new TS what was my fault ! LOVE?*last part pg. 6 . 2/10/15

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Posted: 10 years ago
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HI Friends

Me and my friend watch YHM . we often discuss about the track too. I insisted her to pen down her imagination regarding the track many times. She bluntly denied We love to read all the OS SS FF and TS of the forum . Thank you guys for the lovely writings. These days we are very much disappointed with YHM. This surrogacy track is very gloomy . by now I was able to convince my friend to write with a promise that I won't reveal her name on the forum . she is actually scared of acceptance. What if forum do not accept her! I really hope you all will support her. I am here to request you to read my friends writings and give your views. Good or bad please give us the feedback we will try to do better.

can i post my friends thoughts here. ?


Thank you

Rivka.

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Posted: 10 years ago
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SURE... y asking... its a public forum... u dnt need any permission... Bindaas post... 😉
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yaar post karo. Never feel shy.
Even SP don't feel shy about showing this current crap why you?😆

On a serious note post the OS as it is a public forum none ll object..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: swatica.arora

SURE... y asking... its a public forum... u dnt need any permission... Bindaas post... 😉



thank you
I never posted nor my friend dint write for forums
so was feeling odd.

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Originally posted by: kaa1202

yaar post karo. Never feel shy.

Even SP don't feel shy about showing this current crap why you?😆

On a serious note post the OS as it is a public forum none ll object..


hahah I like it SP dont feel shy

thank you
so much
i will post
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what are you saying dear

we are here to read your wonderful updates dear

please post dear

eagerly waiting to read dear
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THE PLOT.

I really don't like what Raman is doing. His intention is not wrong but her consent should be of top priority. I am glad shagun is changed. He do not even have any idea of intense provoking words by shagun on Ishra relationship to Ishitha. Though she loves him so dearly she still is insecure of shagun. After the cold storage issue we saw how shattered Ishitha is. I think its high time he has to tell her about surrogacy or else she might misunderstand him. One word of shagun made a great impact on ishu I feel the dialogue : who so ever he marry, he will always love his children's mother'. What if ishu do not accept her to be her baby's surrogate mother. What if she felt insulted in front of shagun. Keeping in mind the story is going to take a leap ishu might leave and settle down in SL . I wanna write TS hope you all will like .

FROM : THE WRITER

Credits : Anonymous writer you can call "Anjaan" ya "Anamika" :-P


WHAT WAS MY FAULT ! ... LOVE?


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Days passed Ishu found Raman has changed a lot. His behavior towards shagun changed. She saw him talking to her over phone again and again. Her suspicion grew wild after this Rinky extra marital affair. She can't give him a child and Shagun is his first love and now a changed woman like how he always wanted. Her trust on him became weak. With all this in mind she tried her best to divert her mind. Her heart din't agree to what her brain says about his love. She can't think of him to cheat her. He has faced it when his Wife left him for another man . Don't he remember the pain he went through? Brushing her thoughts away, she entered her room

Raman on phone . she stopped at the door hearing him say .

Arrey, yaar . what is there in this, you can ask me anything. This is just a small wish I will get you south Indian food pakka.

Thanks ! you are doing so much for me. Can't I do this much . you are mother of my children after all. Don't worry .. its done.

Ishu is so sure the caller is Shagun. She felt very bad that her husband whom she trust so much is now cheating her for Shagun . she cursed herself for telling him to forgive Shagun for what all she has done.

R : Ishitha, what's on the menu today? Anything south Indian ?

I: Why? [acting as if she had not heard anything of his conversation ]

R: WHY! I feel like eating today. Cook something Plz. Sambar vada, pongal payasam anything but has to be authentic south Indian.

I: you sound strange, like a pregnant woman craving for south Indian food. Remember vandu akka !

R: what! Pre.. pre..g .nant ... Pregnant! can't I ask you to cook south Indian, Its ok if you don't want to prepare. I will ask amma she will do it. [he shouted ..he is worried of getting caught somehow managed to escape from JKR eyes]

I: No need to shout, don't trouble my amma . she may accept but will surely be hurt to know what is cooking in your mind.

R: what?

I: nothing. Will send your lunch with driver.

Saying so she left determined to find out. What's up with them . she has sent the lunch to his office. On the way she found Shagun going to clinic. Ishitha followed her. Shagun is Dr. manoj patient whole hospital knows her. Ishitha then saw Raman in the hospital running towards sonography room. Ishitha followed them. She came to know that shagun is pregnant from the gossips of the hospital staff. Its nothing new to hear bad about shagun but this time Raman is associated. She cannot even think of Raman and shagun . she was right but the cold storage incident came in front of her eyes. Shahun's words Raman only can love her and no one else. She tried not to think of Raman cheating her but why is he here with shagun. Who's child she is carrying. She left to her clinic locked in her room cried her heart out.

she called to driver to find out where he delivered the lunch. She got the address from the man. She wanted to confront shagun first and then Raman . she reached the flat the door was ajar she took her steps in to find shagun in his arms.

S: oh god Raman thanku so much . I so wanted to eat south Indian. Who made this ? smells wow.

R: taste awesome too. Made by MY madrasan,[ he said proudly while Ishu felt like she was his cook and nany to his babies] I told her I wanted to eat, I almost thought I am caught.

S: Ishitha made this. Wow. Home made food by Ishima.. lets start we are so hungry.

They laughed while he made her sit. started serving her. Ishu is literally broken . her heart is weeping terribly . she is not in a state to understand anything. She felt unusually awkward to stand there. The place where her Raman is serving his EX . she had this brain and heart conflict in her . A strong internal force initiated her to confront him. Shagun is not her priority but Him . she felt cheated with much pain she called him .

Ishitha : Raman ! [disgusted to utter his name even]


to be continued...


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Edited by Rivka - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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good one. Please continue soon.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Loved it. Very nicely written .waiting for ishita n raman confrontation . 👍🏼
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Liked it. Make sure Ishita bashes him like anything...

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