||Beintehaa|| SwaSan FF!

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Posted: 9 years ago
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||Prologue||

Kyunn he shouted again looking up at twinkling stars as if they will respond to his query, as if they will ease his heartace,as if they will help him from losing her forever, but other than for d fast moving wind which touched him in such a force that it gave him piercing pain there was no response but it was nothing compared to what he was feeling inside,so he welcomed d forceful wind with wide open arms n screamed till he lost his voice n he closed his eyes only to see broken old man begging him to save his son,his bade papa the man who never bowed his head in front of anyone was on his foot begging him to save his younger brother ,to bring him to normal n he has promised his bade papa to save him even if it's at d cost of heartbreak for him he will give his younger brother what he wants his love my love Swara!


Okay that's it!tell me if u all want me to continue or nt!

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Superb start..continue soon 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: _Faiqa_



||Prologue||

Kyunn he shouted again looking up at twinkling stars as if they will respond to his query, as if they will ease his heartace,as if they will help him from losing her forever, but other than for d fast moving wind which touched him in such a force that it gave him piercing pain there was no response but it was nothing compared to what he was feeling inside,so he welcomed d forceful wind with wide open arms n screamed till he lost his voice n he closed his eyes only to see broken old man begging him to save his son,his bade papa the man who never bowed his head in front of anyone was on his foot begging him to save his younger brother ,to bring him to normal n he has promised his bade papa to save him even if it's at d cost of heartbreak for him he will give his younger brother what he wants his love my love Swara!


Okay that's it!tell me if u all want me to continue or nt!

please continue
nice start
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice! Please tell me... You mean you write about Beintehaa show and swaragini show?
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Posted: 9 years ago
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WOW...
WHAT A BEAUTIFUL CONCEPT...👏👏👏
JUST LOVED IT...
CONTINUE SOON😳😉
AND PLEASE P0M ME😃

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