Swarya ff burning with jealousy (discontinued)

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Guys you might know be from the ff dil ka Dhakhan
Meanwhile I will be starting a new on:

Prologue:

Lakshya is a rich man...
.same characteristics as in swaragini
Swara is married to Lakshya because his father said that if Lakshya doesn't get married to someone then his family will be defamed and then he swore that if that happens then he will defame Swara's family aswell...
They are best friends
Everyone loves Swara and respects her marriage...they think Swarya loves each other deeply
Swara has a boyfriend who she "loves"...she thinks its love
Soon her boyfriend will arrive from America and think that Swara cheated him
Swara will tell him everything and then he will understand and then they will have a secret meetings

Will Lakshya be jealous?

Note:Ragini has moved on and married Sanskaar because she loves Sanskaar and thats why the marriage was broken


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Posted: 10 years ago
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looks interesting😆😆 plz update continue 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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nice one chejal!! :) update next part soon!! 😉
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Part 1:

This will start a month after the marriage when everyone got used to Swara and Ragini and everyone likes them...Except for Sujata(Mother daayan)

Maheshwari house:

Ragini:Swara wake up SWARA!!

Swara:Oh oh Ragini mujhe tumse kuch batana hain

Ragini:Ek minute pehle yeh baatadon kya hogagya tumhe aaj...Tum usually bahot jaldi oot jate ho ab kya hua?

Swara:Ragini maine soya nahi kal till like panch baje suba mein

Ragini:Are Swara kyun? Tabet tik hain na

Swara:Are Ragini haan par..

Ragini:Par...kya?

Swara: Varun araha hain

Lakshya:Varun kaun?

Swara was shocked and put her hands on her face

Ragini:Lakshya woh actually

Swara:Ragini main usse batata hoon

Lakshya:Will someone tell me already? GUYZ?

Sanskaar comes in the room and puts his hands on Ragini's shoulders..

Sanskaar:Are kya hua mere patni kyun parshan hain

Ragini:Woh actually

Lakshya:Bhai woh kisi varun ki baat kare hain

Sanksaar:Varun?

Lakshya:Haan aur voh parshan bi lagraha hain

Swara:Ok main tumhe sab bata hoon aur Sanskaar bhai aap bi sune..Actually aap logon janti hain na right ki mere aur Lakshya ka shaadi nakli hain right?

Lakshya and Sanksaar:Haan

Swara:Well actually Varun mera boyfriend hain... do sal ke lai

Lakshya:(jokingly) Swww swwara kya? Tum cheating kare ho

Sanskaar:Lucky yar masak mat sochna...hamari pyaari Swara parshan hain

Lakshya:Ok sorry

Swara looked at Lakshya angrily and continued: Woh london se arahi hain

Lakshya:Kya?

Sanskaar:Mujhe pata yeh story kahan end karne wali ti toh mere paas already ek plan hai

Ragini:Saskaarji bataye please

Sanskaar tells them the plan

Annapurna comes into the room:Are tum logon yahan hain..hum tumhe doon rahi ti

Ragini:Oh haan actually hum boolgayi ti hume khana pakana hain

Annapurna: Kya? Acha koi baad nahi.Swaraaa tum tayar nahi huwey

Swara:Actually mujhe sar be dard hain to isli liye

Ragini:Par

Swara winked at her

Ragini:Swara main davey lekar aati hoon

Swara:Haan

Annapurna:Haan Ragini usse davey de do aur main aur tum khaana pakana hoon

Ragini:Ji maa

Swara:Nahi maa tori sar dard hain davey le lunga woh tik hogi

Annapurna:Pakka na

Swara:Ji pakka

Annapurna leaves..

Sanskaar:Ok tum dono tayar ho jao aur hum dono plan karte hain ki hum kya bolengi jab varun ayegi

Swara:Tik hain

Swara and Lakshya got ready...

Kitchen:

Swara:Ragini hamari plan to saffal hogi na

Ragini:Are ye kya..tum to hamasha bahot strong ho aur aaj kya hua

Swara:Woh actually

Ragini: Ok ok chinta mat karo

They were chooping the vegatables..

Ragini:Are Swara yeh kya haat kaat liya

Swara:Are haan

Ragini:Dayan kahan hain tumara..haat khud kaat lya aur khud pata hi nahi chala

Ragini quickly took out the first aid box and banded it up...

Ragini:Lagta hain bahot pyaar karte hain usse

Swara:Haan par kya farak parta hain shaadi ho gayi hoon na

Ragini:Are toh kya hua? Tum usse sacha pyaar karte hain na

Swara:Haan

Ragini:Aur woh bi tumse sacha paar karte hain na

Swara:Haan

Ragini:Toh Swara sacha pyaar ki jeet hamesha hota hain ok?

Swara:Haan

Annapurna:SWARAAA RAGINII BETA KHANA PAROS DO TUARA PAPA AAGEYI HAIN

Swara:Ji maa

They went to serve the food...

Annapurna:Are Swara paani nahi diya tumne

Swara:Sss ss sorry

Annapurna: Its ok bete

Swara poured water but into the plate

Annapurna screamed as her clothes got wet

Durga P:Are Swara dayan kahan hain tumara

Annapurna:Its ok ji woh usse chakar aur sar dard mein hai to mein bas kapre baatalta aya hoon

Annapurna went to change her clothes

Precap:Swara gets a phone call from Varun and gets shocked because he said he is coming the next day. Swara tells them. Durga Prasad hears this and comes in.They get shocked

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Edited by ChejalMerai - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice start.. Waiting for nxt part.. 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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nice liked it..next part 😳
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Part 2:

In the morning:

Swara: Are mere earring bi na stuck hai mera salwaar mein

Lakshya:Main madat karoon?

Swara:Uh tik hain

Lakshya took the earrings of her salwaar kameez off and was touching her bare back while doing so. Swara closed her eyes awkwardly.

They shared an eyelock when suddenly Swaras phone rang!!

Swara: Hello

Varun: Hi Shona varun hain

Swara: kya? Mere matlab hain hi kasi ho?


Varun:Tik hoon par what about you?

Swara: Main tik hoon

Just then Sanskaar and Ragini entered...

Ragini: Swara kaun hai?(she whispered)

Swara: Varun Ragini Varun

Sanskaar: Oh god

Varun kaun?

Durga P said while entering...

They were all very shocked...

Annapurna: Ji Ram bhaiya aapko bolare hain..kaha hain aapse koi kam hai

Durga P:Par Annapurna Varun

Annapurna: Varun hamara dur ke risht da dar hain aur jaldi mein maine usse Swara ka number de diya hai

Durga P left

Annapurna closed the door.

Lakshya:Maa

Annapurna: Main sab bata hoon. Kal jab subha mein tum sab bat karehi te maine sune li ti...

Swara: Maa I swear..

Annapurna: Swara beta shant... main tumse naraz nahi balke main to khush hoon ki tumhne ye sab hamare kadan ke lai kare han..Aur main tumhara saath hoon

Lakshya hugged her and said: Thank you Maa

Sanskaar and Ragini hugged her too.

Swara:Kitna pyaair family hai

Lakshya looked at Swara with tears in her eyes and signalled her to come over and hug them too.

Annapurna: Jise tumhne ek bahu ke room paye na Swara bahot khush naseeb hoge

Swara hugged her more tighter.

They went downstairs and did all the chores...

They went to have food..

Sujata:Uttara jaldi so ja ho kal raksha bandan hai aur hume tayari bi karna hai (she looked at

Swara ad Ragini in a a bad way)

Sujata rolled her eyes and said: Vaise Swara Ragini mujhe tume taras araha hai tumhe koi bhai nahi hain mujhe to bhaisa hai aur Parineeta to Lakshya aur Sanskaar aur unke apne apne bhai hai aur Uttara hai Lakshya aur Sanskaar hain aur tumhne koi nahi

Durga p:Sujata!

Sanskaar came over and hugged Swara and said: Koi baad nahi main uske bhai jasi hoon.. vaise agar Parinneta mere haat mein Rakhi band kar sakte hain to Swara mere haat mein kyun nahi

Swara was in tears and smiling...

Ragini was feelng left out...

Lakshya: Ragini mujhe tumpe taras arahi hai..tumare pas koi bhai nahi hai..

Everyone was looking at him angrily especially Swara..Ragini was feeling very sad

Lakshya:Are aap logon mujhe aisi kyun goor rahe hain main masak kari hoon

Swara: Yeh kasi masak hain Lakshya

Lakshya came over to Ragini and said: Vaise main wrong hoon tumare paas ek bhai hain

The whole family got a hint of what Lakshya was going to say and laughed..

Ragini: Are aap aise kyun smile kar rahi hain.. Vaise mere bhai kaun hai

Swara came over and said: Tumhare bhai hain wo and pointed to Lakshya

Lakshya gave her a hug and the whole family had a group hug but Sujata just went(Hate her here and in Swaragini...stupid mom forgot what Ragini did to her Son during her marriage)

Precap:Varun came there and was shocked seeing Swara with sindoor and Mangalsutra. He said I love Swara. All of the family members were shocked...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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nice 👏👏
omg u made swasan and ragya tie rakhi... omg u made dim siblings 🤣🤣
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice
update the next chapter soon 😳 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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omg superb yaar...😃

swasan n ragya siblings...😆😆😆

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