FF : Teri Yaadein (Part 2, Pg 6, 8/10)

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khushboo2006

@khushboo2006

Dazzler

Posted: 18 years ago

#41

Hi Rivs! 😊

Loved the part dear 👏 👏 Shruti's emotions, feelings beautifully penned. But yeh kya 😲 😲 Akaash with another girl and wanted to get married with her 😕 😕 She needs to be jald se jald out of AS's life. Please update soon 😃

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Reeshita

@ree_views

Inactive

Posted: 18 years ago

#42

wow triangle...!!! good good... i have full faith on you... the initial confusion in part1 is now all over... Shruti was looking for Akash!! hmmm.... liked the "loafer" statement as well as the AB style angry young man definition...too good...lagey raho👍🏼

btw the name of the other girl is really the type you wanted... it's pretty uncommon but nice... good search!!

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kamu

@sweetkamz

Beginner

Posted: 18 years ago

#43

nice...like where its heading...great work..keep it up! 😊

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sweety

@sweety_07

Inactive

Posted: 18 years ago

#44

hey just caught up wid this fan-fic.....u r an awesome writer!!!!! 👏 👏 👏

am sure we can expect a nice twist in the story in the next part.... 😊 😊 😊

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vijaya

@viju9383

Inactive

Posted: 18 years ago

#45

egarly wating for next part
plzzzzzzzz
continue soonnnnnn

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shraddha

@guju_girl1

Dazzler

Posted: 18 years ago

#46

really nice story continue soon 👏 👏 👏

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sarikakumar7

@love_life

Inactive

Posted: 18 years ago

#47

omg i love it...plz update soon :)

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Sareena

@Sanaya_86

Inactive

Posted: 17 years ago

#48

hey rivya..where r u??plz tell us the next part!!im dying to know wht happens next 😊 plz plz plz 😉

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rg01

@rg01

Inactive

Posted: 17 years ago

#49

wow, u're a great writer, i was totally imaging Mishal and payal doing these scenes 😊

Enjoy your vacation 😊

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Sareena

@Sanaya_86

Inactive

Posted: 17 years ago

#50

how long is ur vacation dear??i dont want to be pushy but ur story is so gud tht i atleast just cant anymore for the next part 👏 so plzzzz
do write more!! 😉

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