CV's and their Ishita (updated part III in pg 3)

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Just my prediction from the current scenario, that Ishita will be admitted in hospital with serious injuries. But in an episode or two she will be discharged with a small plaster in her forehead.

Thus these stunts (earthquake, bomb placed bus) are basically to gain trps. So I want to give few tips to continue in this way.

Disclaimer: This is my first story (short one) with no intention to hurt any of the real people. If any characters real resembles it is just coincidental.

Note: This is only for kids and not for any matured adults.

Kids don't search for any logic then you will be highly disappointed.

Caution: Its not proof read, so please read with much care

Scene 1:

Adi is in his classroom trying to concentrate on his studies for the first time as the exams start by next day. His classmate Aakash who is his rival come near to him and talks about the achievement of his mom who won the best teacher's award on the Teachers' day function. Adi is very angry and says that his mom Ishita is the greatest mom on the world who knows everything and can do anything and his entire bhalla family is greeted with the star plus best parivar award. The heated argument continues which is actually noticed by Aakash's father. He plans to teach Adi and his mom a lesson to prove that she is an ordinary woman as so many in India. So he arranges a man to kidnap Ishita and to check how she manages to escape from the danger.

Scene 2:

On the way to the clinic, Ishita notice a dog lying on the middle of the road with wounded leg. She stops her car and reaches the spot blocking the entire traffic at the peak morning office time and attends the wounds of the dog with her first-aid box. All the women praise Ishita for her motherly nature.

Scene 3:

As the traffic becomes heavy, she takes a short cut way to the clinic which is usually a remote area. The man arranged by Aakash's dad, blocks her way by his car and kidnaps her.

Scene 4:

The kidnapper will rope Ishita in the railway track where the fast train comes in just 20 mins and informs Aakash's dad about his achievement. Now Aakash's dad is very happy of his and kidnappers brain. He wants to check how Adi's family will react to save Ishita. He makes a call to Raman (directly to his personal mobile number) and says that Ishita is tied to the railway track where the train will come in 15 mins.

Scene 5:

Raman is upset, shocked, angry will lose his temper but anyway reach the place with entire family members in 5 mins. As Ishita is tied to the track over the bridge they will find it difficult to reach the spot. Everyone will be praying to mata rani, murugan and all gods. When they stand there helpless, Ruhi says "idea".

Scene 6:

Raman and Ruhi run towards the station master's room and ask him to help. The station master calls the guard in the train to inform the situation, but its phone continues to be busy. But he won't try for drivers or his assistant number. Then Ruhi will run out of the room followed by Raman shouting Ruhi.

Scene 7:

Ruhi request the pointsman to change the track of the train. He refuses to do so, as the train moves from north to south and the only option is to divert to west direction, where there will be already many trains. Raman becomes extremely angry and threatens him by saying "will you change the trains' track or I will change your life's track". The poor man will be scared and agrees to change the trains' track.

Scene 8:

Train will be approaching the bridge but at the neck of the movement it just changes the track and moves towards west. All Bhalla family members will praise the lord and will remain standstill, till Ruhi and Raman reaches the spot. Ruhi will run towards Ishita followed by Raman. But both will be shocked to see that Ishita has managed in such a way that she moved beneath the track being still tied with the rope. They will rescue her with small scratches in her elbow.

Scene 9

Everyone will praise Ruhi and Ishita for their extraordinary brain and the supportive effort shown by Raman.

Scene10:

The driver and the passengers will be moving towards west to have a happy voyage by praising the entire Bhalla family.



So if you people like it, comment on this so that I can continue with the bravery of Ishita in Tsunami accordingly.😉

Edited by Ramyalaxmi - 10 years ago

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Posted: 10 years ago
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🤣 I enjoyed so much!! Please entertain us with more 'Karname of Ishita' 🤣
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Brilliant 👏 🤣 🤣
I would not be shocked seeing CVs portraying this 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Loveforlife

🤣 I enjoyed so much!! Please entertain us with more 'Karname of Ishita' 🤣

Thank u. Sure I will post the part II in a while.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Nidoo-

Brilliant 👏 🤣 🤣

I would not be shocked seeing CVs portraying this 😆


Thank u.
@bold: That is the ultimate aim of my scribblings😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Jagat Mata Ishimaa! Zor se bolo.. Bum bum bole.. bum bum bole😆
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Disclaimer: No intention to hurt any of the real people. If any characters real resembles it is just coincidental.

Note: This is only for kids and not for any matured adults.

Kids don't search for any logic then you will be highly disappointed.

Caution: Its not proof read, so its at your own risk

Here it goes

Part II -A (The bravery of Ishita)

As things settled down well, the usual day-to-day happenings took place in bhalla house with full entertainment for the neighbours (as usual). Days moved on while Ruhi Bhalla expressed her smartness in each and every issue with the constant guidance of her Ishima.


Scene1:

Mathu (Mrs. Iyer) had a dream and Lord Murugan asked her to come and perform special offerings. She immediately expressed about the dream to Vishwa and strictly told that she has to go with her entire family to Thiruchendur (Murugan temple in coastal area of south India) to do the pooja. Vishwa expanied her that it is not possible for vandita to join them in the trip and told that he will talk to Mr.Bhalla about it.


Scene 2:

Mrs. Iyer as ausual argued with Toshiji and said that they have to go to Murugan temple as Bhalla family went to MataRani mandir. The debate of plus and minus of the trip was throughly analyzed by both which ended up with zero net result. Ruhi with Ishita entered the house from the school. Ruhi told that she and Adi has quarterly vacation from the next day. She asked them to take her to some sort of tourist spot. Ishita refused stating Adi has special class which he can't miss. No one accepted Ruhi's request except Mrs.Iyer who already has the plan.


Scene 3:

As our Ruhi, the daughter of Ishima is extremely smart like Ishita approached the well-voiced Raman to take her side. Raman tried hard to make Ruhi understand indirectly that the house is not his office and no one actually accept his decision until he shouts/scolds. Then a sudden spark flashed in his brain after being unused for nearly an year, Raman told "Ruhi don't be adamant. Be a good girl. Its not possible to fulfill your wishes always and I am not Ishima". Ruhi got scared thinking Raman actually scolds her. But as expected by Raman, Ishita came into the screen with lectures of 2 pages. In short she told Raman that it the duty of parents to make their children happy w/o hurting others. Though Ruhi was not aware of Raman's trick, she happily joined the side of her Ishima. Thus both the family decided to go to Thiruchendur the next day early morning.


Scene 4:

It was a long trip for all to reach the place by traveling through flight and then in car. They reached the place in the evening. Everyone worshiped the god and offered poojas but Ishita felt something strange. She was not quite happy there while all enjoyed the beautiful ocean on the temple side.


Scene 5:

She started her detective job of scanning the place with her third vision. She noticed sudden weather change with unusual sound of birds in the evening. At distance she noticed a huge crowd near the sea side. Raman saw Ishita and asked about her unstable restless behavior. As usual she just bypassed the question and changed the topic of discussion. But she was perturbed and when Raman moved to Romi and Mr.Bhalla direction, she went to survey the crowd.


Scene 6:

She saw a huge blue ring Octopus, on the shore. Though she knows such octopus are observed in coastal side before, it seems to be very rare. Then she saw the unusual behavior of sea with much noised waves. Usually the noise will be in less db than that of devotees present there.


To Be Continued...


If you people like it, comment on this thread, so that I can continue😉
Edited by Ramyalaxmi - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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just awesome ..keep post ..
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Originally posted by: vinnas

just awesome ..keep post ..


Thank you. Your DP seems to be very familiar for me. If you don't mind r u from chennai?
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Disclaimer: No intention to hurt any of the real people. If any real characters resembles it is just coincidental.

Note: This is only for kids and not for any matured adults.

Kids don't search for any logic then you will be highly disappointed.

Caution: No proof-read. Read if u like, at your own risk.😉


Part II-B continued (The bravery of Ishita)

Scene 7:

Ishita has a feeling that something serious is going to happen. She immediately made a call to her master Ramanathan who is currently in Malaysia to attend the international conference in dentistry. He told her that all meetings are canceled as there is a sudden earthquake with 5.3 Richter scale. He told her that there is a panic among people about tsunami.

Scene 8:

Ishita is now sure of the danger approaching India and especially her lovable family. She immediately told Raman and others that she wants to see the Manapad lighthouse. All are quite amazed at her strange approach. She does not want them to be afraid, so she said that Manapad is a beautiful coastal village with a beautiful holy cross which will be displayed to public only from September 1 to 14. The family immediately agreed to move there as it was the evening of 14th September.

Scene 9:

Everyone moved towards to the tourist bus which they arranged from their hotel. Ishita asked everyone to get in soon and she didn't forget to warn the people in Tamil. She told them that there seems to be unusual behaviour of waters. As the people are well-experienced there, all started rushing away from sea.

Scene 10:

As always bhalla family and Iyer family w/o knowing the circumstances (they will know the danger only when it knock their door) happily started their journey. But Mrs. Iyer who always have a gyan darshan of the future in the out of focus range understood that something serious going to happen (she even heard the warning of Ishita to localities). So she started praying to Lord Murugan, in-fact she accused god for asking her to come there in her dream.

Scene 11:

The Manapad lighthouse is a historical place which is at a distance of nearly 11 Km from Thiruchendur. While approaching the lighthouse, she asked the driver to stop near the road-side shop. Raman asked what you want to buy in this local shops. She didn't waste the previous time and just ignored him and just went to the shop and bought few biscuits, bread, snack items and water bottles. She also bought shawls w/o bargaining and even returned to bus missing the remaining amount for the first time in her life.

Scene 12:

Family reached the place in no time and she ordered all to rush to the top of the lighthouse. Not only the family members but even other people standing there including the guards are shocked of her action. That was the moment she screamed "There is a sign of tsunami." When the word of tsunami just came out of her mouth not only family members, guard, people even dogs and goats rushed to the light house.

Scene 13:

She asked the kids to stay in the steps of lighthouse along with ladies, elders and men to the top. So that the kids and aged people will not see the heart-wrenching moment.

Scene 14:

Then the much anticipated tsunami occurred but the magnitude of the tidal waves are much less than that of 2004. But for the thiruchendur peolple, tsunani water rise heights seems to be surprising as they have seen the waters fall down (i.e waters went inwards sea, leaving behind land) in 2004.

Scene 15:

The complete disaster happened for just 6 min with an ever-lasting wounds in the memory of all present there. Ishita was keen in blocking the site of tsunami rudra dance from particularly Ruhi and Adi apart from other kids.

Scene 16:

Once the effect of tsunami got over, the side-effect of the event occurred. Everyone are arrested in lighthouse as they can't come out to the ground which is fully covered with sea waters, dirt's, dead bodies and what not.

Scene 17:

Ananya and Rohit started crying out of hunger when others are crying for the circumstances. Ishita, Raman and other elders tried to console the kids and some weak minded souls except bhalla family who are born with courageousness.

Scene 18:

Ishita asked Toshiji and Amma to give those biscuits, bread and water to kids, family members and others present there. She refused to have any as she finds it inhumane to eat in that night.

Scene 19:

All stayed back in the top of the lighthouse on the terrible night and Raman gave the shawls to kids and elderly people as there was severe weather condition following tsunami.

Scene 20:

Early morning rescue helicopters came near the lighthouse and asked the people via signals to use the flexible ladders to get in. Everyone got ready and there is a chaos among people. Ishita stepped in and asked the people and guard to go first followed by the priority of their family members.

Scene 21:

All left leaving behind Ishita, Raman, Adi and Ruhi (its usual). Ishita pleaded Raman, Ruhi and Adi to go when pilot told only 3 places are available in the last helicopter. All refused to go leaving Ishita. The small family wanted to stay united always. As there are only few helicopters assigned to this manapad lighthouse area and the rest of the rescue teams has gone to other parts of coastal area. So this family stayed in the lighthouse till the evening by sharing the left out eatables and caring for each other. Even in this state, they followed sharing and caring principle.

Scene 22:

Mr.Bhalla and Mr.Iyer requested the rescue team in the camp to go and save 4 more lives in the lighthouse. By the time, the localities got into the action of demanding the human rights and informed the officers that the dead rate is reduced just because of Ishita who warned them even before the waters itself know about tsunami. The officer finally send a helicopter with a special permission from minister to the spot which can accommodate more than 4 members for sure. Ishita, Raman and their kids safely reached the camp and reunited with their family. All the people praised Ishita for her smartness and humanity.

The end

If you people like it, comment in this thread, accordingly I can continue with "Ruhi got confused" 😊


Edited by Ramyalaxmi - 10 years ago

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