SS OS: The Day She Danced - Page 2

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Although Swayam has always been shown as a level headed person, it always surprised me how he could fall for a girl he didn't know apart from what he had seen on the outside. I mean the kind of people Swayam associates himself with usually don't give a damn for the Dazzler type of people. So I always felt it was a failure of his character to show him that shallow. But the first OS had relieved the question on why had he even noticed her. And I love the way he is falling for her, that too keeping his character intact. It's like you are filling the gaps that Palki Mam had left, and do i need to say I love it! Please continue, i want to read further...

A quick suggestion, when you are done with the series, whenever that happens, why don't you just give the links to all the stories in a single place?

All the love,
Srishti
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Posted: 10 years ago
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This is beautiful.
I love the fact that you make words sound so beautiful and you writing Swayam's pov is jusy magical.
It was short but I loved every bit of it.
Do continue writing this! <3
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Posted: 10 years ago
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loved loved loved d os... beautiful os like swaron... ❤️
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Posted: 10 years ago
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I just read both the one shots ..
The Day It Began &
The Day She Danced

Both are mind blowing 👏

It was worth a reading experience ! Just too good !

You penned down his POV so beautifully just loved it .

And ya pls do continue asap , this series will be my fav for sure ...The Day ...

Really nice ya ...



Love ,
Lavanya
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Posted: 10 years ago
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It was just Khoobsurat.
The way you portrayed Swayam is just commendable. It really looked like I could visualize Swayam and see what cooks in his mind.
Loved it to the core. And his confession "aww".
Brilliant!! Waiting for more

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