Swaragini ff: Kahin Toh raglak- swasan LAST CHAPTER 23rd july

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This is pure fiction, totally my imagination on how things should take place.
I am a deep admirer of Behan's bond and that is why my work would be centered on swaragini.
But it also have Raglak (temish are total adorbs) and Swasan on how love story should take place.

Criticism is welcomed
Sorry in advance if my work offends any body

suggestions will be welcomed
looking for a good time over here
and its ff so i don't know how long it can be
*i am lazy at posting because i have other fictions too, so please deal with my laziness



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<p align="center">Swaragini
"kahin toh"</p>
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<p align="center">Ragini
now knew what she did was wrong but she never wanted to do it that way. Swara was
her sister and she loved her they had the same father and she has grown up
while sensing a mother's love by seeing sharmishta and swara's bond. Ragini regretted
playing with her father and mothers relation, she was the only one responsible
for them being separated. Ragini's birth
mother would have never wanted her to stoop that low and today she knew that
she was wrong. She had no right to do that with swara and laksh and now she
knew what she has to do. She can't live with this guilt anymore. This fakeness
was not letting her live in peace and she was guilty. She knew what her next
step would be. Ragini stood up joining her hands infront of the God's idol and
cried </p>
<p align="center">Ragini:
humaray papa aur maa khushian deserve kartay hain aur shaid swara bhi. </p>
<p align="center">She
made her mind and went towards Maheshwari mansion.</p>
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<p align="center">Swara:
yeh sab sach hai ragini nai hi meray sath wo sab kia </p>
<p align="center">She
cried while sanskaar put his hand on her shoulder </p>
<p align="center">She
showed ragini's video where she accepted that she was the one to plot against
swara to everyone and her maa and baba too everyone was shocked in their
tracks. But the most shocked was laksh, he couldn't believe his luck and life. He
couldn't believe that the girl whom he trusted blindly did all that . His
ragini, his best friend! He shooked his head not accepting but then what he
heard next took the floor from under his feet. </p>
<p align="center">He
was stunned when ragini said : haan yeh sach hai. swara nai jo kuch kaha wo sab
sach hai. </p>
<p align="center">Swara
looked at ragini and was shocked as ragini accepted her wrong doings in front
of everyone. There was something in ragini which told swara to stop everything
which was going on. Ragini came towards swara and wiped her tears</p>
<p align="center">Ragini:
yahi chahti na? </p>
<p align="center">She
asked swara </p>
<p align="center">Ragini:
swara nai abhi jo kuch kaha wo sab sach hai, uska aek aek lafz sach hai. Haan hum
galat hain humsay bohat galtian hoi hain aur aj hum un galtiyo ko mantay hain. </p>
<p align="center">Dadi
came towards ragini and held her arm tightly: pagal hogai hai ragini chup hojao
aur tum swara band karo yeh sab </p>
<p align="center">Ragini:
nahi dadi maa . aj kehnay deejay isay bhi aur humay bhi </p>
<p align="center">Ragini
looked at swara while tears skipped from both their eyes </p>
<p align="center">Ragini:
hum aur dikhawa nahi karsaktay. Aur kisay jhoot bol rahay hain hum khud say? Yeh
hum nahin hain. Yeh humari seekh nahi hai.</p>
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<p align="center">Shekhar:
raginiii (he shouted) yeh jo swara nai abhi kaha kia wo sach hai? </p>
<p align="center">Shekhar
went towards ragini while sharmishta followed him</p>
<p align="center">Shekhar:
bolo maine kuch pocha hai </p>
<p align="center">Ragini
looked scared but today she has to do it she has to admit it for living a life
out of guilt, ragini nodded and shekhar was about to slap her when ragini broke
down on her knees joining her hands and crying</p>
<p align="center">Ragini:
humay maaf kardeejay.. haan humsay galti hui hai.. shaid gunnah howa hai par
maa baap toh apnay bachon ki har galti ko maaf kardaitay hain . hum bohat buray
hain papa. </p>
<p align="center">Shekhar
was stunned while sharmishta cried looking at ragini's state. </p>
<p align="center">Ragini
got up and went back to swara: humnay jo kia bohat galt kia hum mantay hain
swara. Par jhoot hi sahi humnay dikhawa hi sahi par koshish ki thi kay tumharay
aur laksh kay rastay sai hath jaein par humsay nahi howa. </p>
<p align="center">She
looked at laksh whose eyes were red and filled with tears. </p>
<p align="center">Ragini:
par tumnay toh aek baar bhi yeh mehsos nahi kia kay hum bhi laksh say pyar
kartay hain humpay kia beetay gi. </p>
<p align="center">Swara
was shocked : ragini </p>
<p align="center">She
whispered</p>
<p align="center">Ragini:
hum tumhay galt nahi keh rahay bas bta rahay hain kay yeh insecurity humay ku
aai.. tumhay toh hamesha sai sab mila hai swara. Maa toh humari nahi thi par
tumharay sath toh tumharay maa baba dono hi thay na. lekin phir bhi humnay maa
main apni maa dhondhi, hum kabhi nahi chahtay thay kay in sab ka asar maa baba
pay paray par halat kuch aur hi hotay gaye. </p>
<p align="center">Swara
cried because ragini's every word was giving pain to her heart and she knew
that she never tried to understand what she went through. Swara faltered and
sanskaar supported her she held his hand </p>
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<p align="center">Ragini:
aur sanskaar ap? Ap humay galat kehtay hain ? jabkay ap hi thay jisnay humari
daabi hui chahat ka apnay faiday keliye istamaal kia.. humay sochnay pay
majboor kia kay hum laksh ko deserve kartay hain aur jab hum bohat agay barh
gaye apni galtiyo mai to ap toh realize karkay peechay hut gaye aur hum akelay
reh gaye. Humay bhi thori mohlat chai thi koi samjhanay wala chai tha. Aur swara
hum tumhay Dhaka nahi daina chahtay thy, tumhay marnay ka koi irada ni tha. Tum
humari behan ho. Hum bas tumhay bolna chahty thay kay laksh sai shadi mat karo
aur galti sai tumhay hath lag gaya aur tum neechay gir gai. Hum apni mohabbat
mai andhay hogye thay kuch dekh hi nai paaye. (ragini sobbed) par hum yeh sab
nahi chahtay thay bilkul nahi chahty thy. Humay laga thoray wakt mai sab theek
hojaye ga par sab toh uljhata gaya . humnay socha aek baar humari shadi settle
hojaye phir maa aur papa ko dobara mila daein gai. </p>
<p align="center"></p>
<p align="center">Swara
couldn't control, she hugged ragini and ragini hugged her back. </p>
<p align="center">Ragini:
I am sorry swara, humay maaf kardo </p>
<p align="center">Swara:
I am sorry ragini </p>
<p align="center">Both
sobbed </p>
<p align="center">Ragini
came out of hug : hum tmhari maafi kai bhi kabil nahi hain </p>
<p align="center">She
moved to shekhar and sharmishta took their hands </p>
<p align="center">Ragini:
please </p>
<p align="center">Everyone
was silent . no one knew what to say how to react . ragini looked at laksh who
was all quite. She went to him</p>
<p align="center">Ragini:
aek larki apnay jeevan saathi mai hamesha apnay papa ki qualities dhondhti hai.
Jab hum apsay milay laksh humay laga kay jaisay humaray papa nay hamesha humay
protect kia hai usi tran ap bhi hamesha humara khyal rakhein gai </p>
<p align="center">Laskh
closed his eyes and tears skipped through his eyes </p>
<p align="center">Ragini:
hum samjh hi nahi paaye kay humay pyar kab hogya.. par hum apkay sabsay baray
gunehgaar hain. </p>
<p align="center">Ragini
went to swara : humnay swara aur apki khushian cheeni hain. Par aj hum swara ko
wo sab lauta dein gai jo uska hai.</p>
<p align="center">Swara
and laksh got shocked . sanskaar looked at ragini who took her hands towards
her neck and took off the mangalsutra. Swara's eyes got bigger from shock. all
were shocked . ragini took swara's hand and put the mangalsutra on her hand. </p>
<p align="center">Ragini:
ispay kabhi humara haq nahi tha. </p>
<p align="center">Ragini
went to laksh: ab ap azaad hain iss anchahy rishtay sai . </p>
<p align="center">She
took off the ring which laksh made her wear recently. </p>
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<p align="center"></p>
<p align="center">Flashback</p>
<p align="center"></p>
<p align="center">Ragini
was sitting on the bed when laksh came and sat on the bed too</p>
<p align="center">Laksh:
kaisa gaya aj ka din </p>
<p align="center">Ragini:
acha tha </p>
<p align="center">Laksh
took ragini's hand in his and made her wear a ring, ragini saw the ring it was
the same ring which laksh made her wear twice on their engagement </p>
<p align="center">Laksh:
ispay shaid tumhara hi haq tha ragini. </p>
<p align="center">Ragini
looked at laksh and then at the ring. </p>
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<p align="center">Flashback
end</p>
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<p align="center">Ragini
gave the ring back to laksh, laksh wasn't moving, reacting </p>
<p align="center">Ragini:
ispay shaid kabhi humara haq nahin tha</p>
<p align="center">She
turned while crying and ran towards shekhar </p>
<p align="center">Ragini:
papa humay apnay ghar jana hai please . </p>
<p align="center">Shekar
nodded and took ragini's hand and was about to go when </p>
<p align="center">Ragini:
maa ap bhi chaliye na</p>
<p align="center">Sharmishta
cried and then went with shekhar and ragini . </p>
<p align="center"></p>
<p align="center">Swara
broke down and sobbed loudly, she knew whatever happened today shouldn't have happened
and she was at mistake. Sanskaar sat and swara hugged him and cried </p>
<p align="center">Swara:
sanskaar meri behan. </p>
<p align="center">Sanskaar:
swara relax, chup hojao please</p>
<p align="center">He
knew ragini was right, he instigated her a lot and he was at mistake on why
ragini did so wrong </p>
<p align="center">He
made swara stand and turned around saw laksh who was still and looking at the
ring ragini gave him. </p>
<p align="center">Sanskaar
tapped his shoulder and laksh looked at him .</p>
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<p align="center">Precap</p>
<p align="center">Swara
tells maheshwari family that she and sankaar are not married and she is going
back to her house. </p>
<p align="center">Ragini
says dadi that she wish to live alone and see swara happy now</p>
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<p align="center">NOTE:
tell me characters names as I don't know their names. Laksh and sanskaar mother
and all </p>
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Posted: 9 years ago
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INDEX

CHAPTER 1 - PG 1

CHAPTER 2 - PG 2

CHAPTER 3 - PG 3

CHAPTER 4 - PG 4

CHAPTER 5 - PG 6
Edited by yusu1993 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Very Nice.Pls add more SwaSan Scenes
Annapurna -Mother of Laksh and Adarsh
Sujata-Mother Of Sanskar and Uttara
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Very nice 👏
I loved reading it 😳
Eagerly waiting to know what will happen 😆
Update soon 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#5
Really amazing
Plzzz updatd soon
Eagerly waiting for ur update
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Posted: 9 years ago
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really nice start
wagerly waiting for next prt
waiting ...

and don't forget to pm me
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow..a swaragini ff...
Nice start yaar...I am Ragini fan...i totally loved the first chapter...
I hope in the show also she admits her mistakes n turn positive...
Waiting for a passionate ragya story
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Posted: 9 years ago
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This forum has an amazing bunch of writers.. Kindly keep me updated about this one.. Really wana see how you r goin to shape up this plot now..

Trust me.. It was jus awesome.. Ragini's expalnation was totally justified n reletable n thats what makes it special 😳
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Wow nice one it looks so positive ... Plz update soon and PM me plz
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Posted: 9 years ago
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So sweet. All writers are writting new and different concepts. Glad that i am member in this forum. Or else i will miss this cute love stories. please update and pm me also

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