swasan ss-Dheeren dheere se-part3pg5

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hi everyone seeing the episode i am writing a short script of what follows:



Swara has proved sanskaar innocent.adarash truth is out n parineeta is shattered still not able to believe how the events changed everything for her ragini left for her room while all the elders where giving adarsh a hearing he deserved.Anapurna decided to keep kuldevi puja as she believed the house has been affected by evil.all the remaining ladies were consoling parineeta in her room

In Raginis room:

dadi- "chal lado mein chalti hun savera ho gaya.aaj adarsh ke chalte tu bach gayi warna woh bangalan toh tera sach aaj nikal ke hi dam leti."
Ragini: "haan dadi aisa lag raha tha ki raat khatam hi nahi ho rahi thi.acha hai ki adarsh bhaiya ke sach ke wajah se mujhpar se dhyaan hatt gaya ...par iss se swara par gharwalo ka yakeen bhi badh gaya hai...meri toh kuch samjh nahi aa rah ki mein kya karoon...kaise swara ko bahar nikalun...lagta mujhe iska permanent tod nikalna hi padega"
dadi :"dekh lado tu phir se aisa waisa mat kar lena warna---"
ragini(cutting dadi midway):"aap phikar mat karo dadi mein aisi galti dubara phir nahi karungi"
lakshya enters the room
dadi:"lakshya beta lado ka khayal rakhna"
lux:"ji dadi"
dadi leaves the house
lakshya:"tum thik toh ho"
ragini:"kaise thik rahu luxji...mujhe samjh nahi aa raha swara yeh sab kyun kar rahi hai...bin shadi kiye sanskaar ke saath rehna ...kal ko uski zindagi barbaad ho jayegi"
lakshya:"ragini mein janta hun woh natak kar rahe hai ab agar mein yeh baat samne bhi laaun toh papa meri baat nahi sunege.tum yeh sab mat socho ragini--"
ragini:"kaise naa soche luxji swara humari behen...agar woh hume apni behen nahi manti toh yeh toh nahi ho sakta naa ki humbhi uske baare mein naa soche"
lakshya :"sachme ragini tumhara dil kitna bada hai...kash tumhari behen ko bhi tumhara jaisa dil milta.par ab yeh sab chodo aur fresh ho jao.hum milkar kuch sochenge"

ragini smiles


scene shifts to swaras room



ok should i continue?
part 2 page 1
part 3 page 5
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow...
Awesome concept...
Loved it...
Continue soon...
And please pm me...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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part 2:


DheeDheere Dheere Se Meri Zindagi Mein Aana
Dheere Dheere Se Mere Dil Ko Churaana
Tum Se Pyaar Humein Kitna Hai Jaane Jaana
Tumse Milkar Tumko Hai Bataana

Dheere Dheere Se Meri Zindagi Mein Aana
Dheere Dheere Se Mere Dil Ko Churaana
Tum Se Pyaar Humein Kitna Hai Jaane Jaana
Tumse Milkar Tumko Hai Bataana


"Meeting you was fate
becoming your friend was choice,but
Falling in love with you was beyond my control "


Swasan room:

sanskar was pacing back and forth not able to name what sort feeling he was experiencing
was it happiness ,relief ,loved, on the top of the world,scared ...very very scared...actually all of the above
he was happy that swara had defended him when noone believed in him...the way she stood tall n strong side by side him proving his innocense like a tigress made his knees weak
his heart was beating with a speed which felt inhuman thinking how will their conversation start because what it feels like she is avoiding him but that cant go on right .we need to talk.i m not sorry for my confession but it should have not been in this way..i didnt plan this ...it just happened...damm u ragini u did u make me so angry that things went this way..nothing is gone
change my love for swara but i m scared even though i want to talk to swara there is one part scared to confront her because i just cant think of losing her ...I know she doesnt love me but atleast we have a beautiful friendship.
This has never happened in my entire life that i feeling so much so many things that i myself dont know what do i want next .Its a dream to think that swara will love me back...but even if not i just want her in my life...this wait is killing me.god please help me.

Edited by sushups - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thanks😃 .updated next part...sorry the parts are short i have problem with my lappy .
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: ll_megha_ll

Wow...

Awesome concept...
Loved it...
Continue soon...
And please pm me...

thank u
already pmed u😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
#6
thanku😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thanks for liking it...will write soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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waiting for ur comments😊😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice start...

Loved both the parts...
N
Do cont soon...

Waiting...

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Posted: 10 years ago
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This is FAB!! Really awsm! Plz do PM me wen u update... :)

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