Virika OS: Stay - Page 2

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Justice?
You're asking this?
If this scene was incorporated in ehm, I can surely it would have been the best scene of Virika <3
I was so thrilled reading this is. U have given words to so many emotions in just a page.
Beginning from Fear, Anger, Hurt, Disappointment, Love, Need and lastly Mischievous light moments.
"Stay, Please Stay!" This line says a lot and u always manage to give the best titles.
This is by far the most emotional I felt reading any story. U have penned the hurt of Viren so perfectly, that u can't help but shed a tear.
Really loved the explanation part of Jeevika and how he believed her as he loves her so much to be angry with her.
And the want of him for his wife to STAY is so beautifully described. I wish it never ended!
I so wish we could have seen them performing on this wonderfully written scene by you.
U made my Birthday even more Special with this priceless gift.
Thank you so much and I love you :*

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Amazing os!
You really wrote what we all wanted in the show after this scene.Totally justified
Loved the way you potrayed their emotions and feelings. Just upto the mark.
The courage jeevika showed and kissed him was something else.
The end! No words to say anything abt that.
Superb
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Posted: 10 years ago
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I'm out of words...
You are just MAGICAL!!!!!

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