FF: Pale Blue Dot Musing and Chatting Corner Thread 2

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Dearies..

Making a new home for my angry birds. I'll update on Wednesday.. till then here goes the teaser for you..

Chuckling at the satire, Jodha checked herself. The mustard yellow and green Salwar she decked in apologized for throwing her into fix. "Mm.. true!! I never realized but you are quite observant!!" she snapped back.

"Of course!! I observe all that is visible and..", darting a fiendish glance, he smirked. "...that is hidden too!!"

"Huh?" The noodles in her mouth rapidly slumped down causing Jodha to choke. Patting head, she quickly gulped a few sips, and if her gaze involuntarily traversed down to verify the position of her dupatta, was that her mistake? After all, wasn't it a natural womanly reflex to such impish comments?!!

Tracing her gazes, Jalal grinned in pleasure. My, my!! Winning over her, time and again, how scrumptious!! His gaze lurked around her heated cheeks.

"What happened? Why're you choking?" making an innocent face like the most pious man on Earth Jalal asked.

"After what he just said, is he asking me why?" too dazed to come to terms and too embarrassed to talk of it, Jodha looked aside irritated. "Nothing!!"

"Fine.." innocently shrugging, he resumed where he stopped. "Yeah.. about the hidden part.. I'm talking of invisible up", leisurely chewing the morsel just like she did earlier, Jalal sniggered. God!! The listener's shoulders coiled in modesty as the dirty mind could only make out adulterous content from his statement. That moment, she regretted her secret wish of HIM getting bad, for, this bad boy proved to be too insidious to endure.


Teaser 2

"I didn't drool, I peeked only once. That too impressed by your ease in operating fork and knife, like tools in hands of a mechanic!!"

"You call an automotive engineer a mechanic?!!" Jalal laughed. "How insulting!!"

"What else can be a better term for the man who spends all day with machines?" playing with the chicken piece, she sniggered. "To me, that fork and knife in your hands simulated wrench and pliers."

"Now I get it why you find businessmen boring!!" curiously observing her reaction, Jalal quipped. "If a mechanic is Ms.Jodha's pick, why'd businessmen interest you?!!" Amazed by the whimsical satire, Jodha looked up from plate. The mischief in his eyes compelled her grey cells to think of a twisted response.

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Sweetshruthi thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Me first 🥳
New nest

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wil wait until wednesday
Good night ... Sweet dreams ... Akka
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hi Akka🤗
Lovely teaser 😳
What could be the satire!!?
Thanks for the new nest Akka😃
Wait continues till Wednesday
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Posted: 9 years ago
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O gawd..
Why u give such a teasing teaser?
Now how to wait 3 days😭😭
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Originally posted by: Bindu_nhbr

Hi Akka🤗
Lovely teaser 😳
What could be the satire!!?
Thanks for the new nest Akka😃
Wait continues till Wednesday



a simple satire.. an answer to her play of words 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Haaww kya teazer hai😳😳
He observes all that visible and hidden too😳☺️
How can i sleep now Jahnu
Have to wait two more days 😡
Btw thank u so much for pleasing angry birds😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: shruthikarthik

Haaww kya teazer hai😳😳

He observes all that visible and hidden too😳☺️
How can i sleep now Jahnu
Have to wait two more days 😡
Btw thank u so much for pleasing angry birds😃


Don't thank and throw me into guilt 😕
sleep with Jalal's dreams.. 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: sharmacatty

O gawd..

Why u give such a teasing teaser?
Now how to wait 3 days😭😭


only 3 days 😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: hemakeerti



a simple satire.. an answer to her play of words 😆


It might be simple..but impossible for poor readers to guess.
But still thinking abt the color combination 😆

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