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Posted: 10 years ago
loved it
love that can't stand d test of time was just a mere convenience that u think is love
so he still doesn't realize d magnitude of his mistake
he is repenting but not realizing d damage done to others life bcoz of him especially Geet
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Posted: 10 years ago
love the update I never ever want geet to forgive maan nd accept him...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Brilliant update. But made us wait for a long time
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome part .. Now Sam accussing Maan and their relation is breaking which is actually right .. Now he is gonna feel pain which Geet has gone through and still going ..
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Edited by singh24 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

The Myth


The test of a true myth is that each time u return to it , new insights and interpretations arise.


A saying Or belief Or fact Or superstition Or Myth ... these words play an important part in ppl's life ,, many blindly believe or live their lives on some belief nd myths ,, from d time of d bith of a child to till his/her end some belief never left them ,, those ppl trust a priest who himself a human being nd it's also said that human is a bundle of mistakes ,, then how cn a priest be trusted blindly ? Does a priest's words r more important than an innocent child ? If yes then where is humanity , love , care nd family bonding ? Where r relations nd their warmth ? Where is Truth nd Reality ?



Note... This is a fiction inspired by some facts and incidents from our surroundings . If someone find any resemblance in d title and story line , they r welcome to leave their comments on my page (plzz don't pm me)with d link . I'll try my best not to touch any body's work. Need ur love and support to make it an interesting SS.





Part - 25


Part - 26

Maan was in tight situation ,, hurt nd helpless ,, trapped in his greed nd plan ,, he hurt his family nd now he was facing d outcomes ,, there was no option rather than his family to ask for help ,, he cdn't ask money from any business client bcoz it cd harm KC's nd Kurana's respect ,, so he had to surrender in front of his family ,, DM didn't pick his call but when Maan was calling again nd again then she picked fearing that there may be something if he was calling her like this .

DM: hello Maan .

Maan: DM ,, plzz don't cut d call ,, plzz listen to me DM .

DM sensed that he restless : what happened ? r u fine ?

Maan: DM I m in trouble ,, I m helpless ,, plzz help me ,, dad is not talking to me plzz tell him to talk me .

DM tensed : what happened , why r u in trouble ?

Maan: DM dad stopped my money in anger ,, I don't have money , nd I need money to save a life ,, DM I know I was wrong ,, I m sorry for that DM ,, I m beg of u DM plzz help me ,, i'll do everything what u'll say ,, plzz DM tell dad to talk to me .

DM: Yash stopped ur money , means ?hum samjhe nahi ?

Maan: dad is angry with me nd stopped d money which I was getting form him ,, I m accepting my mistake DM ,, i'll do what u all say ,, i'll leave everything ,, plzz DM help me ,, it's d matter of do nd die for me DM ,, I m so helpless . ( he pleaded)

DM: Maan , calm down ,, we have to talk Yash ,, we didn't know that he stopped sending u money ,, but it's true that he was very hurt nd angry bcoz of ur behaviour ,, u put d family in shame do u have any idea what damage u had done ?

Maan: I know DM ,, I m sorry DM ,, I m sorry ,, u cn punish me for that ,, i'll bear everything but plzz help me .

DM : let me talk to Yash 1st nd then i'll call u .

Maan: thanks for talking me DM ,, I m waiting for ur call .

DM: OK , take care .

In India *****

DM cut d call nd then went to meet Reema ,, she was unware that Yash stopped Maan's money , he was angry nd ordered all not to talk Maan , but how Maan wd survive in that country without money nd how he wd manage his study ? She didn't know what was happening ? There Geet nd Daimaa stopped talking ,, their phone nos wr not responding ,, they had tried many times but get no reply nd lastly they had concluded that she cut off d last link ,, they lost their DIL ,, DM talked to Reema nd told her about Maan's call ,, Reema too became tense nd sensed that may be Maan was in some trouble ,, she was a mother nd cn't see her children in trouble no matter how much they wr wrong ? A mother never left her hope to bring back her lost child .

Reema called Maan at once nd Maan picked d call seeing mom on screen ,,he squeezed his eyes sensing that his mom nd DM we tense ,, he felt guilty hurting them.

Maan: mom .

Re: Maan , what happened beta ,, why r u so disturb ?

Maan: mom , I m sorry ,, I hurt u all ,, I m in trouble bcz of my mistakes ,, plzz help me mom .

Re: ur dad is very angry with u Maan ,, u left like that nd didn't even try to know what situation we wr facing bcoz of u ,, u became so selfish .

Maan: I m sorry Mom ,, I was heart broken nd angry with that marriage so took that step ,, I m sorry ,, i'll do what u all say but plzz help me now .

Re: me nd Maa cn't give u money without asking ur Dad , so u have to wait ,, we'll talk to him nd then call u back ,, OK .

Maan: thanks Mom ,, plzz tell dad to take my call .

Re: lets see how he'll react ,, we'll try our best , but u have to convince nd prove to ur Dad that u r regretting ur mistake nd really want to rectify ur mistake .

Maan: i'll mom ,, i'll.

Re: OK , fine take care nd wait for my call.

DM nd Reema sighed nd looked at each other in tension ,, they knew that they have to try hard to convience Yash.

In Canada ****

Maan cut d call nd took a sigh of relief hoping that his mom nd DM deffo try to help him ,, now he realized d value of Family nd Elders ,, they scold , stopped nd sometime forced them to go with their wish but they love their children too ,, they thought for their betterment nd happiness ,, he mistook his elders nd became selfish which brought only prob for all ,, he remembered her Mom's words that he left putting them in bad situation .. means something big happened behind his back in India ,, deffo Geet nd her family blamed them nd she came here behind him but why she was not reacting ? What she wants ?

Geet became a mystery for Maan which was going hard to understand for him ,, he knew that she came here with some plan ,, choose same college nd living in front of him , means she did a good search ,, his family didn't know his add it means she dug out about him nd Sam , but why she was not reacting seeing him with Sam ,, why she is behaving like a stranger ? There was no reply of these Qs ,, Maan didn't know when he slept there in chair ,, he didn't want to go in .

There Sam slept after talking to her parents ,, they too advised her to ask some help from Maan , bcoz he was rich nd cn arrange easily ,, they had too take loans from relatives nd banks ,, they assured her that they wd ask for good hsptl in India too .,, sam didn't want to take chance for her life nd wanted her treatment in US but for that they need a good sum nd her parents had to visit here for her help, now arranging money was d main mission nd they find Maan d only source .

In same city lil away from this place Geet was sleeping peacefully unaware about this fact that d ppl who wr d main reason of her pain getting their pay back ,, few days back she was complaining that God only put her in pains not d ppl who played with her life , but who came to tell her that time tests all ,, time never stop nd moves on ... What goes around , comes around so whatever ppl sow , they'll reap .

Geet was alone nd here in an unknown country bcoz she listen her elders ,, what she faced in her life cd break any person , but her daimaa Farida taught her to fight nd don't give up ,, she herself was an example for her ,, Farida taught her to give 2nd thought to her decision to her every decision , bcoz sometime we got diff ans after 2nd thought ,, she believe to give a chance to mend d damage but never bent infront of selfish ppl ,, she was humble but curt too ,, she bent but with high head ,, she respect all but didn't allow anyone to play with her self respect .

What an irony .. one is suffering for not listening d elders, nd other was suffering bcoz of listening d elders ..

Geet was hurt when Maan said that he loves someone else ,, she cd bear that bcoz loving someone was not crime ,, she cd compromise sensing his helplessness of losing his love bcoz of elders decision ,, she cd wait for him , but his rejection after claiming her nd then calling that a mistake hurt her deep ,, his word Sorry for his mistake wounded her deep ,, which was an insult for her ,, he didn't realize his responsibility nd left ,, she cd give him 2nd chance if his family didn't hide d truth but they too tried to cover up him ,, they never shared any news regarding him ,, he was living here with his GF nd didn't recognize her angered her .. he cheated d relation which he had with her , having an illicit relation with his GF ,, he was married nd consummate d marriage , after that he went to live in relation ,, this was unbearable for Geet's respect ,, she decided to kept quiet bcoz now calling him her husband was an insult for her ,, he abused d relation which he had with her, so no use of keeping this relation ,, rejection was d solution of this wrecked relation .


Peeping ... Maan's talk to yash ... Shuffling ...


Part - 27


sorry for mistakes ...

Edited by singh24 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
hi babbie
hello ..
how r u ?

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Posted: 10 years ago
lovely part
maan is sufferring
now sam thinks about her life
n maans love has vanished
she is blaming him n his parents
n even ready to ask money from them
she blames him for everything happening in her life
but sh didnt think maan too lost many things for her
but she is selfish
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Posted: 10 years ago
hi babie
how r u
n how is ur lappy
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hi...
Valli,tabby,barbie...😛

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