Khayali Pulao's SwaSan (Pg 31: Hot Confession part2) - Page 14

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Posted: 9 years ago
Loved the "HURTED" pulao! 👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wowww awsum... Continue kro na Hurted wle jo plzzz
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Posted: 9 years ago
Afreena...Yeh kya...
Poor swara...u left it middle. ...
Do cont with this plot...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Untitled- ( will reveal d title once I complete dis 😉 - itz part 1 will continue later )

Sanskaar breaks mirror in anger & injured his hands.
His right hand wz bleeding badly.

Swara rushes towards him.
Swara - ye kya liya tumne?
pagal hogaye ho?

Sanskaar staring her in anger.
intense eyelock.
she held his injured hand but he immediately takes away his hands
angry glare glare
Sanskaar - Koi zarurat nahi hai itnna concern dikhane ki
tears dropped down her cheeks
& he turns otheside to avoid eyelock wid her
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hayye angry, intense Sanskaar and concerned Swara. Loving it Mishu.
Do continue soon.
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Miss-swasan



Hello everyone I am new to indian forums so bear with me. this is a short swasan fanfiction so hopefully you will like it.


Ek Chutki Sindoor ki keemat tum kya Jaano Sanskar


so swara asked him why did you do this sanskar walked out on her


sanskar : walked in after 30 min

swara: where were you goddammit i was worried and how could you just leave like that you didn't even answer my question from before how could you do this sanskar how ...

sanskar: what do u mean how i did it to save you ... i mean the us

swara: do you even know what this means do u we are technically married now you filled my maang with sindoor

sanskar: oh stop being so filmy swara you might as well just scream Ek Chutki Sindoor ki keemat tum kya Jaano Sanskar

swara : you think this is a joke

sanskar : no swara i am tired of all this i am tired of ragini and all her games but you know one tink swara and let me make this clear if someone ever says anything against you i won't listen did you hear what they say oh after we are done with this i will leave you

swara: isn't it true aren't you going to leave me after we expose ragni

sanskar: no he said barely so swara could hear

swara: well isn't it

sanskar : that's when his drunken state took over NO

i don't want you to leave you hear me No i can't lose you to

swara : what are you saying tum paral ho gaya ho kya

sanskar : hai yes miss swara sanskar maheshwari i have gone crazy and it because i have fallen after i thought i would have never fall again but it is you who has made me fall

swara: what ka baqwaz karahao tum i never made you fall did you get hurt let me see she said worried

sanskar : with a goofy grin on his face WHY DON'T YOU UNDERSTAND I HAVE FALLEN AND IT WAS BECAUSE I KNOW NOW THAT I CAN'T WAKE UP WITHOUT SEEING YOU IN THE MORNING AND LAUGHING WITH YOU AND DO WHAT WE ALWAY DO I CAN'T IMAGINE MY LIFE WITHOUT YOU I LOVE YOU SWARA

swara: tears falling from her eyes shocked right before she was about to say something

sanskar : collapsed on her shoulder



so what do you guys think was it good or not should I continue if so than like and comment and feel free to add suggestions

please continue its a good one
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Miss-swasan



Thank you that really means a lot because I always read your Swasan fan fictions love them😳


Aww thank you so much dear 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
Mishu awesome pulao 👏
Continue soon 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago


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Posted: 9 years ago
👏 👏 👏
Amazing pulao dear
Hehe Sansku is jealous 😛
Loved it 😳

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