MG FF- Aaiynaa.. THREAD 4 Teaser Pg 10 Sep 10

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(Aaiynaa means Mirror...)

New MG FF-Aaiynaa.. THREAD 1

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Uski har aadat, har harkat...

Sab thi uski parchhayi..

Jaise maano wo uska aaiyena thi...

GEET

A sweet innocent 18 year old girl, having sturdy values. Loved her family to the core but lost them at the early age of 8 years. Circumstances made her only stronger.

Usne knud ko usmein kho diya...

Maano apni parchhayi bana liya...

Apne aayine ko hi apni zindagi bana liya...

MAAN SINGH KHURANA


A 28 year old man of Principles. Does not trust anyone easily. Some hidden pasts made his life miserable but he buried them and constructed a wall around his real self.

Kya tha yeh sirf ek sapna...


Kya hoga jab tuta ho wo AAIYENA???

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Aaiyenaa is a story revolving around two individuals who are different yet very similar to each other. Due to their extreme similarities they attract to each other. But what happens when the present is marred by the past? When your mate is broken beyond repair...

Jabb aapka aaiyena hi tuta hua ho????

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A super big thank you friends, it's only due to your love and above all your PATIENCE that me is back to continue this story. .. Your love pulled me back to writing it... Thank you so much dearies for trusting me and above all bearing with me!! Hope me is able to live upto your expectations in future also!!!😳

LOVE...

Ruchi...

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INDEX

THREAD 1

THREAD 2

Thread 3 - https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4097796

PART 28

SUMMARY TILL NOW

PART 29

Part 30- Scroll down

Part 31


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Hi buddies!!

First of all a huge SORRY!! I know most of you must have thought I abandoned my stories, but its not true dears!! I have been around here all this while but never got the courage to come on my FFs without an update!! Since a long time I kept planning to write but something or the other kept cropping up not allowing me to work on it!!

But now I am back!! Starting with Aaiynaa, I will slowly work on all my FFs, I am still reading them to find out where I had left them actually!!! Since my previous thread was locked, I am starting in a new one!! I have no idea if you all still are waiting for my stories or not and I am also hoping I have not lost the touch!!!

Please bear with me guys!! This story I will try to update every second day!! And this time no vanishing!!! Promise!!!! These FFs are very close to my heart and I really want to give them a proper end just as I had planned!!

Hope me gets at least 50 % of my readers back!!

Love you all!! And sorry once again!!!

Ruchi
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You may find update a little short!! please bear with me!! Am trying to get in the flow!!
will try to be regular to compensate!!😳You can expect the next part in next 48 hours!!😆

PART - 30

Adi and Pinky's wedding was fixed for Sunday, which was two days later!! Poor Adi and Pinky hardly had any say on their OWN wedding as each and every thing was decided by one and only our melodramatic Dadima. Only once everything was fixed did everyone notice that the three people responsible for this happiness were missing!

MAAN's Room

Sam barged inside his daddy's room only to witness his daddy busy staring at a dirty piece of paper, sitting on the bed.

"Wat ale you seeing???" Sam curiously asked trying to peek at the paper.

Maan immediately turned around, and got startled to see our dear Sam who was now standing comfortably behind him on the bed, while that pair of curious eyes was still trying to peep at the paper.

"Oh gosh Sam!! You scared me!!"

"okie but wat ale you hideng?"

"Nnn...nothing Sam... Uhhh excuse me!!" Said Maan and ran away before the detective started his questioning and grilling session!!!

"Eeeh somthig fissy!!" Sam concluded his eyes glistening with mischief and pride now that he found a new mission!!!

NIGHT Time

Geet had to stay KM outhouse as she had still not found a good apartment on rent. Going back to hostel was out of question since Sam was here. So she and Sam were comfortably cuddled up in the luxurious bed of Maan's bedroom in outhouse. Maan had furnished it so that he could take refuge here when Dadima's melodramatic-ness was at its peak and her mission was to drive him nuts!!

Meanwhile Pinky and Adi too had stayed back and had occupied both the guest rooms of KM though currently both the rooms were empty as the supposed' occupants were busy cherishing their two day courtship period on the terrace!!

Dev and Yash were sharing Dev's room and currently both were snoring away!! Though Dev was on the floor busy romancing the floor tiles as our dear Yash had practiced some Taekwondo moves in his dream that turned a little reality!!!

And our dear Dadima was busy thinking of Sasural Simar ka in her dreams where the ichchhadaari naagin track was going on and the world savior Simar was doing some taandav!!

So all in all everything was extremely normal and peaceful but somewhere in this same mansion at this time, someone was living through a very dreadful nightmare... or wait!! Was it a reality???

MAAN's Room

"Hey Maan!! Come on dude!! You are giving up at just 5 pegs??"

"Hottie!! Nitant has already reached 8 and getting ready for 9th!! This is not done!! Bug up yaar!! See I have put 1000 bucks on you yaar!!!"

"Maan!!"..."Maan!!!"..."Maan!!!" Everyone cheered

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"Yeah!! I have my license yaar!! Come on am a major now!!! Its time to test my present!!!"

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BOOOM!!! CRASH!!!

"AAAHHH"

"Nahiii" Maan shouted getting up from his sleep!! He was perspiring badly. He somehow took the glass of water kept on the side table with shaky hands. His eyes were still red and even the 16 degree temperature of AC was not helping his state!

"What did I dream of???" Maan thought confused!!!

But Maan didn't get time to ponder over it as his bedroom door was brutally being knocked by an impatient Yash and Dev who had heard his blood-curdling scream because their room was quite nearby to his room.

After nearly ten minutes of convincing them and one additional minute of glaring at them, Maan got successful in getting them out of his room. Not having enough strength to think more, he fell into a dreamless sleep.

NEXT DAY MORNING

There was a great hustle bustle at the breakfast table. Everyone was talking at once, after all there was a wedding to plan that too in just two days!!

"Dadima lets have Mehandi and Sangeet today afternoon and Haldi in the evening!!" Geet suggested.

"Nahi beta... Haldi toh subah hi hoti hai.."

"Uff!! How will we manage so many rituals in just two days?" Dev grumbled.

Geet looked at his when he spoke and then shook her head... "No she was thinking too much, there can be many Devs out there... But why did he look so familiar???"

"D..Dddadi... C... caaan me and P... pinky have a c...court weddinggg?" Adi suggested

"NAHHHIII!!! Bina saath agni ke pheron ke shaadi? Hum aisa anarth hamare ghar mein kabhi nahi hone denge." Dadi firmly put her foot down.

"Dadi the only way possible for this wedding to take place is have a small mehandi and sangeet today, haldi tomorrow and then a simple temple wedding." Maan spoke while coming down the stairs adjusting his cufflinks. Dev and Yash gave a concerned look to him but then seeing him normal they got relieved.

Dadi was about to protest but then Maan added- "Either this way or a court wedding OR a wedding AFTER TWO MONTHS" Maan said with finality.

Everyone murmured amongst themselves and by the time Maan reached the dining table they squealed "Humey MANZOOR HAI!!"

Poor Maan literally jumped out of his skin!!!

PRECAP

Some more glimpses of Nightmare

And uh... oh... someone had problem with Adi marrying Pinky!!!😲

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PREV- Link Above NEXT-

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So this is it guys!!! Hope me loved upto your expectations!!!😕

Am trying my best to revive my writing and bring that flair back!! Am sorry if I was not successful!!!

See you with next update maybe tomorrow itself!!!😉

Love you guys!! Take care!!!

Ruchi

Edited by ruchs - 9 years ago
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Thank you sooo much!!!!😳😳
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Welcome Back !!

Superb update ..
waiting for sam's detectivegiri to knw what maan was hiding frm him ..
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Welcome Back dear...
Superbbb update...
Sam is sooo cute ...
Yash is sweetly sleeping on Dev bed nd idiot Dev is on floor...
loved dat part...
want to see there reaction too when Maan just Shouted on his dream...
loved it...
Continue Soon dear...
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nd CONGRATULATION on New Thread tooo dear...
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Good to c u back...
Thanks for update.
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Omigosh!!!! Ruch is that you?? that's unbelievable 😲 . But nevertheless a wonderful surprise. I'm happy that your back. Superb update. Dadi is so dramatic. Sam has got new detective job now haina😉. Just to let you know I use to read your stories on FB but over the year I started using IF so will continue to read and comment of IF.
Beena Thomas

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