ROSID FF: MIRAGE Completed FF

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hi friends,

Banu here with concept of my 53th FF...

So here comes the concept...


The story of lovers who do their marriage with lots & lots of expectation. But when their expectation fail to meet. Lets see what happens in this story...


This concept and story i started creating a blog for me...


But was not getting time to even update...


So thought of giving as RoSid FF itself...


Hope you all enjoy...

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Part 1



Roli was getting ready for office. She was combing her hair standing in front of the mirror. Her long hair was troubling her to comb it. She even felt like cutting it to get rid of the trouble. But Siddhant like her hair very much.


Your hair is beautiful' he admires atleast once a day.

When she have shower, dry her hair and put a small clip taking small bunch of hair he never miss to run his finger on her hair. He likes the aroma he gets from her hair.


Just his thoughts made her smile a moment. Very next moment when she realized about the horrible fights happened between them, she started hating herself. Why her mind is behind him? Why she is getting happy thinking about him? How she is getting smile instead of hate?


She scold herself and decided to get ready.


She went to the kitchen and took the food in the lunch box and also put some on her plate. She started having food.


He never likes Fried rice instead he prefer Vegetable Biriyani. She too without second thought prepare for him. Everything was going well all these days. But fate didn't leave the chance to disturb their beautiful married life. On very short period everything was changed.


She wipe her thoughts away and finished having food. Then she took her bag and started towards the door. That is when she heard someone knocking the door.


Who has come? That too in this time?' with puzzled expression she opened the door.


Her parents were standing outside the door with upset face.


Come in' she greeted and went inside.


Her parents entered into the hall and sat in the sofa. They looked at Roli.


Roli, Does your husband came?' her mother questioned.


How many times I told you! It is not going to happen.' She replied.


But we can't leave like this Roli' her father expressed.


Roli showed her irritated by slowly closing & opening her eyes.


Mom & Dad, what can I do?' she showed her helplessness.


What is the solution then?' her father puzzled.


I am getting late for the office. We will talk about this by evening.'


She tried to manage the situation and started moving towards the door.


Her parents took a long breathe and looked at each other.

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Posted: 10 years ago
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super update...roli remembered her Sid and smiling but she remembered fight b/w them...akka..nice concept...but so tension inside...what will happen..what happened to them...i know you will untine them..but some sort of tension as we can't see RoSid fight...so if possible plz..update..as soon as possible...we can't stay...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Fab concept banu gud luck dear and update is very nice
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Posted: 10 years ago
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wow..wow...u have started next one too!!!😛...loved the concept (as usually)😉...ok listen, i've to complete love as life 1st..then i'll come back to read this one...just came to leave comment😊
huhu, i'm more excited now...actually waiting for u to increase forum activity...hope u'll b active & give ur 'huge' support which we get always from u😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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As usual awesome concept di..n superb start..wait fr next di
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Very different concept di.
Ur expert in different concepts di.

Give updates whenever possible di
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Posted: 10 years ago
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superb update didi waiting for d next update
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thank you friends for all your comments...

Sorry for keeping you all waiting...

Next update in just few minutes...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Part 2

Roli was going in the car...

When she was driving towards her officer...

Her thoughts were going behind...




It was college first day...

Roli got ready taking additional care for dressing and reached college...

When she entered into the college...

She was searching for her friend Rekha...

Finally she was found below a tree waiting for ROli...

Roli rushed towards Rekha...

Roli: Hi Rekha...

Rekha: Hi Roli...

Roli: Come.. Lets go to the class...

Rekha: Roli... you know few seniors are doing ragging that side...

Roli: Ragging... Lets go and see what they do...

Rekha: Roli.. they are seniors and they are in big group... why to take risk.. lets go to class through other way...

Roli: Come one Rekha... Lets see what they are doing after all...

Roli didn't hear Rekha words and went to that side...

One big group of people were ragging the people going that side...

When Roli reached near that spot...

The group block a guy who was going that way...

Person1: Hi Stop...

Person2: How dare you can go ignoring us...

Person1: Exactly... Do what i say and then you can go to your class...

Person2: Yes... Hmmm... what can i tell him to do???

Person1: Why cant we tell him to remove his shirt and do a dance in front of all...

Person2: Good... Hi.. what are you seeing.. do what i say...

The guy was standing silent hearing all these...

Roli who was just seeing all these looked at the guy...

He was standing against him... so she was unable to see his face...

Roli was wondering.. who is this coward guy standing hearing all these...

Roli rushed towards that spot...inspite of Rekha trying to hold her...

Roli: Look.. why you doing all these...

Person1: Who are you coming in the picture suddenly...

Roli: I am also student in this college now.. I dont think you require any more details...

Person2: Then its good... you too need to do what we say...

Roli: Neither this guy.. nor me will do anything... understand...

Roli just turned towards the guy who was looking at her...

Roli: You too naa... wont you even know to deny what they are telling.. you are just standing like a statue...

Roli turned towards the group again...

Roli: Better be away from us.. or we need to complain to Principal...

Roli hold the hands of the guy and took him from there...

The guy was also going behind her...

Rekha was wondering what Roli is doing.. that too on first day...

She went the otherway and rushed towards the class...

Roli reached little away from the group by now...

Roli turned towards the guy...

Roli: Hi.. you... why are you so silent.. wont you speak??? if you are like this.. all will make you dance as per their wish... you know...

The guy was just looking at her...

Roli: Are you really deaf or dumb???

He smiled...

Roli: Oh! You are smiling.. so you can hear what i speak.. Also tell me which group you are.. so that i can understand.. you can also speak...

Guy: Management...

Roli: Hi... i am also from same group.. good yaar... Lets go to the class then...

Roli started moving towards the class while the guy too walk with her...

Roli: By the way.. what is your name???

Guy: Siddhant...i am Siddhant Rajender Bharatwaj...

Roli: Oh good!!! I am ROli... Roli Jamanlal Divedi...

Siddhant smiled... Roli too smiled...



Roli by now reached her office...

She parked the car and went inside the office...

She reached her seat and sat in it...

She took the water bottle and drink some water to relax herself from the emotions created by his thoughts...


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