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Arunima

@barsha_dash

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#41

This was emotional and heart wrenching. Sometines it is really difficult to choose between family and the one we love. A part of us will always regret for our choice. Beautifully written. Loved the title

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PSharada

@PSharada

Stunner

+ 10

Posted: 10 years ago

#42

Awesome OS so emotional, heart wrenching and I felt so bad for both Arnav and Khushi. Sometimes love is just not enough - I so desperately want to see what happens to Arnav and Khushi later on. Will they meet again? Is there any way you can write an continuation to this OS as a part 2 and give it a proper closure. And the song - Gosh it is so sad and it suited the OS so perfectly. Good job.

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Sona

@mistyrains

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

#43

Firstly, love the title, the banner - they were both exquisite!

Reading the entire piece again, I felt that weird feeling at the bottom of my throat - the pain, the heart-rending emotion - the story conveyed all that. But I guess what stayed with me, is - we see this happening in nearly every other household, to our cousin or our friend. You picked up that emotion and put it into words and created something beautiful. It makes me wish you would write another part to it. Great work! [Also, you can totally ignore this babble, if it doesn't make sense :p]

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rulama

@rulama

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 10 years ago

#44

Torn between the various pulls! Emotions beautifully portrayed

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Ayesha Farha

@oOChaiBiskutOo

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#45

Dont tell me this wont have a sequel.pleaseee! And it was short and emotional.Enough to hurt an ArHi fan :/

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Farwa

@-Farwa_Ibrahim-

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#46

Wow! without many words you gave us such an excellent OS. Their pain and desperatiln, Arnav's tries to not let go and Khushi's pain of not wanting to let go such a beautiful love yet her helpless situation made her do just that. Loved it