MG #2 - Be-intaah...Mohabbat ya Junoon/th#3added - Page 47

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Posted: 9 years ago
nice update
maan is rude but he is also correct
wat is twist?
waiting eagerly
cont soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
awesome update..👏
nice flashback but currently maan rude with geet..😔
excited for next soon...
thanks for pm...!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
geet is hiding d truth abt children.will it cause probs?
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Posted: 9 years ago

WOW!! wonderful update...loved it dear... sorry for late comment... I am not well...just returned to IF after 15 days...when will u update ch 21?

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Posted: 9 years ago
Maan trying hard to stay stern but his love for her is weakening him.
Nice part
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Posted: 9 years ago
part 16-20
awesome updates...
ooo so dadi planned maan's fake engagement n announced it for geet...dadi ka dimag kitna tez hai 😆
geet came n maan is angry on her...he is hurting her with his words...
cuties 1 month trip pe gaye hai...hope inki mu jaldi clear ho jaye...
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Posted: 9 years ago
it's really interesting story I really like it
plz send me nxt part link plzzz
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Posted: 9 years ago




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Part 21

She comes after five minutes wearing his shirt only and taking steps towards him...

.

He looks her shocked and she feeling shy sees his gaze...

Geet : maan asa kya dekh rhe ho

.

Am not wearing your shirt first time

.

Khi aap

Maan : just stop it

He stands from bed and angrily come closer to her...

Tum kbhi nhi sudhr sakti ho na geet

.

.

Kya chahti ho

Is baar.

.

Is baar kuch milana nhi hai kya drink mein

Mere sath sone ke liye

.

She hurt with his words, but this is true too of her life...

She painfully takes his name "maan"

.

He left her in tears and go outside, she fall on floor...

.

Shi khte hai log

Kitna bhi bhag lo

Apne ateet se

Chahe kitni baar bhi maafi maang lo

Apni galatiyo ke liye

.

Kuch kadve sch kbhi picha nhi chodte

Flashback in

Geet first meet with maan is so drastic...but meeting with maan in party and seeing him in office attire, his way of talk, his attitude and listen good comments on maan from her dad...she think his first bad image into good image...

The whole night passed out thinking about him...and new morning rays fall on her face..she not realize, when night end and new day come...

The moment I think about you
I go to another world

Where I feel immense happiness in my heart

That's a first move towards love or liking

Unknown from me

But I want to rejoice this again and again

.

One week passed, but that night, little moments which she spent with him, fleshing in front of her eyes again and again...

.

Oh god

What happening to me

I want to meet with him again

.

Aur iske liye mujhe ye pata krna honga

Is waqt Mr. khurana hai kaha

.

She calls dad...

Malik : is waqt humari princess ne hume kaise yaad kiya

Geet : dad

I want maan number

Malik : maan

.

.

Kaun maan

Geet : dad

Mjak mt kijiye na

I know

What you want to hear

.

Dad I like him

And I want to meet him

Now happy

Malik : acha

Which type you like him

Geet : dad

Aaj hi sb jaanana hai kya

Malik : number toh ase mein nhi de sakta

Par ha

Office ka chaiye toh de sakta hu

Geet : dad

Aap apni beti ko mna kr rhe hai

Malik : beta

Personal number wo har kissi ko nhi dete hai

Geet : dad

Malik : pa ha

Meri aaj ek meeting hai maan khurana se

You want to join

Geet : am coming dad

Malik : no shorts

Geet : I know dad

Aapke office mein bs geet yu aayi

.

I never thought I would love someone like you
Never in my dreams that I would meet you
But then, as I travel in my life's journey
You walk into my life and I fall for you...

.

.

.

Geet : dad

Mein kaisi lag rhi hu

Dad : my princess

Geet : oh dad

Love you

She hugged dad by side...

Dad : love you too

.

Geet : waise ye meeting kis liye

Jaha tk mujhe pata hai

Humara koi contract nhi hai

.

Malik : ha abhi nhi hai

Par aaj sayad sign ho jaaye

.

Mr. khurana want to book our hotel for foreign clients...

.

Actually beta

Unke kuch clients forign se aa rhe hai

Wo unke liye bhut important hai

Kuch rooms permanently book krna chahte hai

For one year

And plus

Wo humare hi hotel mein unki upcoming parties organize krna chahte hai

.

Geet : par dad ye toh chota sa kaam hai

Wo yaha office mein kyun aa rhe hai

Wo toh directly hotel mein call krke bhi ho sakta tha

Ya fir manager se baat krte

.

Malik : I know beta

Wo kaam whi se honga

Yaha maine unhe

Ek project de neke liye bulaya hai

.

Geet : kaisa project

Malik : maine decide kiya hai

We going to open one new hotel

Geet : dad

Aap toh textile se hotel chain business mein aa rhe ho kya

Malik : nhi

Abhi toh asa koi irada nhi hai

Mr. serghil aur maine milke ye decision liya hai

Hume pichli partnership se fayda huya

Toh socha ek aur hotel mein invest kr lete hai

Geet : hmm

Ok

*********

Mahesh khurana : this project completely handle by my son maan

Malik : nice work young man

Maan : thanks Mr. malik

Malik : from our side

Geet going to handle this project

Aange ki jitni bhi meeting hongi

Ye handle karengi

Geet shocked hear this...she have no idea about this... Her father does this with her...

Maan : ok

.

.

Mahesh, malik & shergil just randomly talks on any topic, another side maan & geet standing alone... In this between geet get message from her dad "talk with him"

Geet : hello maan

Maan : hey

Geet : nice presentation

Maan : thanks

.

.

.

Geet : wo

(think:- geet what you doing

This not suits on your personality

What he think about you)

Maan : you want to says something

Geet : no

(think : of course yes

But how

.

Abhi mohit hota nay aha

Usse to tujhe ase dekh heart attack hi aa jaata)

Maan : tum khud se kya baat kr rhi ho

Geet : nothing

Maan : ok

.

Waise

Can I ask some thing

Geet : yes

Maan : abhi jb Mr. Malik ne kha

You going to handle this

You shocked from this information

Am right

Geet : you noticing me

Maan : your face tell geet

Geet : mein kya koi open book hu

Maan : some time

Geet : acha

Maan : hmm

.

She again get message "start your journey with friendship"

She smiles...

Geet : friends

.

Now why you shocked

.

You are lucky maan

Geet malik tumhe khud friendship offer kr rhi hai

Nhi toh mujhse dosti krna itna asaan nhi hai

.

Maan : really

Geet : hmm

Maan : ok

Toh fir ye mehrbani mujh pe kyun

.

Geet : nice question

Maan

.

Frankly speaking

Mujhe asa lagta hai

We become great friends...

Maan : ok

Try krte hai

.

Friends...

He forward his hand, both shake the hand...

Take my hand and lead the way,
Pour out all your deeper thoughts,
Let your soft voice whisper swiftly into my ear,
All these lovely things I want to hear...

**********

Precap : more flashback scenes

Edited by priya_21 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago

Khawaish Season 2 - part 13 on page 27


Is life a Dream? - part 6 on page 76


Waqt ...badalte rishton ki dastaan - part 33 on page 36


Sangini...piya ki mein banugi - part 14 on page 70


Edited by priya_21 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice update maan bohat naraj hai Geet abh dekte hai ke Geet kese manati hai maan ko

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