aisa hi hai to mujhe chod ke office kyun chale jathe ho?"


"You know na Jaan, office to jaana padega hi na"


"But I get bored Raman. Aap mujhe clinic jane bhi nahi dethe. Mummyji bhi kitty parties aur NGO ke kaam me busy rehti hain. Simmi bhi shadi ke baad Bangalore shift hogayi. Mai ghar par akele baithe baithe bore ho jathi hun"


"Hmmm...Baat to sahi hai. Par uska intezam maine kiya hua hai"


"Kya?" I asked excitedly



"Ek minute" He says lifting me off the ground and scooping in his arms



"Kya kar rahe ho Raman? I am pregnant"



"IKR. Kaise bhool sakta hun apni celibacy ko?" he says faking hurt



"Nautanki" I hit him playfully on his chest



He gently places me on the bed and keeps pillows to support my back against the headrest.


He then takes his phone out and does something
"Kya kar rahe ho Raman? Mujhe bhi batao" I ask impatiently craning my neck to see what he is doing


"Patience my dear. Sabr ka phal meetha hotha hai"



"Umm...ye raha...done" he says after a while


"Tumhara tab kahan hai?"


"Wo raha" I say pointing towards the side table "Par kyun?" I add


"Kaha na patience" he says reaching for the tab


"Apna mail open karo" he commands handing the tab to me


I do as instructed.

I see a mail from him.

No subject

No message

Only an attached PDF file

"Ye kya hai?" I ask him


"Download it" he orders


I download and save it.


The preview shows the first page
To my childish preggy wife Ishita


"Novel?" I ask excitedly


"Haan...Tumhare liye likha hai. Jab bhi tum bore hogi, ise padh lena"



"Awww...Thank you Raman. I love you" I say hugging him



"I Love you too" he says hugging me back


"Ok...Ab mujhe jaana hoga. I will keep calling. Shaam me jaldi ajaunga. Take care aur tab tak ye novel enjoy karo" he says kissing my forehead and then leans towards my stomach kisses there and says "Bye Ansh aur Ruhi. Mamma ko satana mat ok. Papa will be back soon"


"Bye Jaan" he says waving his hand


"Bye Jaana" I say blowing a kiss at him


When did I become so lucky to have a loving life-partner like him!
I know I have become grumpy owing to my over-active hormones but he never once complains about it.
Poor him! His wardrobe is now filled with white shirts!
All thanks to the two lil naughty chunks growing inside me.


Every day I spend with him he gives me a reason to be glad of my choice.
I do not for a moment regret my decision of having chosen him over Viren.

Viren and the Char Kadam I spent with him is only a blurred memory for me.
While every step I walked with Raman remains as a clear image.


I Love Him!
I Love my Ravan Kumar!
I Love Raman Kumar Bhalla!

And he is the reason I Love Myself, the wife, Ishita Raman Bhalla!


Ping my phone beeps

Text message from him Started reading or still dreaming about me?😉


I chuckle. He knows me so well.


Its option B. Option A on my list now😃 I reply


Great! Looking forward to ur review he replies


Better be prepared for the critical review I send


I take my tab and open the PDF file he sent.

To my childish preggy wife


My lips automatically curve into a smile. Itna karo na mujhe pyar I say overwhelmed


Itna Karo Na Mujhe Pyar


Did he just say that!?


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Hello! what are you people still doing here?
Didn't you hear Raman say that this novels for me?
What you want to read it too?

Ummm...you will have to ask maanvir about it...

Wait...


Knock Knock


(Author) Kya hua Ishita?


CK gang wants to read Raman's new novel


(Author) So?


Please maan jaa na. Itna bhaav kyun kha rahi hai?


(Author) Bhaav nahi kha rahi hun yaar. You know na I am leaving in 2 days


To chutti ke baad suna de na unko


(Author) Ummm


Soch kya rahi hai? Haan kar de na


(Author) Ok


Really tum maan gayi


(Author) Haan...Ab readers itne pyar se bol rahe hain to mana thodi na kar sakti hun


Ye hui na baat...CK Gang...Aap log kahin mat jayiga. Hum phir milenge isi forum me kuch hi samay me


(Author) To milte hain Break ke baad


-------Char Kadam: Safar abhi jaari hai------


Did I just say that!?

I did! I did!


So basically I had gone for a break and now I am back...
And here is the sequel of Char Kadam...
I guess now it's clear...
If u still have doubts feel free to ask me...

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Yeh!!! Splendid start...missed these two and their banter!!😉

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