Khayali Pulao's SwaSan (Pg 31: Hot Confession part2) - Page 15

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Posted: 10 years ago
Amazing one..Loved Jealous Sanskaar 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
Jealous sanky!ghussa wala sanky haha poor swara:(
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hello... hello...
Sabhi pulao writer ki JAI HO :p
Saare pulao , ek dum fantastic the ... :)
Sorry kisi bhi pulao ko separate comment nahi kiya agar wesa krti to saare pulao ek saath taste krne nahi milte ... :D
Emotional, romantic, cute
Saare pulao awesome the ..<3
Mujhe aur kuch bola nahi jaayega :p ..
Thanks for the lovely pulaos n jisne ye pulao ka idea nikal hai
UNKI JAI :P
Edited by shreyaansh - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Thank you to everyone who enjoyed my ff I will continue soon really enjoy writing but you see the issue is that I live in New York and I am still in high school and I am trying to balance things out but yeah that is why I can't say thank you to all of you who liked it although this is the first ff I will continue

ps this is a long paragraph so I am confused how you made it this far 👍🏼
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hai guys...this is my new kayali pulao here.. so please bear this..
Okay the morning after the long dramatic night.. sanskar proved as innocent by swara .. they hardly get a sleep of 2-3hrs after the drama last night...
In sanskar's room
Sanskar wokeup nd look around .. he cant find swara in the room.. nd the room was soo slient.. he thought its the slience before the dangerous strom..he thought swara may be in the bathroom.. this is the right tym for him to escape becuz he knws once swara find him. He is going to be finish for the drama he did last nyt nd confession too.. he slowly getdown the bed nd without any sound he opens door to get out from there..
Then he heard voice from behind
So u woke up ...
He turns back .. he sees swara.. swara looks like kali maa to his eyes
And then he strts explaining to swara ..
Swara listen i can explain ..
Swara comes forward takes the stick ...says okay explain .. i ll listen
San: sorry swara ill never do that nd say that again(starts running)
Swa:(chases sanskar with the stick): do even knw what u did last nyt.. u drank nd ruined our whole plan..nd i told u no need to tell anyone about wat u did to me in past .. but noo u have ur own plans right.. what if any finds this is a fake marriage
Sans:swara sorry .. i will never ever do that again..(till running from swara)
Swa: u came home ina drunken state nd ruined everything .. and want me too forgive you
Sanskar thinking swara is angry with me because i came home ina drunken state not because i proposed her..
Mean while someone opens their door nd its sujatha
Sanskar runs towards her nd hides behind her and says mom please save me from this jhansi ki rani..
Sujata comes forward and takes the stick from swara's hand nd turns toward sasnkar nd she too starts hitting him.
San:momm u too.. iam sorry mom
Sanskar comes toward swara nd sujata nd he holds his ears nd says sorry sorry i wont drink alochol again
Sujata hugs him and cries and she asks swara to join their hug .. they had a group hug nd smiles
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Posted: 10 years ago
so sweet prathyusha. So swara is not angry for his confession. So sweet sujatha also wants to beat him. Loved it very much.
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Posted: 10 years ago
My second pulao 😆 "THE SILENCE"
Swara was giving sanskar THE SILENT TREATMENT after the confession
After proving him innocent she didn't say a word to him
Sanskar was restless and he was fed up
Its been a week and swara was not talking to him
He saw her in the corridor from his room and decided that this was it
As she was passing from their room he pulled her in and closed the door
Due to this sudden action of sanskar, swara got scared and was about to shout but sanskar kept his hand on her mouth to prevent that
Sans- sshhh its me
Swara - looked at him furiously and through her eyes indicted him to leave her hands and mouth
Sans- oh sorry and he left her
As soon as he release her swara started leaving but sanskar came in front of her
Sans- tum mughse baat kyun nahi kar rahi ho?
Swara- pls sanskar jaane do mughe i dont want to talk to you
Sans- par kyun swara ?
Swara- i think u know that
Sans- OK I am sorry mughe tumse wo sab nahi kehna chahiye tha but pls tum ussko bhool jao Aur kam she kam humari dosti toh bannnaye rakho pls
Swara - bhool jao? Kaise bhool jao sanskaar? Tum ko yeh sab mazak lagta hai kya?
Sans - par kya farak padta hai swara ki mai tumhare liye kya feel karta hun why dont u just forget all that
Swara - mughe farak padta hai sanskar
Sans- par kyun? Dekho tum mughe apna dost manti ho aur mai tumahare liye dosti sai badkar feel karta hun toh isse humari dosti par kyun farak pad raha hai swara? I love u but don't expect the same from u can't we just be friends? I promise I won't raise this issue again but pls talk to me dont hate me pls
Swar was stunned -(self thought) yes why am I affected with the confession?
Sans- swara ? Pls swara pls i am sorry
Swara- came out of her thoughts and looked at him he was holding his ear like a school kid, and swara could not help but smile
Sanskar saw that smile and suddenly embraced swara he was so happy -thanks swara i promise aaj k baad tumhe mughmai sirf aur sirf apna dost dikhega you are the best thanks
Swara on the other hand hugged him back with a different feeling all together she was so confused because she never felt this way with lakshay, she never wanted this to be over , she wanted to remain like this and she wanted to feel sanskar's love forever just like this forever and beyond
Edited by luvakanksha - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
^^^^ I liked this a lot 😊 Hope they show something like this in the show too...
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: gayu6

so sweet prathyusha. So swara is not angry for his confession. So sweet sujatha also wants to beat him. Loved it very much.

Thankyou gayu..
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Posted: 10 years ago
yeah, I loved your silent treatment prediction, but sanskar's last dialouge, that he will cconsider her only as a friend.. That is not okey for me..
Both should have the same feeling..

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