MANAN SS'THE GAME OF LIFE'-ch-1 updated 27/9 imp note/pg-3 - Page 2

Originally posted by: Glara

nice update yaar
but whr manik went did he hav gf & living in relationship & tats y cabir & dhruv is telling him like that
And charlie worry added my doubts.oh god one thing sure a very big twist & heart breaking update gonna come.i wish that heart is not nandhini. but like always she will be one its all fate.
i hope this all should be my imagination not in ur story.

Wow. Hey nice story.
U r a good writter..
Cntinue soon.. 😊

Amazing story
Wow i liked it very much
Nyc start
Plzz update soon
Waiting eagerly 👏

Prologue,CS and the 1st chapter all are amazin'
and the story seems damn interesting
update soon

Its nice but manik KO kameena banane ki kya jaroorat this pata nhi kitni ladkiyon k sath rehta hoga poor nandu she has to bear all this manik ki koi gf mat Lana pls n nandu should be bold n smart she should wear short dresses n multi KO to abhi ki behen pata hogi na. Update the next chapter soon n pls manik should fall for nandu first nandu KO manik ka deewana mat bana dena.
Manik should fall for her first nandu KO baad me pyar hona chahiye jab so sudhar Jaye.

Originally posted by: ruchi116

Its nice but manik KO kameena banane ki kya jaroorat this pata nhi kitni ladkiyon k sath rehta hoga poor nandu she has to bear all this manik ki koi gf mat Lana pls n nandu should be bold n smart she should wear short dresses n multi KO to abhi ki behen pata hogi na. Update the next chapter soon n pls manik should fall for nandu first nandu KO manik ka deewana mat bana dena.
Manik should fall for her first nandu KO baad me pyar hona chahiye jab so sudhar Jaye.

thanks for the comment dear and yes nandini is smart and bold in my story and dear I have already mentioned in the prolog that she likes manik from childhood