IshRa TS - Mystic Raptures..EPI PG16 11/09 - COMPLETED! - Page 8

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Posted: 10 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: teetiana

@Anu..

when will you continue this?
please tell me.. you will soon..

And, I repeat.. Update soon!



Hahah..sorry for delaying..updating it today!! 😳😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
#72

Originally posted by: -godschild-

Heyy 😛
Plzz update soon. I can't wait to read it. Especially after C 😉 😉



LOL..Sorry for delaying..
Updating in a bit..😳😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
#73

Originally posted by: Riahshroff

I know right... After C I'm even more excited to read this ☺️ ☺️
Anu plzz do try n update 😳



Hhaaa..I guess I killed the excitement..but updating in a bit..😳😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
#74

Originally posted by: teetiana

After the big C ... Most of our fav story writers in this forum seems to have gone for a holiday.

I.have been writing this on all my fav incomplete stories.. and I repeat here too..
UPDATE SOON!
Please.



So sorry for the ditch!! *hides face* 😛
Doing now~ 😃

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Posted: 10 years ago
#75

Originally posted by: nandinisaha13

You all the writers r d real devil!!😡😡

I mean it was going on a hotwa romanticwa update lekin u stopped at the devil's timing!!😳😳
Update soonish..
Pm me fr d next part




LOL!!! Sorry...😆😆
Getting back with updates now..😳
Promise, romantic one!!

Will PM..😳😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
#76
Hie guys..🤗
Finally updating this one!! 😆 Yes, I know I have been lazy in updating this one.. and have kept so man of you waiting..
But finally.. Here are 2 parts..😆 And I officially..end this TS with that..

Hopefully this was good enough for an end. I didn't wana drag with much!! So yeah..😛

Will try to post the epilogue in a day or 2...😆😳 Only if anyone wants..😛 🤣

NOT PROOFREAD. Please excuse any mistakes!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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PART 3

She crumpled the side of her saree to suppress the moan that bubbled up her lips when his lips touched her shoulder. His lips were gentle leaving small but fierce kisses on her shoulder making her knees wobble. His hands found his way around her waist pulling her back and she took the chance leaning her head on his shoulder as he found his way deeper into her shoulder. Her hands entwined with his as he sensuously kissed her. Her grip on his hand tightened when he bit into her skin making her moan louder. He was so lost in the feel of her skin, soft and creamy under his lips that her moaning back worsened things. He felt himself stiffen as it reached his ears. With a groan he briskly tuned her around making her face him. Her eyes were closed..

- Had it not been for the ceremony, trust me no one could have stopped me from taking you right here.

He whispered forcing her to open her eyes. She grinned hearing his comment.

- You are responsive. It always turns me on.

He said tucking a lock of her hair behind her ear. He watched as the blood rushed up her cheeks. He loved it, when she blushed. More when she blushed about their intimacy.

- Now let me do what I had intended to before i do what I had not intended to do.

- What.?

She giggled. He went back to his words and laughed along.

- Well I had actually intended to help you with your hook but that back of yours had me. I could feel it as usual..

He said while turning her around and hooking her blouse. His hand traced down her arms, his fingers entwining with hers and his chin resting on her shoulder.

- But, its just a matter of few hours. And then its us.


- Hmm..

She smiled looking at him through the mirror, deep into his eyes. All she could see was passion, the need to be with her. She smiled in contentment, she felt the warmth spreading through her for being so loved to such an extent.

- Oh no.

His whisper was low but audible as she looked back at him in the mirror. He was laughing looking at her. she looked at him in confusion trying to get what he was laughing at.

- What.?

She asked but he continued giggling choosing not to answer her. Rolling her eyes she pulled her hands off his and looked skeptically back at him.

- What.? What's so funny Raman.?

She said moving out of his grip towards the mirror to grab her jewellery as he continued to laugh.

- You are in for some serious leg pulling today. I didn't mean to..

He admitted coming forward and wounding his arms around her. His words confused her but as she put them together, her eyes reached up to her shoulder to see exactly what he had seen and now was laughing about it. There on her shoulder was a big, red love bite. The exact place he had bitten her.

- Raman, this.. how could you just.? Now how am I supposed to hide this.? Its so big.

She whined pushing his arms away and trying frantically to cover it with her blouse. He smiled watching her totally amused at how she was freaking out at the sight of it. He grinned mischievously and put his arms back around her restraining her.

- You better find yourself a burkha tomorrow, there are going to be more of them tomorrow. You wont be able to hide them all.

He winked her through the mirror and watched her face becoming red.

- Raavan Kumar. Even you find yourself one. First help me cover this, its all your doing.

- Really.? What will my Jhansi ki Rani do for me to need a burkha.?

- You will see. First tell me how to fix this.

- Now i am curious to know! Tell me Ishita...

- Nothing doing. I have more important things to tend to right now instead of you. You go and buy the burkhas..

She said in a teasing tone and walked away from him leaving him grinning from ear to ear also curious to know what was running in his wife's mind. He followed her around the room trying to convince her but she stood adamant on not giving in until they finally had a knock on the door bring them out of their world.


The function was a smooth affair and she was just greeting the goodbyes to the guests when he came behind her pulling her to a corner announcing their departure. She had looked at him in disbelief pointing to the guests who were still leaving or about to leave when he simply nodded his head in a no and rolled his eyes at her dragging her away from the crowd. She kept asking him about what was he unto but he just placed his hand over her mouth all the way to the car. As he locked her in and took the seat next to her, she had only opened her mouth when he pulled her by her head and sealed her lips with this. After kissing her hard until they were left breathless, he let her go and pecked her cheek.

- Madrasan, stop talking. And actually how many questions can you ask in one min.?

- But Raman..where are we going.?

She had only asked when he threw frustrated look in her direction and rolled his eyes.

- We are going to a hotel because I want to make love to my wife as soon as possible now given its difficult to be around her trying to keep my hands off her and by some coincidence she wants to do the same or so i am assuming. My house is a circus where we don't get even some privacy so we just have to resort to a hotel. Is there anything else you are wanting to know.? Trust me one more question and i am going to kiss you again, or the best option, not even bother to drive to the hotel.

He said in a flat tone as she gaped at him open mouthed.

- Anything else .?

She quietly nodded her in a no and he smiled.

- Good. Can we go now.?

He asked pulling her closer again. She blushed and nodded in a yes. His smiled and drove off while she kept looking at him trying to fathom what could be awaiting her. He was watching her from the corner of his eye and didn't miss the blush on her face and the smile which never left making it evident of what she was thinking of. Much to his surprise, he found himself blushing along as the thought of the night crossed his mind.



- Shall we.?

He asked stopping infront of the honey moon suite of the hotel he had booked for them. She smiled wider and nodded confidently. It was in the car when her hands sweated out of nervousness, he had taken it into his and brought it against his lips kissing it tenderly.

- Don't worry. We will take it slow. I know you must be nervous, but remember its just me and i love you. You can trust me.

Those words had just erased all the fears and nervousness from her as she had confidently walked out of the car hand in hand with him. Her eyes never left the sight of him as he spoke at the counter, nor in the elevator when he had causally stole a kiss of her lips when he watched her looking at him lovingly. The spark in her wasn't missed by him, he would clearly see it in her eyes of how much she wanted this. The glow on her face was for him. He kissed her promising himself to make the night memorable for them. Even as they stood infront of the room hand in hand, her eyes refused to leave him.

- Ishita, you can look at a lot more inside.

He whispered in her ears bringing her out of her trace. she laughed and stepped in allowing him to lead her, to their world for the night.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#78

PART 4

WARNING : Some Mature Content..

His hand was protectively wrapped around her waist as he walked her into the room. The sight around the room stunned her as she looked around the place filled with her favorite scented candles, orchids and rose petals adding to the beauty of the place. Tears pricked the corner of her eyes as the let the magic of place sink in, he had put so much efforts into this. The thought overwhelmed her as she continued to stare around the place. He was watching her continuously without his eyes leaving her for even a second. He could see the happiness on her face, adding to his happiness. Freeing her hand from his she walked towards the table with a rose and a card. She tenderly took the rose and caressed it, bringing it to her lips. It was so soft, soft as love, his love. She opened the card and let the tears trickle down her eyes.

A night that belongs to us, to be cherished forever. I love you my Madrasan.

Raavan Kumar.
But tonight, only Raman.

The last line brought a smile on her face as she laughed, holding it close to her heart. He felt the warmth spreading over his heart as watched her holding both his rose and card close to her heart. She opened her eyes when she felt his hand on her shoulder making her aware of his presence. She turned around and faced him, he was watching her with a serene smile.

- There is nothing more beautiful than what i just saw.

He said caressing her cheek. Unable to hold back, she threw her arms around him and hugged him as tight as possible feeling every inch of her husband she could possibly feel. Sweetly surprised, he wrapped his arms around her reciprocating the passion with which she had hugged him.

- I love you, Raman. I love you so much. This night couldn't have been more beautiful to start with. I am yours Raman, please make love to me. I want to be yours now, forever..

She whispered pressing her lips into his neck. Her words filled his heart with a new happiness as he pulled out of the hug and looked at her. She was smiling through her tears at him.

- Say that again.

He whispered huskily pulling her close by her waist.. She smiled wrapping her arms around his neck.

- I want to be yours, forever..

- Aren't you already mine.?

- I am. But I want to be yours. Totally.

She said stressing on the yours. He smiled naughtily at her words when she stunned him again by pulling him in for a kiss. It was wild. More than he imagined as she chewed onto his lips, waiting for him to respond. Her hands were in his hair, caressing his scalp while her lips continued to probe into his. His hans tightened around her waist when she pulled his hair lightly urging him to respond. He smiled into the kiss and decided to give it back to her. The moment she had pulled his hair, she felt him respond to her, not the response she expected. It was a fierce kiss, he bit on her lower lip probing his tongue into her all the while his hands kneading her waist. A few moments later, he broke the kiss and looked at her.

- Easy there Jungli Madrasan. We have all night.

she blushed and lowered her eyes at being called a Jungli Madrasan. He tucked a finger under her chin pulling her face up to meet his.

- There is another surprise waiting for you in the bathroom. Come back quickly, I feel hungry now.

He said putting both his hands on her shoulders and touching his forehead to hers.

- Hungry.? But you just ate sometime back..

She said in confusion and watching his expression change to something naughtier than it was, she laughed and smacked him lightly.

- Raman...

- What.? Its true, i am hungry and I have my food right here. Just waiting to have it. Now go, and come back quick..

- But what is it.?

- Questions again, go! You will see.

He whispered the last part huskily into her ears followed by a kiss on her cheek. She laughed to her self, blushing and made her way to the bathroom while he stood watching her.


He had been patiently pacing in the room waiting for her to emerge out of the bathroom any moment, waiting with a baited breath. His heart skipped a beat when heard the door click open and he looked back to find her walking out of the place, slowly. He gulped hard as he took in her form from top to bottom. Just the sight of her clad in the flimsy, silk shirt night gown he was left for her. For once he had thought, she would be hesitant but she had stumped him yet again. Walking sexily towards him wearing the same, he felt himself loosing the strand of restrain bit by bit.

She could feel his eyes on her. His gaze was all over her, deep down happy that he was stumped by his own surprise. Mustering enough courage, she looked up to find him looking at her intensely, the raw desire naked in his eyes. She felt herself pulled to him equally as she approached him. The passion which she could see in his eyes, added to her own. She was only a few inches away from him when she felt herself being pulled into his arms. Her hands caught onto his shoulders for support as she crashed into him. He rested his forehead against hers, breathing heavily. She blushed seeing his reaction.. and cupped his cheek.

- I had planned alot, but looking at you now, there is no scope of waiting any longer. I had wanted you to wear this, but this is just...

he whispered and struggled as his hands moved to her bottom puling her closer and plastering her against him. She gulped in a handful of air as she felt him, all of him.

- I bought this for you with a lot of love, so I don't want it shredded, I will just have to take it slow.

She laughed hearing his words earning a playful glare from him.

- You wait and watch now madrasan. Let me take care of your laughter..

He threatened dangerously as he pushed her back onto the couch behind them and slowly sunk in over her, hovering her. She looked deep into his eyes, her eyes conveying away her anticipation as he smiled naughtily and slightly touched her lips.

- I can see it, in your eyes. You are lucky because i am in no mood to play anymore or delay this even by a minute..which I was thinking of, but seeing you like this, i decided to pull back for my own good.

He said dipping down, kissing her neck and she arched back giving him more access. His hands played with the ends of her dress as she desperately tried to gather herself from the assault of his kisses. His kisses were fierce, open mouthed and some of them carnally arousing. She could feel the want as she tried to grab the front of his shirt as he pushed himself onto her. Feeling her efforts, he put some distance between them and captured her lips while she tried to undo the buttons of his shirt with shaky hands. His lips were still in sync with hers when she felt his hand moving down her abdomen. dangerously close to the place she couldn't even imagine. She managed to push his shirt off his shoulder when she felt him pull the flimsy cloth away from her skin, feeling her in every possible way and kissing her shoulder. She moaned and arched her back when his hand caressed her, sending peels of pleasure through her.

- Ahhh...

Her moan came as music to his ears and her lips touched his shoulder, her teeth lightly biting into it as he let his hand wander to her heaven. She wrapped her arms around him and kissed him back equally, leaving fierce kisses on his neck and shoulder. Her hands tightened around him when she felt herself breaking free of the pleasure she was trying to hold on to. She had to give away with a breath. Before she could gather herself up, she felt him moving out of her arms puling her up on her feet.

As he captured her lips once again, his hands pushed her dress off her shoulder allowing it to pool down at their feet. She waited for him but he only stood there watching her form, taking in every bit of it. She blushed hard seeing his gaze on her. Much to her relief he pulled her tight against his chest, buying his face in her neck. Both closed their eyes in pleasure as they shared the most intimate hug, feeling each other. Her curves pressed harder into his chest with him tightening the hug with every second.

It was the feel off the soft mattress which made her open her eyes, to look right into his as he leaned over her on the bed, taking in her beauty. Her senses blew out as she felt him trace his lips down her jaw, her neck to her curves exploring them. It was that moment she lost herself to him, not knowing the places the pleasure reeled her to. He let her kiss him, though every kiss of hers was pushing him more, but her innocent kisses were addictive on another level.

The clock ticked by, the candles blew out, the rose petals crumpled beneath as they let their passion consume them, each cell of their soul coming out alive as the two souls passionately reached the horizon of unison.


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Posted: 10 years ago
#79
Anu!!! How am I supposed to function normally after reading this??
You are out to kill us on a Friday!!
Phew!!! Loved it to bits!!
Looks like Ravan Kumar will need that burkha..
Any chance of giving some after-the-deed romance??
More is always less when it comes to IshRa!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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It was too hot. ☺️ amazing written. Loved their love making scene in the hotel room. ☺️

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