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hiii every one this is poojitha. I have always been a silent reader this is the first time i am writing something all ur stories inspire me to write this os. sorry for the mistakes.

MEMORABLE BIRTHDAY

Its been 6 months to the marriage of maan and geet and as its geet's first birthday after their marriage maan wanted to make it memorable for her. He has been so busy the past days due to the work tension and couldn't give her proper time so he wanted to make it up for her for their lost time .

he made a plan and went away a day before her birthday saying there is a big problem in one of their sites. he went out and made all the needed arrangements and did all the necessary shopping and decorated their farm house which is their most fav place to spend their private lovey dovey movements. the place is 2hrs away from their mansion. at 10 in the night he called her and asked her to bring a file to their farm house which is near to the site. Geet was hell worried that she even didn't ask why he called her to the farm house when she reached out a car and the driver are ready to take her to her destination.

When she reached the farm house the lights are off and even the driver went away dropping her. Even though she is feared of darkness she went in and open the door and was awestruck to see the petal path that lead her to the living room where there is a huge bouquet with red and white roses stating "happy birthday misty" Geet was plesently surprised but next second her happiness was replaced by fake angry due to his prank and she placed the bouquet on the couch where she noticed a chocolate box with a note and also a cute teddy with a note the note on the box contain a sorry with a smiley while other note states that they are going to play a treasure hunt game where she has to find all the gifts according to his clues and get ready in them and then have to meet him. clue 1 : WARDen of

ROBEn university is sostrict misty.(don"t know if there is any uni with that name 😆)

Geet is hell confused first but next when she saw the clue correctly she rushed towards their bedroom and opened her wardrobe where she saw a gift wrapped packet when she opened it she found a beautiful saree. she went to the dresser and wore the saree there she found another clue.

clue 2: we sleep on the bed but who is under the bed.

Geet immediately rushed towards the bed and under the cot she found a big box. when she opened it she found another box same thing repeated again and again and at last she found a small box containing diamond dazzling earrings matching to her saree. underneath the box there is another clue.

clue 3: I love bangles on your hand as the way i like the food made by you.

she immediately went to the kitchen and found another gift on the cocking counter. there are matching bangles to her saree.

Geet was so overwhelmed with his love and automatically a smile formed on her lips.

To the bangles there is another clue.

clue 4: where does we wash our clothes my shona.

Geet at once mooved towards the washing machine and on it she found a box containing anklets .

then there was the last note sticked to it.

last clue: [mrs.khurana find me] i am in a place where there is also a uninvited guest with me.

Geet know about whom her maan is talking about and went to their terrace. she was plesently surprised to see the decoration there. even Maan was not less surprised to see his misty looking more beautiful than he expected her to be.

he opened his arms towards her and she rushed into his protective arms and Maan once again wished her by making her wear a heart shaped diamond pendent containing their pics.

Seeing so much of love in his eyes for her Geet immediately hugged him and told him she loves him a lot. Maan too reciprocated her feelings and hugged her and kissed her on her forehead.

later they kissed each other till they are out of their breadth and spend the entire night in each other arms.

the end.

plz dont throw chapples 😆😆

once again sorry for mistakes.

thank you😃.

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Sweetie waiting to read many many many more works from u
You've written it so well

Its a sweet os n cogo on ur first attempt👏
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thank u sooo much 😊
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hi congrats on the OS! superb sweet OS! well written! 😊
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lovely os..memorable birthday for Geet..treasure hunt game to reach to the final treasure which is Maan.

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Thank u sooo much friend for reading and hitting a like and I specially thank the people who commented. Thanks u all ur replies r encouraging to me to write more stories.😳😳😳
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A Beautiful And Yes Memorable Birthday

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