La Douleur Exquise | ArHi OS

God its so painful that they cant be together .. Beautifully written:)

Emotional and heart touching OS
Loved it
Well written
Thanks for the pm

God! How do I say something that would do justice to this piece! "Say Something" is one of my favourite songs. Sometimes, when I am in need of some sort of catharsis, this is one of my go-to songs. And, since you have chosen this song, it already makes the OS so special. And, the OS, itself. I want to be mad at Khushi. A part of me is, but although I am extremely heartbroken for Arnav, I understand Khushi. I actually get her. And, deep down, I think I am capable of something as unfair as what Khushi did. It takes a lot to walk away from one's family. And, sometimes, love is simply not enough. And, Arnav caught between frustration with her and his desperate love for her, it truly is heart-wrenching. And, you captured all of this conflict of emotions & circumstances in such a short piece. I read in some weekly magazine interview with Dan Brown that editing is half of the art of writing. I don't know if you are blessed with the ability to convey your thoughts & make readers feel the emotions in as few words as you do, or you meticulously edit, but your OSs are always crisp, precise & sharp. And I love that. And, I love the song. And, I loved this OS. Thanks for the scrap, by the way.

Soulful and realistic. Something thousand face in this world. It's so easy to think O True Love Triumphs All. But really the choice is never that easy... As is brought home here. Since it is our favorite pair we want them to go against the world... Really, really felt for Arnav! Really want Khushi to regret her decision... really want you to not make this an OS.

I don't like sad one shot's or sad anything actually!

Why you do this to me, Rae? Tell me why.

Very real and heartbreaking. Especially him pleading to no avail.

Very well written. I could feel their pain. Each right in their own way.
Amazing one shot!
Thanks for the PM.