Poem- He was Everything To Me! *PMs Later *

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Posted: 10 years ago
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He was everything To me!!
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He was beautiful creation of God, and I, a husk of darkness.
He looked at me smiling, I looked away, some uncanny feelings swirls inside me.
His gaze was unnerving, still I felt comfort.
***
He was, breathe of cool air, and I, a burning flame.
I could feel the heat within me, radiating from his blazing brown.
His eyes, burning deep holes, in my already burned soul.
***
He was a force, pulling me to him.
His touch, like a soothing balm, as he caressed my skin, I felt my scars getting healed away.
I wanted to bury myself into those arms, but scared I might lose to him forever.
***
He was a hope of happiness, I was scared to embrace it.
He looked at me for the last time, his eyes searching mine, our words unspoken, still it hold some secret promises.
Without saying anything, he said it all to me.

He was a memory to be kept safe inside the heart.

***

The End.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Note - This is the first time I tried this. Hope you all liked it.
Any type of suggestions, are welcomed. Do leave a feedback.

Thanks,
Shivani.

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Posted: 10 years ago
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well done... 1 cnt blv its ur 1st attempt.. 😲 bahot accha hai yeh...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Its mindblowing dear..👏
Perfect feelings n emotions..!!!
Keep writing more😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hi shivani,
I don't usually read poems but am happy I read this.
It is beautiful.
Keep writing more
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Posted: 10 years ago
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This is awesome coming from a first time poem writer.
Keep writing

Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hey shivani
Koi nai bolega its ur first attempt
Its beautiful. last line is jus amazing..
The whole poem is jus penned beautifully
Keep writing
Cheers
Mythreyi
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Posted: 10 years ago
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wonderful and beautiful..
you are a magician of words!!👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Loved it completely... U r an amazing writer riya..keep it up...😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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I will take some time :(

Reserved.

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