Swaragini ff: Kahin Toh raglak- swasan LAST CHAPTER 23rd july - Page 2

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow superb start...
Loved it...
Do cont soon...
Do pm me while updating.
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Thank you so much for appreciating my effort.





Swaragini ff: Kahin Toh

CHAPTER 2

Laksh was standing at the balcony of his and ragini's room, his face was tears ridden. All of it was too hard to digest, ragini was not there. He looked at the ring ragini returned him and whispered

Laksh: why?

More tears skipped through his eyes he remembered what ragini told him just few hours before leaving the house

( ragini: aek larki apnay jeevan saathi mai hamesha apnay papa ki qualities dhondhti hai. Jab hum apsay milay laksh humay laga kay jaisay humaray papa nay hamesha humay protect kia hai usi tran ap bhi hamesha humara khyal rakhein gai ) her voice echoed in his head.

Laksh: ku ragini? Ku?

He asked looking at the ring, a tear from his eyes fell on the ring.

Swara and sanskaar room

Swara who was sobbing non-stop : yeh sab meri galti hai bohat daway karti thi mai pyar kay rishtay kay par dekh hi nahi pai keh meri behan kai dil mai laksh hai. I swear sanskaar agr mujhay pata hota kay wo laksh ko chahati hai toh mai kabhi bhi laksh ki traf kadam na barhati kabhi bhi.

Sanskaar sat on his knees infront of swara who was sitting on the beds corner and crying, he wiped her tears and cupped her face: usay say bhi bari galti meri hai. Mainay ragini ko bohat instigate kia . usay barhkhaya and last moment pay khud realize karkay side pay hut gaya. I need to apologize to her

Swara looked at the magalsutra: wo yeh nahi karsakti. Wo aisay apna rishta kaisay mujhy dai sakti hai? Usay samjhna hoga kay ab yeh nahi hosakta . aur shaid yeh kabhi hona hi nahi tha isliye kismat usay aur laksh ko sath lai hai. Waja chahay kuch bhi ho . ragini ko wapis ana hi hoga. Tum meri madad karo gai na sanskaar?

She forwarded her hand and sanskaar promised: don't worry swara, jo sab galt howa hai wo sab theek zaror hoga. I promise

Swara smiled and hugged sanskaar.

Ragini was in her room and crying sitting beside her bed when dadi came in her room in anger and grabbed her arm making her stand, dadi in anger asked: tu pagal hogai hai? Apnay sasural mai kya kiya tunay? Bol?

Ragini looked at dadi: humnay jo kuch kia wo sab theek kia ab humay koi pachtawa nahi hai, kamazakum hum chain sai toh jee saktay hain. Wo hum nahi thay dadi maa.

Dadi: aek dum chup, hum milkay acha khasa us swara ko jhoota sabit kar daitay par tunay sach boldia? Aur upar say uss larki ko mangalsutra dai kay agai? Demag kharab hogya hai?

Ragini: dadi maa wo humari behan hai. Hum akela jee laein gai bs usko khush dekhna chahtay hain ku kai humnay usko bohat tang kia hai. Dadi maa ab hum apki koi galat baat ni sunay gay please

Ragini said while looking down.

Dadi: itni himat agai hai kay humay yeh sab bol rai ho?

Dadi was about to slap ragini when sharmishta came in between and held dadi's wrist. Ragini looked at sharmishta

Sharmishta: bas maa! Ab basss.

Sharmishta said with finality in her voice

Dadi: hath choro humara

She shouted and sharmishta left her hand

Sharmishta: meri beti pay hath uthanay ki galti dobara mat kee jaga ap warna mujhay phirse apko rokna hoga

Dadi: ragini teri beti nahi hai.

Sharmishta: apkay kehnay sai kuch badalnay wala nahin hai maa. Ragini meri hi beti hai aur yeh baat ap jhutla nahi sakti. Aur mai nay apni beti pay hath uthanay ka haq kisi ko nahi du gi . apko bhi nahi!

dadi in anger left the room. Sharmishta turned towards ragini and hugged her

ragini: maa humay maaf kardeejay please

sharmishta: shhh bacha.. bas karo rona...

she wiped ragini's tears.

Sharmishta: jo hogya so hogya ab usko baar baar yad karnay ki zarorat nahin hai.

She touched ragini's hairs and left the room.

Laksh took his mobile and dialed ragini's number : mujhay ragini say baat karni hi hogi

Here ragini's mobile rang but she was lost in her thoughts looking at the moon and crying.

Annapurna came into lakshs room: laksh beta

Laksh looked at his mom and hugged her: maa yeh sab jo kuch bhi howa

Annapurna: aj nahin toh kal yeh sab toh samnay ana hi tha.

She told laksh

Annapurna: neechay aoo tumharay papa kuch baat karna chahtay hain.

Laksh was uneasy he did not wish to face any one right now.

Swara tried ragini's number and she picked up: ragini mai tumhay kabsay phone kar rai hoon tum utha ku nahi rai thi?

Sanskaar looked at swara

Ragini: swara humay pata nahi chala sorry

Swara: ragini wapis ajao. Hum milkay sabko samjhaein gai maafi mangaein gai.

Ragini: nahi swara aj sach mai ehsas howa hai kay aek rishtay keliye humnay kitnay rishton ko nuksan phonchaya. Laksh ko zabardasti hum iss rishtay mai ni bandh sakty.. aur wo sab humay nafrat ki nigahon sai dekhein gay yeh humsay bardasht nahin hoga. Aur waisay bhi swara tumhari khushian tumhaein di hain. Humay wakt lagay ga par hum theek hojaein gai. Hum bas ab tumhay khush dekhna chahtay hain

Swara shook her head: ragini yeh tum kia keh rai ho. Tum laksh ki patni ho

Ragini: swara please hum tumhay khush dekhna chahtay hain isliye ab tumhay koi bhi sacrifice karnay ki zarorat nahin hai.

Swara was about to say something when ragini cut the call.

Swara to sanskaar: wo nahin manay gi.

Sanskaar: hum dono milkay baat karein gay tension nahin lo

Swara: nahin! Ragini ka sach toh sabnay sun lia hai . ab unko swaragini ka sach suna hoga

Hall

All the maheshwari's were present

Durga parsad: jo kuch bhi aj howa acha nahin howa

Laksh came down and looked at his dad

Sujata: wo masoom si dekhnay wali ragini yeh sab kar sakti hai mai toh kabhi soch bhi nahi sakti thi

Annapurna: par usnay sach bhi toh bola na sujata aur sach bolna sabsay bari baat hai

Durga parsad: yeh mat bhoolo kay sanskaar nay bhi apni galtiyo ki maafi mangi thi aur galtian sab kartay hain . par jo kuch ragini nay kaha wo sab sunay kay baad humara yeh faisla hai kay kal hum sab unkay ghar jaein gay aur apni baho ko wapis lay kay aein gai.

laksh was about to say something when swara and sankaar came with a bag

sujata: ab yeh larki kahan ja rai hai?

Swara: apnay ghar!

She announced

Laksh saw sanskaar and swara

Swara: meri aur sanskaar ki shadi nahi hui . yeh natak maine sirf ragini ki sachai samnay lanay keliye kia tha.

Swara accepted and there were a lot of gasps in the room. Laksh was stunned with this new revelation.

Swara joined her hands: mai hath jor kay maafi mangati hoon apni aur apni behn ki traf say par ab mujhay jana hoga .

Swara went while sujata was about to say something when Annapurna stopped her

Durga parsad went near sanskaar and slapped him: khel khelnay kay ilawa kuch aur bhi ata hai tumhay? Yeh dhoka dainay say pehlay humaray khandaan ki izat ka aek baar nahin soch tumnay

Sanskaar: I am sorry baray papa

Ragini looked at her mobile: laksh ki itni calls? Shaid ab wo humsay aur nafrat kartay hain aur shaid hum isi kabil hain. Par ab hum kamzor nahin parein gai. Hum laksh ko unki khushian wapis kar kay hi rahein gai.

She was about to go to her room when door bell rang

Ragini: itni raat ko kaun hosakta hai

She went and opened the door and was shocked to see swara with the bag

Ragini: swara tum?

Swara hugged ragini and ragini hugged her back.

Shekhar, sumi nani and dadi came

Dadi: yeh lo! bss isi ki kami thi.

Shekhar: swara tum iss wakt yahan?

Swara looked at shekhar: maine sanskaar aur apni shadi ka sach bta dia sabko

Shekhar was shocked he looked at both ragini and swara and went to his room.

Swara was about to stop him when sumi said: abhi nahi swara, shekar apni dono betiyo ki zindagi ka soch kay dukhi hain. Apnay kamray mai jao hum subah baat karein gay.

Ragini and swara started to move towards their room together and opened the door together both loked at each other . swara held ragini's hand. Ragini smiled at her

Swara: jab hum sath hoon toh

Ragini: kisi cheez ka darr nahi rehta

Both laughed and hugged each other

Swara's thought: mai apni behan ko uski sari khushian lauta kay rahon gi

Ragini: ab hum sath hain swara toh maa papa ko aek karein gai aur phir jo tumhara tha wo tumhay milay ga.

Both closed their eyes while hugging eachother..

Precap: Maheshwari's at gadodia's house. a big show down . shekhar and sharmishta humiliated big time with swaragini and

Ragini's decision which shocks swara.

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Posted: 10 years ago
#13
Awesome.. Superbly written 😊
Slap is not good😔
Waiting for next update.. 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#14
Very nice 👍🏼
Wonder whats going to happen 😃
Update soon 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#15
That was very touching and senti one but love to c Swaragini together again ... Thanks for the update and plz next part soon coz prcap is sounding interesting and I can't wait to read it :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
#16
really nice update
finally swaragini r together
precape was sounding interesting
plzzz update next prt soon can'r wait to read it
especially after reading precap
waiting...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#17
Omg awesome update
Loved it
Cant wait now
Plzzz update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#18
Awesome story continue soon and Buddy me
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Posted: 10 years ago
#19
Another good one 😳

Ehhh.. DP.. enough of your slaps n shouts n stuff :/

Ragini.. Swara ko nai chaiye laksh.. Please maintain your junoon of gettin him *Now in a nice manner* n also Laksh is trying to call.. sun toh lo kya chahta h..

M so excited to see swasan.. Plz start it a lil soon.. Greedy swasan fan 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
#20
Ragini accepts her truth. Swara also left from fake marriage. But good part is seeing swaragini i loved their talks. Want to see swasan sure after she left he ll feel for her. What will be ragini's decision? pls update soon😊
Edited by gayu6 - 10 years ago

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