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Dheera OS "Pyaar ka tohfa"

Meera woke up in the morning and her eyes fell on the calender, she hadn't realized, it was her birthday today, she got up quickly and unlocked her phone to see if there were any messages from Ahem or other family members, to her disappointment, there were none. She sat down on the chair and got tears in her eyes

Meera; aaj tak esa nhi hua k dad ne mujhe wish na kiya ho, please dad just a message won't hurt

Dharam who was having a bath all the while stepped out of his bathroom rubbing his hair with the towel.

Dharam; e mobile phone ki jogan..kya subah subah ganga jamuna baha rhi hai, phirse tere ghar se koi nautanki bhara phone aya kya

Meera got up in anger and threw her phone on the bed

Meera; kuch bhi hua ho, its non of your buisness okay!

Dharam; sara din angrezi me chapad chapad krte tera mun nhi thakta? apne honth dekh kese tede hogaye hen

Meera; aapko us se kya? mere honth tede hon ya seedhe as if i would kiss u

oops she said alot, she bit her tongue

Dharam; tere jesi mirchi ko na me mun lagata bhi nhi, Dharam suryavnashi mirchi bechta he aur shehed khata he samjhi gai ne

Meera; Forget it, subah subah aapse behes kr k mujhe apna special day spoil nhi krna.

she took out a new saree and a towel and walked towards the bathroom, he caught her arm and pulled her

Dharam; kya boli tu? ispesial? aaj ka din tere liye ispesial kyun hai?

Meera; aapse matlab? mera special day hai na

Dharam; mat bhul me ab tera pati hun

Meera; to? mere special day pe national holiday declare krdoge aap? apne kaam se kaam rakhiye

Dharam; batati hai k..

Meera; kya? aap marenge mujhe? go ahead wese bhi meri life kafi boring he aap mere saath wwf khel k use exciting hi bna dijiye

Dharam; mirchi nhi, tu to puri zehrili nagin he nagin

Meera; exactly! aur agar aapne mere saath badtameezi ki to ye nagin dhas bhi skti he, get it, now let me go

he left her arm, Meera smirked, she turned to walk again, Dharam grabbed her from her waist this time and pulled her again, she fell in his arms now, if he left her she would fall

Meera; what is this?

she looked up and was lost in his eyes, there was something different in his eyes, a curiosity, a genuine concern to know what his wife's special day was about, he really was eager to know.

Meera; okay fine..aaj mera birthday hai, janam din

Dharam straightened her and she was back on her feet now,he smiled

Dharam; haan to ese bol na, to phir to ye tera kyun mera bhi ispesial day hua ne, tu meri patni hai, Dharam suryavanshi ki patni, tere janam din pe to..

Meera; aap mujhe aur bhi ziada bore krenge darayenge dhamkayenge, apni mom ko ja k bateyenge aur wo aapko 70 news ways to irk meera btayengi, go ahead tayar rakhiyega apne plans jab tak me bath lun okay

she went inside the bathroom and closed the door at his face.

Dharam; kya chokri hai, sunti hi nahi, iski maa zarur wrat rakhti hogi iske waqt, tabhi itni kadwi hai

Meera came out and got ready, she was about to tie her mangalsutr, Dharam came from behind and tied it instead, meera tried to ignore him, she was about to fill her hair separation with sindoor but Dharam caught her hand and took the sindoor box from her

Dharama; hamare ghar ki paramprah he k patni k janamdin k din uski maang pati khud bharta he (he applied sindoor) is se kya hai na, patni ki umar lambi hti he esa maanna hai

Meera; wow, shuru hogaye na aap. What's next?

Dharam; e tu neeche to chal tujhe btata hun suryavanshi bhavan me bahu ka janamdin kese manate hen

Meera; sorry but im not interested, me market ja rhi hun

Dharam; kyun?

Meera; apne liye gifts lene, thank to u and ur mom mere dad ne bhi mujhe wish nhi kiya, aapko pta he mere har birthday pe dad mere uthne se pehle hi mera gift mere dressing table pe rakh dete the, aur raat ko hi mujhe wish krdete the, pr aaj unhone mujhe wish krne k liye ek message tak nhi kiya, aapko pta bhi hai mere dad k gifts mere liye kya hen?

she pulled him and opened the cupboard and one by one she showed the gifts ahem had gifted her

Meera; ye dekhiye, aaj tak sab sambhale hen mene, i used to think mera husband bhi mujhe ese hi pamper krega jese mere dad krte the, pr aap...

Dharam felt guilty she really deserved alot he thought

Meera; actually, u should pamper me more, aapko is age me itni pretty wife mili he, im like ur trophy wife, ek kaam kijiye jaiye aur mere liye bht hi acha gift le k aaiye

Dharam; gift aur tere liye? huh! bhul ja

Meera pushed him to the wall and pinned him

Meera; Mr.Dharam suryavanshi, agar aapne mujhe raat 12 bje se pehle gift nahi diya to i promise u agar ye Meera Modi apne maiyke walon ko ula skti he to just think, aapka wo kya kregi, ab me aapki wife hun, whatever i do, log to aapki hi izzat uchalenge na

Dharam; e champa me..

Meera; kya? don;t u dare challenge me, me kya kr skti hun wo mene agr krdiya to aap aur aapki mom ko 20 years aur wait krna hoga mujhse badla lene k liye, oh wait, aap apni wife se kese badla lo ge? main agar chahun na to aap ko court me ghaseet skti hun kitne ilzam lga skti hun, and u know what kanoon bhi mera saath dega, and forget that me chahun to ja k kuch bhi krskti hun, just think Dharam Suryavanshi ki wife, kese kaam kr rhi he

Dharam; dekh tu ud mat, tere pankh kaat k na haath me de dunga, aur ye jo tu khayali biryani paka rhi he na main chahun to tujhe hamesha k liye is kamre me band kr k rakh dun

Meera; dont forget mene hi aapka pair toda he

Dharam grabbed her and pinned her to the wall.

Dharam; tu kuch nhi krskti smjhigai ne

Meera; huh! saaf saaf kaho na aap aur aapki mom are just beggars, ek gift tak nhi de skte, ek mamuli gift pe itni ladai shame on u, bade daawe krne ate hen and practically nothing

Dharam; ujhe kya lagta he me tereko taufa nhi de skta me dena chahta hi nahi

Meera; aap de hi nahi skte, aap ki auqat hi nahi

Dharam; eeeh!!

Meera; chilaiye mat!, i challenge you then 12 baje se pehle aap ese gift laiye jo mujhe khush krde wrna aapke daawe dhare k dhare reh jayenge

Dharam; theek he, main tujhe esa tuafa dunga k tu zindagi bhar yaad rakhegi

Meera; okay done

they shook hands, Dharam left, Meera smirked

Meera; ab mujhe gift milne se koi nahi rok skta, u rock meera.

Dharam kept thinking of a good gift that would please Meera he knew she wasn't a regular girl who would be happy with a gold chain or a diamond ring, she was different, and crazy something he liked about her, she was unpredictable, as he thought about her madness his lips curned itno a smile.
He drove to a shopping mall and entered a simple gift shop, he was staring at the stuff around when a girl of around 12 years entered the shop with her mom.

Mom; beta aap ko ja pasand aye wo bta do

Girl; okay mom let me see

the girl was inspecting the things, Dharam went to her

Dharam; beta, ek baat btao, tumhara janamdin hai aaj?

Girl; nahi uncle, aaj me apni class me 1st aayi hun isiliye meri mo mujhe gift dilane lai hen

Dharam; ek baat bta, agar tera janamdin hta to tujhe kya chahiye hta

Girl looked here an there, and then pointed towards a big white fluffy teddy bear who was holding a heart that said "I love You"

Girl; uncle wo jo bada wala teddy he na apne birthday pe mujhe ese hi gifts ache lagte hen, meri mom ne wesa hi teddy gift kiya tha mujhe

Dharam smiled.

Dharam; tune na mera bada piroblem hal krdiya he chokri, tu apne liye do gift pasand kr, ek teri maa ki taraf se aur ek tere is uncle ki taraf se tab tak me teri didi k liye wo bada wala bhaloo leta hun

Girl; okay thank you uncle

Dharam bought the teddy bear and payed for the girls' gift too and left the shop smiling.

Dharam; sirphiri chuhiya k liye ye bhaloo his sahi hoga, ab dekhta hun kese khush nhi hti

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Meera entered her room and saw a huge box on the bed, she went near it and opened it up, she was shocked

Dharam; kesa laga Dharam Suryavanshi ka apni nayi dulhan k liye pehla taufa?

Meera was adoring the big teddy bear, it was very soft and she cuddled it, Dharam looked at her and was astonsihed, standing before him was not the rude stubborn meera he knew, but a cute innocent little girl who got her favorite toy, she cuddled and kissed the teddy, making faces, Dharam smiled at her cuteness , for the first time his heart skipped a beat while staring at her, she looked very different and he loved the sight.Meera looked at him and smiled,

Meera; this is perfect, aapko pta hai mujhe hamesha se hi teddies bhot pasand hen, aur itna bada teddy to mere paas kabhi nhi tha, its so cute, isko to me sara din hug krskti hun

Dharam came close to her

Dharam; dekha mene kaha tha ne, tu khush hojayegi

Meera; khush nhi bht khush, thank you my dear sweet and cute husband

and then she kissed him on the cheek. Dharam was shocked, he forgot to breath, his mouth opened in shock, Meera sat down with the teddy and hugged it, Dharam touched the area where she had kissed and left the room.

He was walking dumbstruck when gaura saw the lipstick mark on his cheek

Gaura; dharam?! ye kya hai

Dharam; kuch nahi baa, mirchi hai ne, wo kab shaqar me badal gai pta hi nhi chala

Gaura didn't understand what he meant and he left,

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Silvertarax thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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How adorable
Your dialogues in hindi are the best! I'm going to start writing them in hindi as well.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: xPalkix

How adorable

Your dialogues in hindi are the best! I'm going to start writing them in hindi as well.

thank u 😳
english dialogues just dnt give the dharam feeling😛 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow loved it so much!!!! Love the Hindi dialogues. 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Aww!!! This was Amazing, so cute and adorable loved it sonu! Write more 😳
Ps. As always your dialogs were perfect, Loved them!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: ninag

Wow loved it so much!!!! Love the Hindi dialogues. 😳

thanks 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: zainabawoon

Aww!!! This was Amazing, so cute and adorable loved it sonu! Write more 😳
Ps. As always your dialogs were perfect, Loved them!

😃 sure will zaina😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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dharam is quite romantic here.putting sindoor etc without her consent.meera demanding gift from dharam on her b'day.she threatened him.the dialogues were too good.i've no words.how he selected teddy bear 4 meera was funny.meera kissing him in excitement n he touched that area n gaura finding lipstick mark there n his reply...ha ha.i wish meera had noticed the ILU on the teddy bear.
ur 1st os is too good.plz give us more n more dheera os.plz write on all the ideas discussed on the dheera thread
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Loved the os simply amazing
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Posted: 9 years ago
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omg omg omg this is fantastic!! arre i love everything, nonstop laughing, but so sweet at the end too. awesome!! aur chahiye plsss 😃

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