Os based on upcoming episode of yhm dears

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hi dear friends

It is my first os dears and I assure you that I am not at all fluency in english please bare my English and forgive me for grammatical mistake dears

Story after ishita and family known about surrogacy track

Ishra: no one can separate them even destiny

Part: 1

(Hint: argument between ishra)

Use I for ishita and R for raman

R: ishita please listen me what are doing

I:why I have to listen you raman

R:ishita please don't go away from me

I:you only make me to away from you raman

I:I trust you raman what you did to me and I cant believe this why you do this to me raman and I trust you when you said about cold storage incident that you try to help shagun and I accept it but now you make shagun as surrogate mother and it is insult to me dear and you cheat me and get sign from me what is this raman it is your love raman

R: ishita don't want to cheat you and don't want anyone to call you barren women so only I did this and I agree what I did is wrong just give me one chance and listen me once ishita and you misunderstand me

I: how many chance I have to given you raman you did mistake continuously and I cant get in anymore raman

R:please by god sake understand my love ishita

I: it is love raman and you choose child more than me

R:not like that ishita how can I say to you

I:I know that raman still you not over in shagun and I know that you love me raman but if situation occur you to choose either me or shagun and cried

R:of course I choose you only dear and shagun is close chapter in my life dear you are everything please trust me ishu cried while talking

I: I trust you more than trust myself but can't know raman

I: shall I ask one question raman what is the difference between you and subu

R:how would you ask me such type of question ishita are you doubt my love cried continuously

I :why can't I ask this question raman and subu leave me because I am incomplete women and you come in my life and I think that you are not like him but you prove that you are also like him raman

I: if you love me you have to live for my happiness raman what you did me raman and you doesn't care about my likes and make me insult in front of shagun crying that is I am not fit for mother

R:not like that ishita you misunderstood me and you are everything to me ishita and I can't live without you please cried

I: are you really love me raman then prove me

R: ok you tell how could I proved

I: just stay out of my life and I want my respect and I never want to see your face raman (with that she take the luggage and moved from room) and I ashamed to love you raman

R:ishita please wait while calling cried continuously

Part :2

(argument between raman and his family)

( P for papa and m for mummiji)

R: mummiji please tell her not to go away from me papa please

M:ishita puttar wait there itself why you go alone we are also come with you

R:mummiji what are you saying cried

M:this time you did big mistake raman and slap him and said I am ashamed to be your mother raman

R:mom please papa please told ishita and mom to not go away from me please

P: it is not ishita or toshiji decision it is my family decision and every time you make me proud but this time you make me ashamed to cal you as my son and told everyone to ready to go

R: papa I did mistake I accept it please I can't live without you all and please listen me once cried continuously

Ruhi: please ishima just try to listen papa once please I am sure papa didn't do wrong

I: ruhi keep quiet and come with me

( all are ready to live that time entry of shagun with dr manoj )

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Posted: 9 years ago
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reply me dears

remaining part here

Part 3:

( Reveal the truth )

(S for shagun and ma for manoj and a for abhishek and p for pathak)

S: what are you doing ishita do you didn't trust raman and you always said that you love raman and care for him more than me and how can you take this decision and I am ashamed of you

I: it is none of your business shagun just leave us alone

R: shagun just stop it how can you talk like this to my ishita and I warn you please stay out of my life and family and you have no rights to interfere in my family matter

S:what did you say raman your ishita wow raman and once again I clear you all and I know my limit and I don't want to interfere in any other family matter and I came to tell the truth because of me you landed in problem and I just want everyone to listen me please

Flashback: (happen during an argument of ishra that time shagun call raman to thank him and instead of off the phone and raman make phone on due to that shagun know everything happen in raman home)

I:don't want to hear anything from unnecessary people

Ma: ishitaji just listen shagun once please its good for you and family

Ma: raman doesn't do anything wrong and he did for me and shagun

Flashback

Ma: possible way to make ishita mother is surrogacy raman

R:no manoj it is not good idea and ishita also doesn't accept and I want ishita to be mother but I cant use this idea and there are some other treatment na now technology is developed please don't force me

Ma:please ask ishita once raman

( fb: Ashok insult ishita in front of all during party in front of him and he is hurt by ashok words and so he ask about surrogacy to ishita and ishita doesn't wanted then raman ask for manoj to help him)

Ma: came to know everything about bad happening in hospital by shagun and both vow to find what is happening in hospital that time raman came and ask help to manoj

S and ma: both said to raman that we need your help to find out what is happening in hospital and tell everything about surrogacy scam and raman accept to help him because he know how every women going through this infertility problem especially his ishita and he said I help you for my ishita and both said to him that don't share this matter to anyone until we found out misery completely asked him to promise and he promise him

(Fb: raman make ishita to sign paper and lakshmi enter shagun find out about her and shagun to be surrogate all are preplanned by s and ma and raman)

Raman entered home to tell every matter to ishita and came to said good news that some doctor came to hospital she is specialized in infertility problem through manoj he get appointment before he tell everything to ishita and ishita find out herself and misunderstood raman

S: still you doesn't believe I will give you evidence and on the tv and they said about problem occur in hospital and praise the trio and all are shocked

S:ishita you want to know what is happening in cold storage na

A: no need to say shagunji and I will tell her everything

A: all bad thing happen in your home is due to ashok we get all evidence against him

A:do you all remember when I came to your home to investigate rinki missing case and some witness said that I see argument between raman and rinki and whom he is none other than ashok and when I came to home take raman to police station and I saw ashok there in car parking area nearer talk with courier boy but I go with raman to police station but I make one police to find out what he is doing there through that I found out ashok bribe courier boy and make him to deliver parcel to ishita and surely know that you will come to rescue raman and I wait for in police station and I don't know what is in the parcel that time you came and tell everything about that time I am 100% sure that ashok is surely involved in this matter and we enquire shagun why you got to cold storage and then she said that got call from some policemen about ashok so she goes and find out everything that shagun tell illegal business happen in ashok factory to pathak to help ishita and we find out that some informer is here in police station to help ashok and ishitaji do you remember while you come to give information to me that time one police men na he is responsible for everything and I take him her to tell truth

Policemen : what sir told is everything right ashok try to kill shagun in cool storage that time sir also came and ashok ask me to slow down the temperature in cool storage and I do what he say

A:now arrest ashok he is landed in jail and his brother suraj tell everything about ashok and told him to come

Suraj : sorry to everyone ashok give money to someone to kill ishita and using this cd claim complain against raman that he kill his wife because he having affair with his ex wife but instead of ishita they attack simmi and what raman do it in cold storage is try to help shagun from dead if raman doesn't give cpr then surely shagun died(you bas***d raman try to beat him how can you try to kill my wife and attack my sister and I never leave you bas***d and you and your brother going to pay for this and acp came forward to stop raman to beat him and ask police to take suraj away)

P: what acp told is truth and I only asked shagun to give details about illegal happening in ashok factory and I give information to you what she told to me babhi

S:now you trust raman ishita still you need proof

S:I did many things to separate you and raman ishita but this time I didn't to anything please trust me and what do you think ishita still raman love me yes raman is in love not me but you and you are everything to him and one who have rights in raman is you and only you not me please try to understand ishita and please if possible forgive me for my mistakes done in past and I am really sorry raman and I promise you I never come between you and raman and ishita please take care of my children's

Ma: thanks raman you did so much for me and one happy news raman shagun accept my love and we both go to meet my mom in America tomorrow

R: congratulation guys and lets begin your life with love and hug him

After s and ma go

Acp: don't worry raman continuously enquire ashok whether he involved in rinki murder case also and please give some time we will find who killed rinki and we also try to find whom try to kill ishitaji and atta ck simmi also

R:I trust you and you surely find culprit as soon as possible and hug him then acp go


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Posted: 9 years ago
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part4 is here dears

Part 4:

( Ishra together with family )

M: I am sorry raman and we did mistake by misunderstand you if possible forgive us (all are asking him forgiveness except ishita )

R:mummiji what are you saying it is not all of your mistakes and if I tell everything before it will not happen and I am only responsible for everything happened here I am really sorry please forgive me

Cried continuously

(All are hug him and console him except ishita)

R: please request you all I can bear anything but away from you all is impossible and if it is possible that time I am dead

I beg you if I did mistake punish me and slap me and you all have rights but not try to away from me

My family is strength and weakness to me without you all I cant live

That time ruhi come and hug him and I said I love you papa and raman hug her and kiss her and thanks her for trust him

Ishita is in shocked state and she continuously cried

That time raman see her and tell other family members that want to be alone and want to take rest with out any response from other he go to his room and locked his room and cried for hurt all his family especially ishita now he get his family to support him but not ishita and he wait for ishita to console him but ishita doesn't come near him and he ashamed of his love for ishita and he break his family by his own hands


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Posted: 9 years ago
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part5 is here dears

Part 5:

(heart to heart talk between our ishra)

Now ishita know everything but she is ashamed of her words and love to raman and she think that raman angry on her and so only he go away from her and cried continuously and she determined to get back her love her raman and go to their room and knock the door when she knock the door raman know that it is his only love ishita and open the door and go nearer to window and ashamed to show his face to her but ishita think that he get her words seriously and doesn't want to show his face to her and she cried and call raman and when she call he is happy that at least ishita call his name and get angry on himself for make her cry and he can bare anything but her cry unable to bear the pain he hug her and cried and she is happy that her raman is with her she doesn't need anything in this world

R:I am sorry ishita I make you hurt and break all promises and I ashamed of me and cried in shoulder

I : what are you saying raman I only hurt you by my words and ashamed to love by you raman

R:it is not your mistake ishu and if I tell everything before it will not happen and your anger is correct no one can bare what I did but...cried

I:but raman...console him and cried

R:your decision to stay away from me I cant bear the pain to stay away from you and cried and kiss her forehead please change your decision I beg you I cant live with out you jaan

I:how can I live with out you raman I cant and I say it in anger but not through my heart raman and I ashamed of compare of your love and that bas***d subu love I am sorry raman by anger I said...cried

R: I am hurt ...by your words but whatever you said is correct only na and sit in bed and keep his head down and cried

I : ishita come towards her and make him to face her and slap him and said if you said anything I will surely kill you raman how can you compare you to the bas***d and I said it by anger and slap her by her hand to her cheeks continuously said it was my mistake to compare your love to someone and cried then ...

R:raman stop herself to hit her continuously and kiss her cheeks

I :I need punishment raman and I hurt you and not at all trust you and I need evidence to trust you raman and I ashamed of me and never give chance to you to tell truth

R:raman smiled and said so need punishment before said to me think more than twice and then you have to suffer Jhansi ki rani

I:never see raman smiled and said I am ready to get punishment from you raman but you cant tell me to away from you na and seeing raman

R:ask her to stand up and come nearer her now she is nearer to wall raman is closer to her and kiss her cheeks ,nose and forehead and promise me...

I: what I have to promise raman...

R:that you always with me whatever problem occur between ours and you stay with me forever please and cried and you are my jaan ishita

I: kiss in his lips and said I am with you always and both kiss passionately lovely like there is no second to live with out others

Raman take her in his arms and put her on bed and and he is top of her kissing her continuously both goes to different world in this only love only our ishra nothing else

When raman wake up he see his love on his chest sleeping peacefully and hugging him that no can come between them even air and he hug her and kiss her on lips and said thank god for get his love back and said

I love you my jaan

Love=ishra

Fight =ishra

Soulmate=ishra

There is no second without your thoughts ishita

Happy end

Points to note:

For cvs I include over glorification of shagun

For ishra lovers no leap and separation

For raman haters he pay for his mistake

For raman lovers I make him doesn't do any mistake

Please reply me guys and don't mistake me its my point of view and due to your reply only I can correct my mistake dears


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Posted: 9 years ago
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thanks for every writers and friends here in this forum you all are my inspiration to write os and i try my level best to not make anyone to ashamed of my writing and i need your reply dears after so much hesitation i write this os dear and please bare mu english as well as grammatical mistakes dear

eagerly waiting for your reply dears
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Posted: 9 years ago
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It was too good.u satisfied all the needs.
Shagun glorified,Raman repent for his mistake,ishita confrontation, family anger,everything is in nice proportion.
Well written one.
Will be glad if CVS take this in yhm.
I loved it.
Keep writing.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice update
Happy ending
Want to see something like this in show too
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: cutieruhi

It was too good.u satisfied all the needs.

Shagun glorified,Raman repent for his mistake,ishita confrontation, family anger,everything is in nice proportion.
Well written one.
Will be glad if CVS take this in yhm.
I loved it.
Keep writing.



thank you so much for reply me dear

you are first one to reply me dear

i am glad that you like it dear

i agreed i write more but i need your encouragement dears

waiting like waiting for result whether i am going to pass or fail dear


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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: maduragymhasium



thank you so much for reply me dear

you are first one to reply me dear

i am glad that you like it dear

i agreed i write more but i need your encouragement dears

waiting like waiting for result whether i am going to pass or fail dear




Ofcourse u r pass.
Ur concept is beautiful and unique
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Very nice. I hope cvs show as it is in show also its really beautiful Concept 👏

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