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Posted: 10 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: raaz19

I just love the update...It was just awesome...

I loved the whole entry of arzoo and sahir together I must say I am happy to see them back together at the party... I wonder if sahir is particularly fond of zeenat...

Regarding Zeenat..more in next update..i am really happy that you come to like it..😊

If I may say it just felt like arzoo was not very fond of our lady friend...why do I get the impression she will be causing havoc between the love birds...

There must be some factor that keeps the story moving forward 😉

Must say the update was short but sweet...thanks for the lovely surprise and hope to read more soon. ..

Glad to have satisfied you..

Before I forget this chipku person is really interesting... It for me has to be sahir only...and will we get to meet zaki soon?

Everyone will come up when the story needs!!
Who is that Chipku????????????

Will wait for the next update patiently take all the time you need...

Oh and I forgot I just love the title perfectly symbolises the whole Saaz relationship...

Thank you so much Razia!!!


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Posted: 10 years ago
#52
superb update and beautiful title ! Yes i got my answers thank you 😉

Continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#53
Welcome Back😃👏
Thanks for the PM
Great update and it felt all the more good to read especially after the wait!!
You have always shown Sahir and Arzoo to be together in this FF so the title is very apt.
Arzoo's childhood seems to be painful but Chpku seems to have given her memorable moments. Waiting to see who it could be...Sahir / Zaki or some third character...Suspense????
First Myra and now Zeenat... Arzoo will have to contend with quite a few of them!!!
Loved the way you have built up the story and your characters seem genuine and real.
Eagerly awaiting next update!!!




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Posted: 10 years ago
#54
Sush waiting for you update of both the ffs. Really waiting for it.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#55
Uff, so much suspense! This is such an intriguing and gripping story - would love to read what you have got planned :D Update soon, and welcome back once again. You were missed :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
#56

Hello Lovelies!!

😃😊😊

Back with a quickie...I know this chapter is short...but think of it as a filler maybe..real story starts from here..😉

By the I wanted to ask didn't you guys like my writing after the break..I mean there was less participation in my other FF when I usually get about 2 pages of commets...I got only few for last update...Tell me honestly if I suck...😆😆

So I hope I give an update that you people expected...

CHAPTER 3

ZEENAT???

What is she doing here??I didn't expect to see her here. Her mind on its own accord wandered off to the unwanted past.

"Sahir! You should not take her side without knowing the truth! God knows what if she is really behind this?"

"You are not eligible in anyway to become Sahir's partner."

"Sahir, she doesn't deserve your trust!"

"You are part of Sahir's team only because of sheer luck or else who would dare to even look at your designs!"

"Hi Arzoo! How are you? It has been nearly two years since we have met"

Zeenat plastered a fake smile and forwarded a hand to Arzoo who was still in daze with

words of past echoing in her ears. Sahir who could feel the tension building up between

them tried to ease the situation "Zeenat you are alone here?Did anyone from

Javed come ?" . Zeenat answered him while pulling the raised hand down"Some people

are here and you will be surprised if I say whom they are" and winked at him. Sahir

nodded his head in disapproval "You haven't changed a bit!" and whisked her away

from there.

She didn't like it. Infact she didn't even expect her here. The only reason she came to

attend this party is Sahir. She recently got to know that Saiyaara has cracked the deal

with AK Garments, one of the main sponsors of this event and thought that being the CEO

of Saiyaara he cannot afford to miss this and he would definitely attend it. She hoped to

rekindle her relationship with him and get in his good books after his bitter departure from

Javed. After all he has the potential to emerge as Fashion God and her association with

him would prove fruitful to her future. But what she least expected was Arzoo's presence.

She couldn't believe her eyes when she saw their linked arms as they entered the venue

with huge smiles on their faces. Her blood boiled and eyes spit fire but she contained her

emotions well and acted according to the situation. Yes, Zeenat Qureshi was an expert in

this field after all being a model comes with its own advantages ! She promised herself to

wipe that smile from her face.


She never ever thought in her wildest dreams that this day would come, where she would

come face-to-face with that Zeenat Qureshi once again. She is a bad sign. Yes she is

definitely one. She could even tell to an extent that Zeenat had an hand behind her ouster

from Javed. But she couldn't accuse her of that when she doesn't have any evidence,

when she knows how much she matters for Sahir, when she knows how mad is she for

Sahir. Can she? She promised herself to protect Sahir and Saiyaara from whatever

agenda she has with her comeback. Wait ! Did she just say she will protect Sahir?Ya

Allah...

"So how is life? Where have you been for the past 2 years? And how did you just

manage to pop out of nowhere in this party?"


Sahir started his usual tirade when he managed to usher Zeenat towards a place

considerably far away from Arzoo.


"Woah!Take a breath mate. You do know that I was aspiring to be a ramp walk model

and didn't wish to be stuck with still modelling right? . So for that I needed some

backup and I was visiting as much designers as possible, making contacts with

them and doing some fashion shows here and there and my hardwork has paid off

as I have slowly started establishing myself and I still have a long way to go..."

"I know..I saw few shows of you and I must say you are doing a pretty good job

lady" saying so he patted her shoulder "Yaar...I am so happy that you are slowly

raising your standards and walking towards your goal" he bear hugged her truly feeling

whatever he said just now. She wanted this...she wanted the friend in him so badly and

she wanted this to be more than just a friendship. "If you saw me then why didn't you

contact me..you Buddhu?" She smiled as he slowly detached himself from her and

started replying"Yaar..You know our how last meeting was..." simultaneously looking

around for Arzoo whom he had forgotten in the process of catching up with Zeenat. That's

when he saw her making a hasty exit from the venue after bidding goodbye to

Mr.Khurana.


And what he saw left him startled...he saw tears..tears in Arzoo' s eyes which he had

never seen in their 4 year old friendship. This meant some serious trouble he thought to

himself and quickly tried to followed her when he was stopped by Zeenat."Where are you

going Sahir?We still have a lot of talking to do" "Later! I guess Arzoo has an

emergency..." He didn't even complete his sentence and ran behind her trying to catch

up with Arzoo leaving behind a fuming Zeenat.

Arzoo was still thinking about Zeenat when she saw Sahir talking animatedly with her. She

felt anger and frustration rising in her. Neither could she voice her doubts nor could she

pretend like All is well. And above all that Sahir has completely forgotten her and she felt

irritated as she is left all alone to handle their prospective clients when he is busy there

catching up with his good friend.Suddenly her phone rang bringing her out of her chain of

thoughts .It was an unknown number and she picked up hesitantly and instantly all her

body parts went numb when she heard the evil maniac laughter on the other side.

"Enjoying the party..are you? Amidst all these gala time you forgot that you were

given only 30 days to let me know your decision and here we are with 22 days

already gone with the wind. Remember this clearly Arzoo Nausheen Khan...by the

end of 30 days if you don't agree to what I said... no f you don't do what I demanded

then the whole world will know your true identity...I know you don't care about your

reputation but what will happen to your mother's dignity if the truth behind your

birth is revealed? If the truth behind your existence is revealed ?If the relationship

your mother shared with Abbu is revealed? The ball is in your court babes...you got

only 8 days now " and the phone clicked showing that the call has been disconnected.


Arzoo's head spun .How could she be so careless? How the hell he knows where is she

and what is she doing? And more over...more over how can she forget the 30 days time?

She totally forgot that night's call after they grabbed AK's deal. Tears pooled in her eyes

after she recalled the phone threat that came now and suddenly the party felt suffocating.

She needed some solace .She looked around for Sahir to inform about her departure to

home but saw the sight of Sahir bear hugging Zeenat. Her heart constricted in pain and she

made her way towards the exit after excusing herself from Mr.Khurana. If only she had

turned behind once...

Sahir was still in the lobby trying to follow when someone held him by wrist. He turned

around only to get the shock of his life."Sahir Azeem Choudary?Is that you?" a man

asked him.


"SHIRAZ???!!!!"


Please leave generous comments on what you felt really after reading it

Buddy: sushfff

for PMs ...

Sush😳


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Posted: 10 years ago
#57
Sush! So good to see that you are back! Amazing update! 👏 The story is getting very interesting, lot of mystery and intrigue.I have a feeling that Zeenat is very selfish and she wants Sahir for herself.Who is the person threatening Arzoo?Hope you will able to update soon,but no worries whenever you have time. You are an👏 amazing writer Sush! 👏 Really enjoyed reading your other FF too.😊 Also who is Sahir shocked to see? Sorry for asking too questions! This update is surely a cliffhanger😉
Edited by fatimarahaman - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#58
First things first, it makes me sad too that the feedback on your FFs has decreased, because I honestly think that they are both getting even more interesting. I do understand how you feel, because I have experienced the same, and it made me consider stopping to post my writings on IF (in fact I still have second thoughts on having a second season for LLIA). I know how much effort and time and emotional investment goes into writing.. and for you to have decided to make a comeback would have also been a big decision - after all that, to see that there are so few comments is disheartening indeed.

But, the fact is that a lot of the people who used to read Humsafars FFs are just not that active on IF anymore (even more so since the HS forum was locked), so it has nothing to do with the quality of your writing! So the last thing you should do is to take it personally. Please don't, ok? I know I have said this many times before but you really are a very good storyteller and know how to capture your readers' attention perfectly! ⭐️

And now to the update. The things I loved about it:

- The fact that Arzoo is so protective about Sahir 😳 He seems a bit too trusting, and it is good to know that Arzoo has his back!

- Arzoo's inability to be hypocritical like Zeenat. Love that! I relate to her because I am the same too. If I don't like someone, I just cannot fake it. I can barely bring myself to engage in small talk with them and probably seem rude and/or weirdly awkward.

- Sahir seems torn between his friendship for Zeenat and his friendship for Arzoo, but he does look out for Arzoo and doesn't hesitate a second before going after her when he sees that she is in tears! ❤️

- Last, but not the least, your brilliant ability to weave drama and suspense in the story, never failing to keep your readers on tenterhooks with a million questions 😛 Can't wait to see what happens next.
Uff, Shiraz! Bet he is upto no good, in your FF as well 😡 And who was that unknown caller?

Continue soon!
Edited by _.serendipity._ - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#59
First of all interesting story. Welcome back sush. The story is in cliffhanger right now. I for sometime imagined harshad, shivya performing as saaz. It was a lovely update. Definitely want to know who is threatening arzoo?
Hoping you write long update. Take your own time but do continue wring. Love u and ur writings a lot.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#60
I still can't believe you're back.😆

Anyway, i was kinda surprised too because of there weren't many comments..but that might be because its been a long time since the show ended and this got shifted and stuff...so don't worry, you don't suck.😛
I loved how Sahir went running towards arzoo leaving zeenat all angry :D

And i have some questions, which are:
a) Is zeenat sahir's friend and why is arzoo worried about her...
b) Who is this guy calling Arzoo?🤔

Can't wait to read next chapter, both of this and the other ff :)

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