Ishra FF : Be-Intehaan (Chap 2/Page 18)

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<p>Hi guys, I have edited the story. Actually I had posted teaser on this first post and now just edited it. Teaser is in next post.😉And also I have changed the title, from 'Kaho na Pyar Hai' to 'Be-intehaan'.

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Ahh!! I was trying to write this story from long time, but always failed to portrayed it properly. Now finally I have decided to write. It's completely different story from Yeh Hai Mohabbatein'. There you can see different shades of RKB and I hope you will like it. Here goes Teaser.


Be-Intehaan


Teaser


Ishita walked in the well decorated room, yes!! She came here before but this time she came here as a bride, now you can claimed it as her own house. Ishita looked all around when her eyes fall on Raman's picture which was kept on bed side table, she walked there and took the photo in her hand.


"Kaha ho Raman aap??" She thought.


(Ishita: Where are you Raman?)


She once looked at the clock, it was almost 11pm, she took a sit on bed and rested her head on headboard. She thought to call him and dialed his number.


"The number you are trying to call is currently switched off!!" The voice said.


"Switch off?? Jaldi aajao Raman."


(Ishita: Come fast Raman.)


She closed her eyes while leaning back on headboard. Suddenly she opened her eyes as she heard door's opening sound, she turned at direction where she saw him walking inside. Ishita stood up on her heels when Raman came to her saying, "I am sorry Ishita. I am late."


"It's okay Raman. You must be tired. Sleep now." She said looking down and was going to leave when Raman held her hand and pulled her closer with a jerk, in result they fall on bed.


"Raman." She blushed.


Raman rolled her on bed and came on top of her saying, "Aaj hamari suhaag raat hai."


(Raman: Today is our suhaag raat.)


Ishita blushed and closed her eyes, in a next moment Raman entangled his fingers with her and locked his lips with hers, the kiss got more passionate. Suddenly the glass which was kept on table fall on floor by Ishita's hand. Ishita woke up with jerk, that was a dream only. She smiled with a blush and looked at the clock, it was around 12AM, Raman didn't arrive yet. Ishita looked at the door when she saw him walking in with difficulty, he stumbled on his feet and was about to fall when Ishita quickly ran to him and held him tight, he looked at her.


"Raman, you are drunk?" She said shock.


"So what? It's my life, I can do anything which I wants. Should I take permission from you before doing anything?" He said rude.


"Raman aapko ho kya gaya hai?" She asked confuse.


(Ishita: Raman what's wrong with you?)


Without any reply Raman walked inside and sat on bed, Ishita followed him, "Raman. Kuch pooch rahi hoon aapse?"


(Ishita: Raman I am asking you something.)


As Ishita didn't get any reply from him she continued, "Raman aaj hamari shadi hui hai. Aap bataoge kya hua achanak? Kuch kaho Raman."


(Ishita: Raman we got married today. Will you tell me what has happened suddenly? Say something Raman.)


Her words started irritating him, he pinned her on wall with a jerk, "Who the hell are you questioning me?"


Ishita got terrified with his sudden action, she winched in pain, "Raman you are hurting me."


"Oh really? Kya socha tumne Raman tumse pyar karta hai?" She looked at him with teary eyes, "Holly shit!! I never loved you. Wo tum hi thi jo mere peeche pagal thi. Tumse pyar karna, yeh shadi, it was all a part of my plan." He pushed her on floor.


(Raman: Why did you think I love you? It was you who was behind me like a mad. To love you, to marry you, was a part of my plan.)


Ishita looked at him shock and moaned, "Raman."


Raman leaned towards her with a smirk, "Shock laga baby?"


(Raman: Get shock baby?)


Ishita stood up on her heels and came close to him, "No Raman. Aap... Aap!! Jhoot bol rahe ho na?" She cupped his face lovingly and said "I know you are lying. Kaho naa ekbar... Kaho Naa Pyar Hain."


(Ishita: You are lying. Tell me once, tell me you love me.)


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Don't forget to comment. Will update next on soon.


Thank you.

Edited by _KP.ISHRA_ - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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yippeee me first...timing boss😆
Res...
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OHHH!!!!!! So its like this...well Raman traitor nikla...plan shan haan...
Not to fear he will be soon on line...but till then my heart goes to ishu😭...

But i have all hopes on ishu or say u😆

Loved the concept...chal claps for u👏👏

Cant wait for next part...

Update soon (well thats my job to ask😛)
Edited by --abha-- - 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: --abha--

yippeee me first...timing boss😆

Res... Yeah!! That's true!! Kya timing hai tera... 😉 Chal ab jaldi se unres kar.

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Superb prologue n new concept plss continue soon
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Originally posted by: dhristikpd

Superb prologue n new concept plss continue soon

Thanks yaar. Yeah!! Quiet different.
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Wow! Full of anger & Passion.. Nice teaser.
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Interesting prologue
why raman married ishita ?
continue soon
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Interesting Prologue. Looks good. Raman foes not love Ishu but Ishu is hopelessly in love with him..Continue soon. Thanks for the PM

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