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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: gayu6

Read both parts just nw. It's was really amazing. What's her feeling for him.pls continue soon

well feeling is confused right now she has gone through a lot in just one night so it would be slow .thanks for liking it
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: nimmycub

I love how you described Sanskar ki feelings. I cant wait to read the next party. Its superb!

thanks ya.he is in louvvveee so his feeling are justified .updating in a few minutes
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Shikha022

Lovely concept..

Do pm when u update next..
Will be curiously waiting for next part..
Tc

will be updating now😉 ...will pm u too
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thank you guys for reading it and appreciating it ...here comes the next part .its kindof similar to the show...hope u like it...will wait for ur comments


Part 3


While sanskar was waiting for swara to enter in the room ,he was completely unaware of the fact that swara was already near him
standing in their rooms balcony holding the railing watching the sunrise was swara in deep thoughts as the morning breeze was slowly blowing her hair away from her.
the only thing which was separating swara and sanskar where the balcony curtains.
last night was alot to take in.so much happened in such a small time frame that she was not able to digest everything in one go,
lakshya watching them sleep separately ,ragini leaving home ,sanskar taunting her again,sanskaar filling up her maang,raginis evil plan to arrest maa,the drama in baadi,babas accusations,sanskaars confession of his crimes ,raginis plan to use sanskaar as bait in her game to tarnish our image all the accusations and her proving them otherwise and above all his confession of love towards her.
how could he love her,how could he ,he was a friend ,infact a very special friend who understood her all along
why sanskaar why did u spoil everything u knew everything still all this.u know very well how things r and what was our mission...and all this chaos how could u say u love me..did I give u mislead you,or are u just confused friendship with love.he knows how much pain love brings.we both have suffered for the same in the past .then how could he let this happen I dont want him to end up hurt again and above all reasons I dont want to be the one causing him so much pain.what do i say to him .what should i do
As the sunray slowly filled up the room from the curtains sanskaar eyes went towards the balcony and there was his love standing deep in her thoughts looking so surreal.the early morning rays giving her a golden glow to her face and the breeze playing with her hair.he just wanted to cherish the moment till it lasts.slowly he moved closer to where swara was standing
The tiny hair on swaras nape rose and she felt a jolt knowing instantly sanskaar has found her.she closed her eyes for a minute and turned back
"swara "
swara looked in his eyes then looked away the way he was looking deep into her soul disturbed her
"swara tum mujhse baat kyun nahi kar rahi ho"
"baat karneko kuch hai hi nahi"
"kamse kam tumne kuch bola toh sahi .mein kal raat ke liye tumhe kitna bhi thanks kahu"
"dekho sanskar mujhe tumse koi baat nahi karni"
"par kyun.kal tumne jo kuch bhi kiya"
"kal meine kuch nahi kiya..aur jo bhi tha woh meine sach ka saath diya ...ab meri iss baat ko kuch aur matt samjlena"
"jo bhi hua uske mayine mere liye kya hai woh sirf mein janta hun"
"mujhe tumhare saath koi behas nahi karni"
swara started to leave but sankar held her arm and pulled her towards him which led to her being in his arms too close
even with the breeze they could still feel the breath on each other
sanskar broke the silence he huskily said "jab tak tum mere sawalon ka jawab nahi de deti mein tumhe kahi jaane nahi dunga"
being so close to him, no where to go and seeing him so determined she agreed.sanskaar released her and asked..."kyun tum mere saath itna rukha behave kar rahi ho"
"tum neh mere trust toda hai "
"maine?"
"haan ,hum ache dost the aur tumne yeh sab kya pyaar vyaar ki baat le aye"
sanskaar little hurt "mere pyaar ne tumhara trust tod diya ..wow(he mumed)."
"kyun sanskaar yeh sab ki kya zaroorat thi.tum sab kuch jante ho phir bhi"
"haan phirbhi...mein tumse pyaar karke koi gunah nahi kiya hai swara ."
"tum kyun nahi samjh rahe yeh galat hai"
"swara tumhari koi bhi baat muje tumhe pyaar karne se nahi rok sakti"
"bas!!!bahut ho gaya ab mein kuch nahi sunna chahti.agar tumne yeh sab band nahi kiya toh"
"toh kya swara"
"toh tumhare aur mere bich ka yeh dosti ka rishta khatam.ab sirf humara maksad aur baad mein tum tumhare raaste aur mein mere"
saying this she turned away hoping that sanskaar would understand and atleast for their friendship forget all of this while sanskaar was really hurt but still got more determined
"fine as u wish"
swara was shocked
"did u really think i will apologize to u ...never for this swara.i love u with bottom of my heart and i have no regrets in loving u .i will never stop loving u.this is the one feeling which makes me feel alive ,gives me a purpose to live,makes me realize life is beautiful and i wont let u take away this from me "
swara pissed of left in a hast from there
(later as u saw in the episode ragini and swara conversation)
after threatning ragini swara stromed inside her bathroom.the last nail in the coffin was ragini...she brought out the devil inside when she spoke ill plans of never letting her parents reunite...swaras hand went to the shower nob and she soaked her self with the shower hoping it would cool her down but instead it started the water works which did not flow from her eyes all night .she held her head on the transparent glass separator as she cried her heart out...
sanskar stood outside the bathroom with his head on the door feeling her cries even through the shower bringing tears in his eyes too.feeling her breakdown broke his heart...
Edited by sushups - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#25
Nice❤️
Aww Swara was hurt and so was sanskar with swara world...
Hope they understand eachother
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Posted: 10 years ago
#26
Lovely update..
Sply the ending scene..
Very emotional n touchy..
Beautifully portrayed..
Will be waiting for next part
N thank u so much for the pm
Tc
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Posted: 10 years ago
#27
Lovely 😳👏
Loved it ⭐️
Thanks for the pm dear 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#28
Feeling sad for swasan 😭 I hate ragini 😡
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Loved the update !!!
Eagerly waiting for next one
Do update soon 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
#30
Awesome update...
Thanks for the pm

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