Reva-Bhagat SS - Never Belittle Love

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Hey, was a MJHT & D3 Forum member *still am for D3, just inactive* & wrote this SS on two of my fav couples bt had to stop it coz my exams n work.
And Ii really love Reva-Bhagat jodi n chemistry n wud love to continue my SS too...

1) Just imagine UG-Reva & Bhagat-DK as siblings.
2) DK-UG are married.
3) *pls imagine Bhagat *wearing a dark blue shirt with black jeans*, Reva *wearing a black jumpsuit*, UG *wearing a thin-strap White Salwaar-Churidaar* & DK *wearing a light yellow shirt with blue jeans* talking to the audience n bakground poora black hain...*



NEVER BELITTLE LOVE

Bhagat: Log kehte hain that u should not dishonor love...
Kyunki its precious... and u never know when u will find true love again.
And u know what! MEINE WAHI GALTI KARDI!
Teen saal pehle, agar koi mujhse kehta ki "Bhagat, tujhe PYAAR ho gaya hain!"... i would laugh at that that person & tell him 2 get himself checked!
Par iss bar... Mein galat tha! Woh jaa rahi thi... Woh mujhe akela chodke Los Angeles jaa rahi thi... And the worst part---- MEIN CHAHKAR BHI NAHI ROK SAKTA THA USSEY!
Stranga na... jis ladki ke wajah se aaj meine pyaar main believe karna seekha hain... wahi ladki... Meri Best Friend... Meri idiot, risk-taker... mujhe akela chodke jaa rahi thi!
U guys might be wondering ki mein kiski baat kar raha hu, right? *rubs hands* ohk... here it goes...
REVA MATHUR!!!! *smiles* Umang Mathur ki twin (fraternal) sister... dono main zameen-asmaan ka difference... jaha ek taraf Umang thi a bit girly-girly... waha yeh Reva... uff! ekdum jhalli! U know... dressed up in torn jeans n tees... I had hardly ever seen her in dresses... woah! woah! i'm not sayg short skirts n micro-minis... pagal hain kya! na... woh toh baaki girls ka department tha! i'm saying woh knee-length waali... flowers-type... ha...woh dresses... kabhi bhi nahi pehenti... pata nahi kyun! kabhi itna dress up nahi karti... u know plain n simple rehti... mmm... Swimming karne ka bahut shauk tha ussey. In fact, humare poore gang main hum sab swimmers the- me, Reva, UG, Jai, DK, Amit, Jugnu, Kanika, Priyanka, Sana, Annie ... hum sab swimmers the... ha! ek cheez dono behne main jo common thi- EGO! uff! unko ek baar koi challenge kare na... especially Reva ko... toh by god! uss bande ki toh tai-tai phish! kyunki swimming main in dono behno ko koi nahi hara sakta tha! KOI NAHI MEANS KOI BHI NAHI! YAHA TAK KI... *looks here n dere, leans a bit forward & whispers* MEIN BHI NAHI! *goes back* but jo bhi kaho... Reva ko challenge karne main jo mazza tha na... woh kahi aur nahi tha... *smiles*...
DK: OYE SAALE! Sab kuch tu hai batayega ya kuch hum dono ke liye bhi chodega!
Bhagat: Aaao tum dono... intense couple...
*DK-UG enter together... UG is wearing a white salwar & churidaar, has a mangalsutra around her neck, sindoor & red-white bangles & DK is wearing a white shirt with blue jeans.. both are smiling...*
DK: Yeh lo bhai! aa gaye humaare Swim Team ke *puts his one arm around UG & the other around DK* intense couple!
UG: Abe chuhe kahi ke! *hits Bhagat on the back of his head* hum dono ki chod aur Reva ur apni bata... *facing the audience* pata hain... woh mere aur DK ke shaadi ke liye bhi nahi aayi... *pouts* kehti hain ki LA meri shaadi se zyada impt hain uske liye! gandi...
DK: haa... mein bhi... in fact, hum sab kaafi hadh tak surprised the jab Reva ne hume bataya ki woh humaari shaadi ke liye nahi aayegi as LA usske liye zyaada impt ho gaya tha...
Bhagat: i knw... quite strange 4 every1... bcz, Reva... UG ki shaadi ko lekar bahut excited thi... u knw like hw any other sister wd be! so.. it came as a surprise jab ussne phone pe sabko bataya ki LA usske liye DK-UG ki shaadi se zyada impt hain!
DK: well u knw... Reva, Reva WAS different than other girls... she knew how to say NO, she knew where to draw the line, she knew when & where to put her foot down!
Bhagat: and she also knew karate! by god!! *massaging his arm* Iss madam se *pointing 2wds UG* bet ke harne chakkar main, i wud end up gettg beaten up by Reva! Woh issliye kyunki Reva ko karate seekhne ka chaska tha... bachpan se hi! And my bad luck... I used 2 drop her, pick her up & be her punching bag... classses main jo bhi seekhti, mujhpe try karti! toh usske hote huye, har ladki Swim team ki safe thi! Literally main... all thanks 2 her karate, she would never need a "knight-in-shining-armour"...
UG: Except for those times when she used to be drunk!!!
DK: oh yeah! tab toh either me, Bhagat, Jai, Jugnu aur Amit... hum paancho main se koi ek... actually, mostly Bhagat hota tha Reva ke saath! Taaki koi bhi random ladka usska fayda na utha sake...
UG: Par us din jo hua...
DK: woh bilkul bhi nahi hona chaiye tha!
Bhagat: n d worst part--- WOH SAB... MERI AUR REVA KI EK BET KE WAJAH SE HUA THA!!!

i just hope u guys like it...
Crticisms are mot welcome...
taniya

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hey Tanya (hope that is ur name)
Lovely start to a very promising story!!👏👏
So...TK n UG r married huh?? (even I felt sorry 4 UG wen she used 2 run behind TK...haha)
And...REWA kidhar he Bhai??
Hamare love lorn romeo ko kaha chodke chali gayi??
And Jai??
Well...I don't relly like him enymore so..yeah!!
Btw, r u new 2 d forum?? Coz I've neva seen u around...
LOl srry if m wrong!!
Do continue soon...eager 2 read more!!
-Sanyu
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Posted: 10 years ago
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HEY TANIYA THOUGH I DONT FOLLOW THE SHOW READ IT JUST NOW IT'S NICE DEAR A GOOD BEGINNING DO CONTINUE IT😊
WAITING FOR UR UPDATE EAGERLY DEAR😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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heyaasss ppl...
m glad u guys lyk it 😃
Part 2 on Pg 3.
N Yes, My REAL NAME'S TANIYA

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: taniya_dostii

heyaasss ppl...
m glad u guys lyk it 😃
Part 2 on Pg 3.
N Yes, My REAL NAME'S TANIYA

T

😕there IS only one page😕😕
plz pm whn u update
-Sanyu
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice plz pm me if possible
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Eagerly waiting for it...😳
lots of love,
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lovely start dear😃
though i don't watch swim team..but would surely like to read ff😊
do update fast and pm me😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Its high time yaar
Update now😭😭😭
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Part 2-

DK: So.. as we said before, Rewa was a complete tom-boy! Ussey na.. ladkiyo ke tarah dress up karna aata hi nahi tha... Woh na ek no. ki... kya kehta hain tu ussey bhai?
Bhagat: Jhalli! Jhalli thi Rewa... Swimming karna, boys se pange lena, parties main top-jeans pehenke... full talli hoke dance karna... yeh sab the madam ji ka fav tym-pass...
UG: Aur galti se ussey koi ladki waali baat bol do! Phir toh bhaiya ji... tumhe na bhagwaan hi bachaye...
DK: But I remember, ussney ek baar jo ek woh White color ki long dress pehni thi... usme... she was looking very good!
UG: Good? Ladki ke tarah lag rahi thi woh! Bhagat ko dekha tha uss din... kaise isski aankhein gol-gol ande ki tarah ho gayi thi!! Rewa ko aise dekh raha tha yeh idiot *smacks Bhagat at his head a bit* jaise ussey abhi shaadi ke liye propose kar dega!
*Rewa dress- http://updatestv.com/wp-content/uploads/2015/09/maxresdefault4.jpg*
All laugh...
UG: Yaar poocho hi mat! Woh dress ussey pehnane ke liye, meine aur DK ne kitne papad bele!!
DK: lekin end result itna acha nikla na???
UG: Acha? Boss, solid tha! Rewa toh...
Bhagat: Arrey yaar... koi mujhe bhi bolne dega kya? kabse tum hi dono lage jaa rahe ho!!
UG & DK; Sorry... 😛
Bhagat *sighs*: Rewa... actually mein pehle thodi si background story batata hu uss din... jis din ki yeh dono baat kar rahe hain. Uss din, hamare Academy main "Sibling Day" manaya jaa raha tha... yes, "Sibling Day"! Woh issliye...
UG *talks in super-fast mode*: Issliye kyunki jo founder the, he lost his sibling in an accident... Toh har saal humare Academy main "Sibling Day" manaya jata tha. Ab aage bade?
Bhagat: uhhh... thnx UG. So, "SD" ke din... meine casually Rewa ko ek dress gift kardi... *takes a pause & smiles* bina yeh jaane that Rewa dislikes... correction, HATES dresses! Woh issliye... *stops UG from talking* kyunki mein in sab ki gang main... that time, new tha.
UG: haan... aur surprisingly, uss dress ko dekhkar Rewa didn't over-react...
DK: Instead, she wore that dress...
Bhagat: and jab woh dress pehenke bahar aayi na... she was... she was looking very, very beautiful... itni beautiful lag rahi thi ki... ki... *pauses* uss din... and I mean it ok! uss din mjuhe aisa laga ki meine uss jitni beautiful ladki apne life main nahi dekhi hain! matlab mein toh... *goes speechless*
UG: exactly! aise hi speechless ho gaya tha yeh idiot!
Bhagat blushes and UG-DK smile.

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