Unknown relation: LRL Raj-Naina ff

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Posted: 10 years ago
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k guys its ishani .a big fan of raj and naina and left right left.I was mad about that serial even now also.I was too small when that serial came so didn't know about ffs and all but ya today u I know about ffs and all n I have wrote few ffs in other forum but its my first try on lrl... so plz if I do any mistake excuse me.


k let's starts . before staring let me tell u plz plz give feedbacks positive ya negative..

part 1


well in this story actually navin is not dead all think he is dead but he is alive . military people not god his body also but the car vehicle in which he was there got blast so all thought he died except one..

in front of KMA a girl with focus determination n charm to achieve something stood and she says to her mother and dad

girl:baba ma aap log jayeye yaha she muje akhele jaana hoga.


baba:naina how can u stay here. its not easy beta .. hamare bath man ja aur chalo hamare sath..

naina:nahu baba.. yaha thak pahoochnekeliye Maine kya kya nahi kiya. ab mai peechr nahi hath sakthi.

baba:par there jindagi .. there khusi ka kya hoga naina. plz hamare bath man le

naina:nahi baba. mere jindagi mere kushi ab is me hai.. KMA me jaha mere bai ko gaddar kharar kar diya hai. ab muje isi system me rehana hai.


parents:par.

naina:ma baba aplog jayiye aur yad rahe muje contact math karna.

on the same day a office join kma as a teacher of communication ans statergies.

he was standing at hall of fame seeing the photos of shahid officers who gave there life for country..

BC: aise kya dekhrahe ho captan ye sab un logonka photo hai Jo apne desh ke liye jaan Di hai. shivaya ek ke.

rajveer:aur vo...

BC:vo hai thumhare dost naveen Singh aluwalia.. desh drohi tha vo..

rajveer:aur vo is academy ke best cadet bhi tha.

BC:ha badkismath ..

rajveer:ye bath aap thal nahi sakthe.. isiliye uska photo hall of fame me hai right.

BC gets angry and throws photo.. it fell near naina who was just entering..





I am sorry for mistakes

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kark12 thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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noone liked my story??I am really hurt
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Posted: 10 years ago
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nice start
but dear like toh tab kare gayna jab aap humko pm send kar ke inform karogi ki aap ff lekh rahi ho nhi toh hume pta kase chalega



so next update pe
do me pm ok


love naina
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Continue Soon ...😊

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