Akdha ff-You And I-Thread 2 Updated Last Chapter pg.no 94(8/11/2015)

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aswinpaul

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Posted: 10 years ago

#331

I am happy for finishing ur project eagerly waiting for update sister make it fast pm me congrats for ur project result

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meera

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Chapter 11:

Jodha and Jalal were getting ready for surya's party .As the party theme was black and white Jalal was wearing a black coat suit.His hair was perfectly gelled.Then he wore his limited edition rolex datejust pearlmaster watch which completed his look.He was looking extremely dashing every girl could fall for the one look of this prince charming.

(see the pic)

On the other hand Jodha was getting ready for the party she wore a backless knee length gown.She wore black steds complimenting her look.She put honey coloured lip gloss with minimal make up.Asusual she was looking breath taking.

(see the pic)

Both were ready to leave for the party.

Surya came to jodha's house and picked her up for the party.Meanwhile jalal also picked aaliya for the party.They both arrived at same time.Then the headed inside the party venue.It was a grand party the hall was well decorated.Jalal was mesmerised with the decorations same as the case with jodha.Then they saw each other both forget abt the surroundings and their eyes were locked for a minute.Then their eyelock was broken by the announcement of Surya.

"Good evening Ladies and Gentlemen .Welcome to my party.Today Iam vry happy because for two reasons.One was that we hav got the most biggest deal and this project was the greatest achievement for khurana industries and the nxt reason is we got an opportunity to collabrate with mughal industries that too with Mr.Jalaluddin Mohammadh the No one bussiness man.So to celebrate this we arranged this party.Guys enjoy the party.To make it more interesting we are planning to hav couple exchange dance.we will switch off the lights .The spot light will hit two dancing pairs both hav to exchange their couples and hav to dance on the dance floor along with other couples.So lets start the party guys DJ music plz.."

The whole ppl in the party was cheering up.Surya asked Jo to dance with him.Jodha also agreedJalal and Aaliya are already in dance floor.But Jalal's eyes were only on Jodha.He couldn't take his eyes off her.He glared at surya while he was heading to dance floor with Jo hand in hand.His jelousy knew no bounds.How much he wanted to punch him now.But he controlled.Thn the music started all started to dance.Surya lovingly hold Jo's one arm and put it on his shoulder while her other arm holding his one hand.Surya's other hand was on her slim waist.She felt uncomfortable but didn't said a single word and slowly started to dance with him.

(My fav song frm student of the year)

Surkh wala, sauz wala, Faiz wala love
Hota hai jo love se jyada waise wala love
Ishq wala love

Hua jo dard bhi toh humko aaj kuch zyada hua
Ishq wala love
Ye kya hua hai kya khabar yehi pata hai zyada hua
Ishq wala love
Agar ye usko bhi hua hai phir bhi mujhko zyada hua
Ishq wala love

Meri neend jaise pehli baar tooti hai
Aankhein mal ke dekhi hai maine subah
Hui dhoop zyada leke teri roshni din chadha
Ishq wala love

Suddenly the spot light hits Jodha-Surya and Jalal-Aaliya.So they exchanged their pairs by twriling.Jodha banged Jalal's hard chest.Their eyes locked.Jalal snaked his arms around her waist and started to move with the beat.

Jhanke badalon ki jaali ke peechhe se
Kare chandani ye mujhko ittala
Leke noor sara chand mera yahin pe hai chhupa chhupa hua
Ishq wala love

Hua jo dard bhi toh humko aaj kuch zyada hua
Ishq wala love
Ye kya hua hai kya khabar yehi pata hai zyada hua
Ishq wala love
Agar ye usko bhi hua hai phir bhi mujhko zyada hua
Ishq wala love

Kyon na aise hota
Jo milte tum ho jaate gum saath mere
Hote hote hoga samjhaye hum
Tham jaa aye tham O dil mere
Toota jaata jaata taara jab gira
Zara zyada zyada maangu dil tera
Kabhi zyada zyada maane na dil ye sarphira
Ishq wala love

Jalal turned her back wards and hugged her frm back while dancing and kissed her cheeks.Thn again she twriled her and made her fall in to his arms.

Bada ye dil nadaan tha, par aaj kuch zyada hua
Ishq wala love
Jo khone ka tha dar tujhe pata nahi kyu zyada hua
Ishq wala love

Hua jo dard bhi toh humko aaj kuch zyada hua
Ishq wala love
Ye kya hua hai kya khabar yehi pata hai zyada hua
Ishq wala love
Agar ye usko bhi hua hai phir bhi mujhko zyada hua
Ishq wala love

Surkh wala, sauz wala, Faiz wala love
Hota hai jo love se jyada waise wala love
Ishq wala love (x2)

They both were completely lost in each other.Jalal turned her towards him Jalal's both hands were holding her waist.Jo's both hands were circling his neck.Their lips were inch apart.Their lips almost touched when they heared ppl clapping they broke apart frm each other.

Jodha was literally shocked with wat she was doing,While Jalal was smriking at her.She left frm there angrily.She reached the garden outside the party hall.A hand pulled her and she banged on his chest.She knew the touch so without looking at the person she tried to push him but it was in vain.As he was too strong for her.

Jalal couldn't take much more so he banged his lips on hers.How much he wanted to do this frm when he saw jodha tonight.He never saw her in this modern attires her beauty was beyond imagination.Jodha at first flabbargested with the sudden attack but thn eventually gave up and participated equally in the kiss.

Jalal carressed her back her waist and their tounges were mingled both of thm were dominating each other.But jo woke up frm his magic spell and pushed him with all her might.

"Wat r u doing Jalal? How dare u?" still gasping for air

Jalal smirkingly replied"U dont now wat we did my hot kitten u also kissed me back with same intensity"

Jo was more irritated"Stop dis non sense JalaL.Iam leaving"

but before she leave Jalal held her hands"Not in a million years Jo i can't afford to lose u again.I must said this before in the past when we broke apart but we can't change the past so listen I Can't live without u Jo,Ur my life,my breath,my everything.I LOVE U MY HOT KITTEN"

Finally he confessed his feelings.He turned Jo to face him .Her eyes were teary she stammers"Ja..Jal..Jalalll" and she hugged him tightly .She burried her head on his manly chest and sobbed.Jalal took her in his embrace by wrapping his arms around her completing the hug.His hands were caressing her back and hairs.He kissed her fore head as of giving assurance and they stood still in each other's embrace enjoying each other's company.

Precap:Jalal helps Jodha financially to participate in International swimming competition.

Surya proposes Jo as he didn't know abt Jodha and Jalal's love😛

Sry guys I could write this much only as my right hand got swelled coz I slipped today.I typed this with much difficulty so plz forgive me for typos and grammatical mistakes😳

Hit likes and comments that will encourage me to write more.Hope u lied this chappy.Silent readers plz give little strain to ur fingers and hit likes😛

Love u all🤗

Edited by meeramiss18 - 10 years ago

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Deeksha Rao

@paridhiloveu

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Posted: 10 years ago

#333

Awesome chapter meeru akka loved it at last they are together now muaaa I love you for this beautiful chapter I happy that they are together now .

What about that witch then she will definitely try something to separate mu loveable couple

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meera

@meeramiss18

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Posted: 10 years ago

#334

Originally posted by: paridhiloveu
Awesome chapter meeru akka loved it at last they are together now muaaa I love you for this beautiful chapter I happy that they are together now .
What about that witch then she will definitely try something to separate mu loveable couple

Thanks deekshu glad u enjoyed

Love u too🤗

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futus

@futus

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#335

thanks so much for giving us thos lovely update dear.really happy to know they r together.now plzz dont seperate them.precap seeme to be intresting with surya's prposal n jo's competition...update soon n thnxx for pm.. 😊

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Geetbaala

@Geetbaala

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Posted: 10 years ago

#336

Hay Meeru Awesome update Dear😊

Ishq wala love beautiful track..partner exchange nice idea to bring them together.

What a surprise dear..he confessed his love for Jodha amazing.

Continue soon dear.

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NONIE

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Posted: 10 years ago

#337

Wonderful Chapter Meera😃

The romance of jalal and jodha was awesome😳

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harini1482002

@harini1482002

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Posted: 10 years ago

#338

sorry again akka :( 😭

Edited by harini1482002 - 10 years ago

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lovespari

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Posted: 10 years ago

#339

awesome updt 👏 👏
loved the song its beautyful
wow finally thy confess thr love 🥳 😳
loved it❤️ but u didnt pm me 😒
precap is intersting updt soon n
pless pm me also n
take care of ur hand 😊

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harini1482002

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Posted: 10 years ago

#340

hii frnds , i'm back but this will be my last update in this story for now ? at least till sep 20 , who knows , maybe ...but i'm sorry for regretting akka , but still i do regret for putting all this burden in ur shoulders

i'd love to dedicate this to all my brothers n sisters in here in this holy day ! happy raksha bandhan frnds !😃

so let's be back with the story

chappy 12

But like in the past , Aaliya interpreted them . seeing them in each others arms infuriated her and pretended like it didn't bother her and went towards them flashing a smile , " oh , how nice to see you both get to watch you friends together again , it's so pleasant to meet you Jo " said aaliya and the girly talks continued and jalal felt bored with it , so decided to leave and as soon as he left ,the girls too left from there . After getting back to his place , still jalal was not able to find the peace , that his heart wanted . He wished he could get to see his love again , to hold her in his arms , to kiss her like never but his hot kitten was mad at him , from long back . Both of them were right from their place but none of them ever realized that aaliya was the problem maker , that they weren't actually destined to be drifted apart , but , to live their whole life in each other's arms . There , Jo's condition was no different from jalal's . They both wanted each other , with doubt but , aren't they to proud to accept their wanting ? . They didn't have a single reason to actually fight , but they did ! It wasn't a true problem , but a plot to which they paved it's way by not searching for a solution .

For Jalal and Jodha were like love birds , that can never be separated by anything , but their pride ! is it not said that 'ego is a three letter word that breaks the twelve letter word relationship ?' , and it was proved to be true in the case of Jo and Jalal . They always knew that they were meant to be together , that can never be separated by anything or anyone , that they were each other's till end , not even the gods above can separate the two them

Abdul was trying to phone Jalal , but in vein ! Jalal 's mobile was switched off . " maybe he is with his so called fianc " thought abdul with deep sorrow filling his heart . It was heart wrenching for him to see Jalal with aaliya , he never liked aaliya for some unknown reasons . His brotherliness also was one of the reasons that he never liked aaliya . Abdul and Jodha shared the bond of a brother and sister , Abdul always treated Jodha like his own sister . Even now , after 5 years , the memories of the past never left him . And he was in touch with Jo , too ! Disclosing the truth of being in touch with Jo was one of the toughest tasks that the still famous F4 ever did ! yes, Jodha and Jalal were long back , broken by the evil witch , who was now the fianc of the great jalal-udin-mohamad , and his would-be-wife , too , but F4 was never separated by no evil , and Jodha was ofcourse in touch with the other three of F4 . Everyone of F4 represented a brother to her , and she was their little sister . The three,and Jodha shared a special bond , that can never be broken , too . Jo shared everything and almost anything with them . And have also said everything that was the reason for their drifting . While she was saying all those bloody events of jalal and aaliya hugging and the harsh words of jalal , Jo cried like never before , she was so broken , the memories of those was even painful for her to take . slowly , she tried to recover for the heart wrenching happenings , but no , she as never able to . she acted to be happy from the outside but carried all those pain in heart . That was the last time Jo ever cried , while telling the reason for their drifting . Since then , she never allowed a single tear fall down , her beautiful eyes . She created a cold wall between her and others , that made her look emotionless , Surya was the only person whoever understood her , he was right ! Jo wasn't emotionless but pretends to be a one . Jo always had a soft corner for Surya but she didn't want to go through the same , she went through !

Jalal and aaliya was sitting in a restaurant , awaiting their ordered to arrive . Jalal was still in his own world , He never in his wildest dreams thought that he'd get to meet his lady love again , in his lifelong , but he did . Jalal felt like a kid who got his lost-favorite toy but his pride and ego didn't allow him to accept it either . " jalal , we're in personal dinner , and you didn't even open your mouth for a little talk , in the least as is it is a professional one and if you remain silent , i'm sorry , i'd have to break up with you ! ", fused aaliya , she was hell irritated by this sitting in the same place like robots , speaking nothing . She thought He was only hers and that she had made Jalal to fall for her and that he could do anything to get her ! at any cost ! . Jalal came out of his world and starred at aaliya , irritated , he was by her non-stop tantrums , " then leave ! " said Jalal with a arrogant voice . " Jalal...what are you saying ? " asked aaliya , fear was visible in her voice . " I said leave ! " said Jalal not ready to give up his pride to a mere girl . " Jalal , my jaan , i never meant it but i was irritated by you not talking to me " said Aaliya with a tone that was a combo of ' fake ' regretting and seduction . Jalal didn't pay any attention to her anymor and again went back to his world , no their world , were only he and she existed ( i know that , my kitty aka ishi could understand that i got this 'their world thing from my own dream 😉😛) . And aaliya went with her own assumptions and talks . The door of tha restaurant flew open and Jalal's gaze moved towards the door so did aaliya's . Jo came in the restaurant wearing a baby pink lehenga, a very elegant but royal looking one , with a deep u cut in her bodice and backless one , too! and the dupatta was as transparent as hell and Jalal couldn't help but dream about her in his arms . but wait , what , everyone in the restaurant were looking at her with pure lust in their eyes , Jalal realized as he turned furious and his eyes were red shot .

Jodha , came toward the table that she reserved for her and an ' other ' person , who was yet to come , and the table she reserved was very next to Jalal's , but , she didn't bother to look at him even once , she didn't know he was there too looking at her with both love and lust . She sat there waiting for the person to arrive , she didn't order anything and answered the waiter , " i'm waiting for someone to come , so i'll better order later " with a smile , and this caught Jalal's attention . " waiting for someone ? a restaurant ? in such a beautiful dress ? with a cozy and romantic atmosphere ? what the hell is she thinking she's doin' ? is she planning to marry someone ? omg ! hell , no , she shouldn't , how could she ? she belong to me , and only me ! she have no right to decide nothing of her future , but i do ! " thought Jalal as he tried to keep his wrath , adding to this was the lustfull gazes toward his lady love . " Jalal , see , the one who broke with you once is here . thank god , she is as ugly as ever ! i guess she's a h*e...a who*e " said aaliya smirking , missing the anger that evidently started raging within Jalal . Jalal didn't want to create a scene , so kept his anger within him , like a valcano before exploding . Taking this as a oppurtunity , aaliya went on with her silly talks .

once again the door restaurant flew open , and an other girl entered in wearing a lehenga of pink , too ! and Jalal looked over his shoulder to find Jeshma moving towards jo ." This both girls , never changed "he thought smiling like a idiot . Memories from the past started blaring his view of the present . He started recaping everytthing that happened in the past , till the reason for their breakup and there after , Jeshma coming running to him and telling that Jo was heart broken and was in the garden ! OMG ! It was he who broke her heart into pieces and shattered her completely . Realization hit him hard , it was he who done and said all those harsh things . Tears started filling up his eyes .

Soon everyone in the restaurant started leaving , so did Jeshma and Jodha , and Jalal and aaliya .

Jalal ordered his driver to take aaliya home , and stayed back till the pretty ladies decided to move . As the three were out of the restaurant , Jalal took a hold of Jo's wrist . Feeling a sudden tug in her hand , Jo jumped and turned toward Jalal , And of course she wasn't very well aware of him being in her surrounding , her doe like eyes became even wider and for Jeshma it was a surprise to him again , " Hi Jalal , it's so nice to meet you after such a long time interval " said jeshma with a big smile adoring her face . "ahh... hi jeshma , nice meeting you too , but , if you could excuse us for a little while , could you please wait near the parking lot ?" asked jalal still looking at Jodha . Jeshma who sensed the atmosphere , nodded grinning at her ' friends '

As soon as they were in privacy , Jo started freaking out . " what do you want now ? " asked Jo with fear . But Jalal ignored her question and proceeded towards her and Jo took steps towards the backside , But she soon hit a wall and Jalal took this chance and locked her , to the wall and himself . Cool breeze of the romantic night started blowing and Jalal took Jo into a bone crashing hug and cried his heart out " i'm ...so... i'm so sorry ... Jo ... I'm really sorry " he said in between his sobs and He looked like a adorable child at that moment and Jo started Shushing him , rubbing his bone and hugged him back with passion . And this , was enough for Jalal to lose the control over himself as he took Jo's lovely , pretty face in his rough hand and brought his own face near her's and kissed her fiercely , with ultimate passion and desire . Jo also kissed him back in the exact same way as he kissed her . They seemed to have a competition , they were trying to dominate each other in the kiss . Licking each others lips , biting it , and playing with their tongue ...😊

-to be continued

so , how was it guys ? maybe , too boring na ? i agree if u say it's too boring because i too think it is ! 🤢i assure you , that you'll get to read few akdha moments in the next post ... well , two posts in a day must 'e bothered u too much na ? sorry for that also