'Priyatama Telusuna' Maaneet FF TEASER @ PG 100

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Posted: 9 years ago

"Priyatama Telusuna"

My love, do you know?(english meaning)

Hi dearies. 🤗...Uma here with new story..hope you will support and shower your love on me like always...❤️

This beautiful banner is by twinkle(nishi) 😛...love you very much nishi...🤗

Note-Dont worry guys only title is in telugu..story is in hindi and english only 😆

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@umamaaneet

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Posted: 9 years ago

~~~~~~~~PROLOGUE~~~~~~~~~

...MUMBAI CHATRAPATHI SHIVAJI AIRPORT...

There was a hustle bustle due to the people crowding and media in chatrapati shivaji airport...who were eagerly waiting for one and only dashing dynamite ...the most eligible bachelor of India...the one who won the most prestigious best business man of Asia award continuously 4^th time in a row was now arriving to his home town(Mumbai) after two days who went to receive his award from the function held at Malaysia ...He is known for intelligence, hard working nature with no nonsense attitude, sharp wit and not to forget his anger...there he is the one and only MAAN SINGH KHURANA...

As soon as he came media crowded him ..who were soon cleared by his body guards...he exited the airport and made a call to his home wondering why no one came to receive him...as every time all his family will be there ho hound around him cheerfully...

Hello kon bola he hai(who is this...)

Nakul...sab kaha he...koi airport kyu nahi aaya?(whre are all...y no one came to receive me...)Maan enquired nakul ..their most trusted butler ...

Wo maan baba ..wo geet ggeet ba baby seediyon se girgayi thi parsoo...abhi sab hospital mai hai(Maan sir...geet geet baby fell down from steps...all are there at hospital )nakul cried as he loved geet very much...

The phone in maan's hand slipped while he ran in jet speed to his car and ordered his driver to take their family hospital...soon he reached hospital

Hospital...

Maan came running stumbling on his way and pushing some people...but nothing came to his mind...it was blank...nothing reached his ears..only nakul's words were ringing ...

Outside the ICU...all the family members were seated ...their faces pale and eyes continuously shedding tears...but all the heads snapped up when maan came running to then...

Gg...geeet...maan whispered chokingly...

*Silence*

I asked something...maan roared but there was another roar beating his...it was vicky's...

Now why the hell are asking about her...when you are the main reason why she is in this state...vicky glared maan furiously...

Maii...i ?maan was perlexled...

Haan thum(yes you)...you are the damn reason...wo bichari(that poor girl)...she loved you like mad from the time she knew the meaning of love ...but you...you are the one heartless monster who dint even cared a hoot about her...vicky thundered

NOO..vicky what are you...it is not like that...maan tried to explain him...

It is fu*king like that...the truth is that...she is mad...a mad needy fool to love you...everything is her fault ...to love the man who wouldn't even care if she fu*king die...vicky's words were cut with a loud voice

SHUT THE HELL UP....maan thundered and slapped Vicky hard that he fell down pushing the chairs...while all the family members gasped...

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What will you do when the one for whom you irrecoverably ,madly and deeply loves is ignorant to your feelings...what you will do when the whole world knows about ur craziness for him but he...he cares a damn about you ...how much will you try hard to get him or leave him????

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Now now...for anyone who are frustrated with my nHNC geet you can read this...it is different from that...in this geet will run after maan 😉 😆...and if you get angry at this maan you can read NHNC..🤣it is your wish

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@umamaaneet

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Posted: 9 years ago

Family Background:

Handa's and khurana's are best friends and relatives..relatives because... handa's married off their only daughter, ragini to rajendra khurana..the eldest son of khurana's...as handa's and khurana's are business partners, friends and now relatives they thought of living all together in one big mansion...they lived happily ..handa's son mohinder married to rano and khurana's second son ram khurana married to jaya ...soon days passed rajendra and ragini were blessed with a baby boy...they named him maan and later a baby girl was born ...they named her anvesha...at the same time mohinder and rano was blessed with baby girl...they named her as geet...ram and jaya too were blessed with twins first they named them as Vicky -paridhi...then they had a baby girl named disha...everything was going fine but a tragedy hit them with the news of ragini and rajendra's death coz of accident...but soon they got back to life with each other's support ...while business was handled by mohinder and ram...

In this story maaneet are bava -maradalu 😉...means maan is geet's ...dad's sister's son..confusion will be removed if you read CS...😛...IF ANY DOUBTS REGARDING THIS ASK ME 😃

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CHARACTER SKETCH:

GEET HANDA..only daughter and heir of handa's age 21...only word to describe her is LOVE...yes love...she is the best example for the emotion love ...her life revolves around one and only person that is maan...her breath,world everything...her every heart beart ...her every breath is for him...she can feel him from anywhere...everyone knows about her feelings for maan but her love himself is ignorant to her feelings...fears maan due to his anger...did not say about her feelings to maan .doing her fasion designing 3^rd year along with anni...very sweet, innocence personified.strong..cannot tolerate maan with other girls...if she gets angry then it is like lava which sweeps everything with it...princess of house and pampered by everyone as she is apple of their eye...her every wish is their command...

MAAN SINGH KHURANA... son of late rajendra and ragini khurana...age 26 .now MD of khurana and handa constructions..Asia's 1st and world's 3 richest man.has a double degree of MBA and M.arch...tough,lethal.intelligent...his one word can collapse the market ...loves his family very much...for him only work ,work and work...not interested in relationships.love is not his cup of tea..girls hound around him but he cares a damn...ignorant to other's feelings...

Anvesha khurana-she is maan's own sister..loves maan and geet equally ...same age of geet ...doing fashion designing along with geet...is in relationship with karan...geet's best friend ...knows her feelings for maan...

Vikranth khurana- vicky...son of ram and jaya khurana...age 25 ...MBA graduate...go lucky person...cool ,flirty a and prankster in group ...loves geet very much and has feelings 4 her though he knows about her love for maan...twin with paridhi...working under maan in KHC

Paridhi khurana-pari...twin with Vicky ...she is hard types... MBA graduate...serious ,bold...but completely different with family ...working under maan in KHC...

Disha khurana- youngest daughter of ram and jaya...bubbly..naive and sometimes dumb too.. ...a complete sweetheart..doing her fashion designing 2^nd year in the same college of geet and anni...she has the tendency to blurt out everything in front of others...thus makes all angry in her gang...she is only saved by maan...loves him and geet very much ...pampered by him ...

Mohinder handa-geet's dad...loving dad...can do anything for geet .former co. MD of KHC along with ram khurana...now it is taken over by maan...but helps in business...he is aloof and hard to maan as he is angry coz maan is ignorant to geet's feelings...

Rano handa- sweet and loving mother...loves all children equally in house...but loves maaneet more...

ram-jaya

Ram khurana- loving ,funny and sweet person...loves all children very much but geet..she is his princess...former CO.MD of KHC...he too helps now in business...

Jaya handa-same as rano...sweet loving mother of all...sometimes strict too...

Karan- maan's and vicky's friend along with yash...he too is one in group...loves anvesha...doctor by profession

Yash- Friend of maan and Vicky along with karan...life of gang...a musician... 😉

ADI-our very own adi...😆...knows everything about maan and his family...

I know many cs are there.😆..but cant help it...

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Guys this story is fun mix with all other emotions.drama,comedy,hurt,pain...mainly love...all in all intense story...

Imp- guys its not based on any movie story...its completely different dearies 😃

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IMPORTANT NOTE

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Dearies..what you say shall I continue...i am not going to give you hopes...I will continue this story only if the response is very very good...if I get a good comments and likes for this then only I will start as I dint type any part now only...so first hand only I am informing...it is completely ur wish to support me in this ...I am already disappointed as comments and likes decreased in my other stories...so I don't wanna take chance...if I get good comments in this then only next part will come...and not only for pro...it applies to all parts in this story... s plz guys give ur support

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Uma 🤗

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