MANAN SS'THE GAME OF LIFE'-ch-1 updated 27/9 imp note/pg-3

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Hello people I am angel😊 !!!! many of u don't know

me as I am a silent reader of this forum . I am a huge fan of manan and parth😳😛😃 !!! so planning to write a ss on them😃😃 !!!! I am inspired

with many stories on this forum like all the stories written by mahi (writer of innayetein) and mawara ejaz and many more and now I am happily starting mine !!!😊

so here it is:

THE GAME OF LIFE

Love...its not easy being in love .Sometimes it needs inspiration, and sometimes comforting.love is just perfect but nothing in this world the person that u love is forever with you . sometimes the the thing which we wish for is just right infront of us but we don't realise it . we realise it when we loose that thing. So we should realise it before we loose it !!! love is a very precious thing , it doesn't see place , people , money or physical appearance its far more than that !!! Money can buy everything but it cannot buy emotions , it cannot buy love ... u just cant force anyone to love you...sometimes our destiny play games with us , we loose control on ourselves, we always don't get what we want in life but in love we get what we never dreamt of !!!! don't run after love u will get when is the right time...

PROLOUGE

Two girls sitting on the terrace laughing, joking and talking randomly,when suddenly one of them asked

Girl: minnie what is love???

Minnie: r u okay 😕😕??(shocked expression)

Girl: Yes I am fine ,kyu??😕😕

Minnie checked her forehead

Minnie: u don't have fever !!!

Girl: r u mad 😡😡?? simple question I asked and what nonsense r u doing , checking my fever like seriously.😡😡!!! ( sounding irritated)

Minnie: chillax thinnie!!! Its just that u asked this question..i mean charlie..THE CHARLIE RAIZADA asking me what is love is just not normal.😆

Charlie: shutup nandu ...jitna poocha utna bata!!😡😡

(I hope u got it the girls who asked the question is charlie and the girl she is talking with is none other than our nandini...nandini is called minnie by charlie and charlie is called thinnie by our nandini)

Nandini: okay relax. Its just listening this question from you was not expected😆😆😆

Charlie rolled her eyes

Nandini:huh...love , for me love is everything! !thinnie love is like a friendship caught on fire.IN the beginning a flame , very pretty, often hot and fierce , but still only light and flickering. As love grows older, our hearts mature and love becomes as coal, deep burning and unquenchable

Charlie scratching her head in confusion : yaar kuch zada samajh ni aya..ugrrr yar this love na meri samajh ke bahar hai !!!

Nandini: tu na rehne de ... sometimes I wonder how can u be my best friend😉😉 ??

Charlie in a teasing tone:😉😉 waise minnie itna kuch bol diya tune love pe but tujhe kaise pata itna !! don't tell me u r thing about manik😕😕

Nandini started blushing listening his name😳😳

Charlie: like seriously minnie u like someone whom u never met and saw in concerts and on tv...yes I know bachpan mai u both met one or two times and his mom loves u as her own daughter but still u like him he doesn't even know u or your name !!!

Nandini: thinnie plz I know he doesn't know but still yar I like him u can say its more than liking

Charlie: leave it yaar u don't have understand anything and we both start quarreling on this topic so lets not about this...u r very stubborn na

Nandini: right afterall sangati ka asar and she winked at charlie.😉

So I am writing a ss on manan named "THE GAME OF LIFE" . It is a story of love,hatred,jeolousy and all the emotions mixed in it.guyzzz this story is really close to my heart and is really a good one trust me on this... but I need your support...😛😊PLZ DO COMMENT


LOTS OF LOVE

ANGEL


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Posted: 9 years ago
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INDEX


PROLOUGE-PG-1


CHARACTER SKETCH-PG-1


chapter 1- pg-1
Edited by Angel_Naila11 - 9 years ago
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CHARACTER SKETCH

MANIK MALHOTRA: heartthrob of india, amazingly handsome,charming,can make any girl fall on her knees by his killer smile and looks. Loves her mother very much and can do anything for her and to make her happy. He is the only heir of malhotra industries and the lead male singer of fab 5 and is short tempered , hard from outside and soft from inside.

Nandini singhaniya: rich ,sweet bubbly girl of 22. Pampered by her brother a lot .sister of abhi and loves him a lot. A hardworking girl doesn't want to take help from her father so doing photography. Has a best friend named charlie whom she called thinnie as charlie is very thin. Loves her a lot, she has started doing photography along with charlie. They are being hired by famous directors and models for photoshoots.

Charlie raizada: a rich and a daughter of a very famous and rich producer. A tough girl,and sweet and emotional from heart but doesn't show up. She loves her best friend nandini a lot and call her minnie as nandini looks like minnie(cartoon).loves and cares for her like anything . protective for nandini as she knows that she is very innocent and trust people easily , doing photography with nandini.

Mukti vardhan: member of fab 5, sister to manik and tomboy and in a relationship with abhi

Alia vedant :member of fab 5 and married to dhruv vedant. Sweet and fashionable

Dhruv vedant: mamber of fab 5, sweet ,caring,shy boy married to alia. Owner of vedant textiles

Cabir dhawan: member of fab 5, best friend of manik knows him in and out...loving caring and fun loving person ,always in a jolly mood and prankster of fab 5,married to navya

Navya dhawan: a total madhubala from patna ,kind hearted, caring ,and married to cabir.she used to study with nandini as classmates but they are not in contact now

Abhimanyu singhaniya: loves and in a relationship with mukti. Loves her sister nandini a lot .a vey loving, caring and protective brother and possesive too. Owning singhaniya industries

fab 5: a very famous band ,besides music it is also famous for 2 reasons . firstly because of our manik malhotra and lastly they r famous for friendship and the bond they share

Other characters will be revealed as the story progresses




So here is it for now, chapter one will be updated by tomorrow morning.

First time writing a story plz ignore errors, tomatoes,chappals are welcomed along with comments and likes😉😆 . criticism is welcomed but please don't use harsh words... please like and do comments as it encourages me to write.😛😊



lots of love

angel

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Seems interesting but Charlie and mukti both r a part of it but it's okay
Abhi is in a relationship with mukti
Alya and dhruv married wow
Cabir and navya aww...my babies
Manik and Nandini 😊
Pm me nxt time
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Chapter 1

Nandini's pov:

Manik: nandini u wont ask me to enter in your house??asked manik naughtily leaning on nandini's door

me: manik u here?? How do you know where my house is?? I mean...I was cut in the middle of my sentence by manik

Manik: shhh...he placed his finger on my lips

Currents passed down my spine..i was num

Manik: how many questions u ask!!!!! Its not at all difficult for me to find the address of my love""

I was not able to react at the moment when I listened the word love from his mouth!! I was surely not on the ground rather on cloud 7 , my heartbeats grew wilder,ready to come out of my chest at any moment

Me: "what did u say" I gathered all the courage and spoke,he smirked at my expression

Manik: "what u heard my love" he spoke and slightly pushing me and entered in my flat then he continued

Manik: nandini I wanted this to tell u from so long but was never able to.. but today I wanna speak it loud and clear..I...

Me:I (I repeated his word)

Manik: nandini

Me: nandini...he said started repeating my name and it started going loud and loud

Pov ends

Nandini!! Nandini!!!- charlie shouted on top of her voice

Nandini opened her sleepy eyes

Charlie: thank god !!! minnie u r alive,

Nandini made a disgusted face

Charlie:" minnie u were sleeping or hibernating? So many times I tried to wake u up but u were in your dreamland , I don't know what u were dreaming. U were not even moving just smiling like an idiot" charlie told her story to nandini that how she was trying to wake nandini, meanwhile nandini rubbed her eyes and sat up on the bed

Charlie: did I ever told u that how cute u look after u wake up?

Nandini: "always when u wake me up" she said and smiled and charlie sat beside her

Charlie: sleepy head, wakeup, we have to sign a contract for photoshoot in the afternoon, and u also have a flight for pune tonight

Nandini: "I will miss u"she said and side hugged charlie

Charlie: "aww I will miss u more"she said

Nandini: "u know na agar mumma ne ni bulaya hota ,so mai ni jati"

Charlie: "I know ...accha leave this call her tell her u r coming"

Nandini dialed a number

Nandini: hello mumma how r u?she said smilingly

lady on call : mera baccha kaisa hai ? mumma ki yaad ni aati na?? she said faking anger

nandini: "ohoo mumma ... for that only I called" lady on the call got confused

nandini: "mumma I wanted to tell u that I am coming to u, I mean tomorrow morning I will reach pune"

nandini hears some voice in background

"mom, aapka laadla aa raha hai" "by tomorrow night he will reach"

Nandini : "mumma ur son is coming"

Lady: "yes he is coming"

Listening this nandini gets super happy but doesn't show it

Nandini: "ok bye mumma see u tomorrow, and I love u" they both disconnect the call

Lady's pov

When I got to know that my son is coming and nandini too , I got super happy. now my wish will be fulfilled. Nandini I promise beta that now u leave pune with a new identity.

Pov ends

The lady calls someone

Person on call : "good morning ma" he said in a sleepy tone

Lady: "morning ke bacche abhi tak so raha hai? Dekh mujhe pata hai tune kal late night party kari"

Person on the call: "sorry mom , I know apna mana kia that but mere friends leke gaye" "aur vaise bhi aa to raha hu mai aapke pass kal"

Lady: "manik tu kabhi ni sudhrega, dekhna jab teri shadi hogi na to tu bilkul thik ho jayega"

Manik: "kya mom subh subh shuru hogayi, ni karni mujhe shadi, subh subh mood kharab kar dia"

Lady: "dekh shadi to tujhe karni hai.. bas mujhe aur kuch ni sunna"

Manik tried to speak something but was cut in a middle

Lady: "dekh manik bahut hogaya,mujhe tujhse is topic pe kuch ni sunna , bas ek baar ghar aaja"

And she disconnected the call

Manik's pov

Shit...kahain phas gaya, mom ne to mujhe ghode pe chada dena hai, goddd kya karu , I don't know whom she had choosen for mr , I will get mad, but what if vo larki hi mana karde, yes manik u r genius,, so miss whatever lets see tum kaise yes bolti ho"

Pov ends

Cabir: "sale kahain hai ?" he shouted as he entered in his room

Manik: "kyu chilla raha hai" he said in a irritated tone

Cabir: "kahain gayab ho gaya tha kal raat" "achanak se kahain gayab ho gaya"

Manik: "where else do u expect me" he winked at cabir

Cabir: "sudhar ja" "aunty ko pata chal gaya na ki tu kya-kya karta hai unhe bol kar ki tu humare sath party kar raha tha"

Manik: "chill na kuch pata ni chal ra" as he completed his sentence

3 people entered shouting his name

Manik : kya hai kyu chilla rahe ho ??

Mukti: "aunty ne call kiya hume"

Manik : mom ne??

All of them nodded

Manik: what is this yaar !! Cabir tune pehle kyu ni bola? Acha tell me what she said

Mukti: "she called all of us and invited us to your wedding " Manik's eyes came out of their socket and she said

Manik: "what???? How can she do this to me??? Oh god shadi !!!!! mai to mar gaya!!! I don't know kise karayegi meri shadi ???? no no no plz anyone save me"

Aliya: manik do u know to whom u r getting married??

Manik: agar mujhe pata hota toh mai murder na kar deta us ladki ka!!!! He said in frustration

Cabir: o mere hulk chill !!! shant ho ja !!! first we have to find who dis girl is, and we can only get to know about her when we reach pune !!!!

Dhruv: "don't worry manik , we will get u out of this mess" manik see all of them with hope

Cabir: "so guys start the packing as we are going to manik malhotra's wedding"

Manik: "cabirrr shut up otherwise sabse pehle mai tujhe mar dunga"

Just then navya enters

Navya: kahain jane ki packing ho rahi hai??

"lo agayi black and white madhubala, isi ki kami thi" manik mummers under his breath

Cabir: "arey navya ji hum manik ki shadi mai ja rahe hai"

Cabir receives a deathly glare from manik

Cabir : "ghoor kya raha hai maine kuch galat kaha kya"

Navya: "haye mata rani ne humari baat sunli , haye manik ki shadi " she started jumping in happiness

Navya: " cabir I want to go to shopping afterall I wanna look beautiful"

Manik: "typical madhubala" "navya mujhe shadi Nahi karni, tumhe itna shauk hai to khud hi karlo"

Navya: "haye mata rani us bechari ladki ki raksha karna aur is rakshash se bacha lena"

"Navyaaa" every one shouted

Scene changes

Charlie: "Minnie u r ready na we r leaving for airport in 10 mins"

Nandini: "yes I am ready"

They both left for airport after an hour they reach airport

Charlie: "Minnie see take care of yourself, take your food on time, call me when u reach , I want each an every update and ..." she was cut in the middle by nandini

Nandini: "thinnie , I am not going forever , I will return after two or three weeks , don't take my tension and waise bhi bahut log hai wahain meri care ke liye , u take care of yourself and don't cry"

Charlie: "I wont cry" and they both heard the announcement of her flight

They both tightly hugged each other bid bye

Charlie: "I have informed abhi about your arrival and he'll be there to pick u up"

Nandini: "aww so sweet of u , I completely forgot to tell him thank u and bye , love u thinnie"

And she went and boarded her flight

Charlie's pov

"I don't know why but I am not having a good feeling. God please be with her. I hope she will be fine there"

Scene changes

Nandini reaches pune and call Charlie and told her she is fine and safely reached there.

She was searching for abhi and someone comes from back and covered her eyes

Nandini: o god who is this?

She removed the hands and turned back

Nandini: o god bhaiii !!! she shouted with excitement and hugged him

Abhi: "uff u didn't even changed a bit !!! howzz my doll"

Nandini: "ur doll is perfectly fine , afterall blessed with such an amazing best friend how can I be not fine"

Abhi : "ya rite she is the reason I don't have to worry about u much"

Nandini: "o hoo bhai sari baat airport pe hi karni hai??? I am tired"

Abhi: "yes chalo lets go home"

Nandini: "no bhai I wont go to their house , I have broken all my relations with them"

Abhi: " doll bhul ja na, kitna time ho gaya us baat ko, they really miss u"

Nandini: "no bhai I am not going there, u plz drop me to mumma's house or else I will take a cab and go, and I wont even meet u"

Abhi accepted his defeat as he know that she will not listen to him

Abhi : "fine!! I will take u to ur mumma's house"

She smiled a bit and they both left for malhotra mansion and soon reach there

Abhi: "lo agaya ur mumma's house"

Nandini jumped out of the car in excitement and ran inside

Abhi: "nandini carefull" he said but nandini went inside

Inside the mansion

A lady in mid sixtees was standing talking to her daughter and her back was facing nandini, nandini signaled her daughter to be quiet and she tip-toed and went to the lady and hugged her from back, the lady recognized her hands and turned around and hugged nandini tightly

( so guys this lady is none other than nyonika. Here in my story she has a positive and very important character. She loves manik a lot and she loves nandini too. And her daughter name is a muskaan, she is manik's elder sister and manik's loves her a lot, her husband cheated her and they both got separated , she is very sweet and caring by nature, she has a 4yr old son called veer. Manik loves her sister and his son a lot)

Nyonika: "mera baccha I missed u so much" she said as she broke the hug

Nandini: "mumma I missed u too"

Muskaan: " haww mujhe to bhul gayi nandini"

Nandini went up to muskaan and hugged her

Nandini: " di I can never ever forget u , how can I forget my one and only elder sister" she said

Muskaan again hugged her

Muskaan: " I missed u so much nandini, u know I and mom were taking about u only"

Nyonika interrupted their conversation

Nyonika : "okay bahut ho gayi baatein , nandini go and take rest at night we will talk" nandini nodded and went to the roon for rest.

Muskaan: "mom she is perfect"

Nyonika smiled

Nyonika: I know

So I am done with the first chapter of the story and yes I want to tell u all one more thing( manik's age is 26 , nandini-22 , abhi-26,cabir-26, mukti-25, aliya-25,dhruv-26,navya-22,Charlie-22) these are their ages which I forgot to add !!!! guys please give your views , I am writing this only for u , plz give likes and comments. take care, stay blessed. whoever want pm comment on the post and buddy me


lots of love

angel

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Posted: 9 years ago
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nice update yaar
but whr manik went did he hav gf & living in relationship & tats y cabir & dhruv is telling him like that
And charlie worry added my doubts.oh god one thing sure a very big twist & heart breaking update gonna come.i wish that heart is not nandhini. but like always she will be one its all fate.
i hope this all should be my imagination not in ur story.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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hey jst loved it
bt nandu was really love wth manik mnaik was too different tht may bein sme relationship r somethings else everyone is ready to smash marrige of manik by there evil plans
love the nyo towards nandu
love the concern of charlie towards nandu
brotherly love of abhi
continue soon
love to read
stay blessed
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome update
Loved it
Update the next part soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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awesome update...
loving all the characters...
navya is still a drama queen and everyones madhubala...
can't wait for manan to meet and see what their reactions are gonna be...
keep up the good work and continue soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nyc update
Manik aur nandini ki shaadi ki planning chl rhi hai
Pr manik ke intentions theek nhi lg rhe kahin wo nandu ko hurt na krde
Lovd it
Continue soon

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