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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: avika444

Superb update dear
Payal Gupta is now payal raizada
Loved arnav teasing his brother and he calls his bhabhi anklet hehehe
Departure of payal created void in Gupta's mansion
Yaar saket is so adorable brother
Hehehe arnav and his comments
Overall I enjoyed reading this update
Thanks for pm:-) :-)


I am glad you enjoyed it. Thanks dear🤗

Originally posted by: cheesemad

I have only two things to say:

1) I absolutely loved this update.
2) A lot can happen over a coffee! As they say ;)


Continue soon! :D


Thank you so much dear.😃
Yeah a lot can happen over a coffee😉
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Originally posted by: srain10

Awesome update...

When are you going to fulfill arnav's and our dream of kissing khushi's button nose...


Let us see when Khushi lets him fulfill his wish😉
Thanks😃

Originally posted by: raniluvsasr

Hey this is soo cool. Amazingly good. Arnav lives to irritate Khushi he finally confessed. Loved Arnav's play boy and youth avataaar. Khushi gets irritated very fast. Will Khushi start afresh with Arnav??? Update soon


Thanks dear. I am glad you are liking this Arnav😃

Originally posted by: Titaliya1234

Loved banterings of raizada and huff puffs of miss red nose gupta! Well both have attraction beyond the lines and am intrigued to knw what happens to the coffee offer! Will Khu be able to resist aru or viceversa?


Thank you for the lovely comment😃
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Edited by barsha_dash - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

Banner credits: arnavini🤗

Chapter 3

Hello Diary,

Had a long and tiring day today. I had to take extra classes to complete the syllabus.

I met Mr. Jerk again in the book store. Sometimes, I wonder if he is following me. And again he started his irritating stupid dialogues. "Chane bech raha hoon. Khaani hai?" God! How does he come up with these dialogues! Moreover, he thinks they are funny. Annoying Stupid Raizada!

But then I was surprised when he apologised for his behaviour and even asked me out for coffee. I don't understand why likes teasing me. Anyway, I agree that we have to meet in occasionally since, unfortunately, we are related but I cannot forgive him easily.

Was I very rude? I saw his face fall when I refused joining him for coffee. I think I saw genuine regret in his eyes. Whatever. I am NOT going to forgive him soon.

P.S. Err.. In blue shirt and beige chinos, he was...ermmm... distracting. I SHOULD stop noticing his clothes.

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Arnav Singh Raizada had not been so anxious even for his Harvard's acceptance letter as he was then, waiting for Khushi's reply. And then she had replied with a not so polite tone that she would not be able join him for coffee as she had some other work. He had silently watched her retreating figure. Well, he knew the exact reason. She had not forgiven him for all his teasings.

But Raizadas do not accept defeat easily. So Arnav had figured out that he had to work harder to earn Khushi's apology and trust. Khushi Gupta was an enigma for him and he wanted to explore the mystery that she was.

Arnav was in London, working as an intern in a business organization. It was his father's policy that his sons gain knowledge about the business world before joining the family business. Arnav was already aware about Akash and Payal's relationship. So when he had come to know that their marriage date had been fixed, he decided to congratulate Payal directly. He had overheard a honey-like sweet voice talking excitedly about her beloved Jiji's marriage while talking to Payal over phone. It did not take much time for Arnav to deduce that the voice belonged to Payal's sister. He had imagined a sweet young lady with an ever-smiling face as the owner of the voice. Owing to Akash's constant praises about his would-be sister-in-law (after he had finished his quota of praising his would-be wife for the day), he had grown a special interest in his brother's would-be sister-in-law.

He had expected to meet her when he had gone to the Gupta Villa with the shagun. But alas! He wasn't fortunate enough. She had not returned from college. His mind had boggled when he had come to know that the lady with a honey-like voice, and with an even sweeter name Khushi, was a Professor of Mathematics. He had wondered how lucky her students had been, getting to hear the melodious voice teaching one of the most difficult subjects.

However, Arnav's beautiful notion about Khushi had shattered into pieces on the day of his brother's engagement. All his theories had been proven wrong. Instead of a sweet young lady with an ever-smiling face with a honey-like voice', he had met an an angry young lady with mostly-frowning face with a stern voice'.

Gradually he had realised that beyond her strict persona, she had a care-free self which she showed only to her closed ones. He had seen her grow friendly with his sister Anjali and his grandmother during the wedding. He had seen her fight with Saket over trivial matters. He had seen her teasing Payal and Akash and silently wiping her tears during Payal's bidaai. He had also seen her asking her father to rest and comforting her mother that everything would go well. He had seen her laugh at Saket's antics. Ah! Her laugh! The rarest yet the most beautiful sight ever.

The more he had observed her, the more his respect had grown for her. One day he would definitely be able to bring that rarest sight' on her face. With that resolve in his mind, Arnav Singh Raizada closed his eyes and welcomed his peaceful sleep.

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"Khu baby, wake up."

Khushi was greeted with Saket's voice. She slowly opened her eyes and then sat up. Her eyes rounded in shock at the sight in front of her. Saket was all ready to go out for the regular morning jog. She rubbed her eyes and checked the time.

5:50 A.M.

She rubbed her eyes and checked the clock again. She then looked at Saket raising an eyebrow.

"Saket, are you fine? You don't have fever, right?" She finally asked him.

"Of course I am fine. What will happen to me? Get ready quickly." Saket said and walked out of the room.

Khushi was still in shock. Saket woke up earlier than her! Strange! And he was excited for the jog. Usually Khushi had to drag him out of the bed in the morning. Something is definitely amiss. Khushi thought.

In exactly ten minutes, she was ready and both of them reached the park near their house, their usual jogging spot. Khushi was observing Saket since the time he had woken her up. She saw him checking his phone more frequently than usual. He was even looking towards the entrance of the park from time to time.

"Are you waiting for someone?" She asked.

"No. I am not waiting for anyone. Khu baby, you are really slow. Run faster baby." He replied and ran past her.

Khushi was not convinced though. It was only after third round of her run that she realised Saket wasn't anywhere near her. They usually ran together. In fact they even raced sometimes. Her doubts increased. She looked around, trying to find him. She dialled his number but he did not pick it up. Suddenly he spotted him behind a tree. He was talking to someone. She could not see the person.

She went towards them and hid behind a bush near them. A man was talking to him. He handed him a packet. Who was he? What was in the packet? Concern about her brother's safety took over her. Saket was not with any wrong company, right? She decided to approach them. She was about to call out Saket's name but stopped on her tracks when she heard the man speak.

"Khushi should not come to know about this."

The husky voice belonged to none other than Arnav Singh Raizada.

She was furious again.

"And what should I not know?" She asked angrily gritting her teeth.

Arnav and Saket turned towards her. Saket gulped seeing her sister standing with hands on her hips, with a raised eye-brow and lips forming a thin line.

"Uh. Hi, Khushi. Good morning", said Arnav with a smile.

**********

This is where I leave you today. I have replied to your amazing comments on Pages 28, 29 and 30. Do check them.


Please hit the 'Like' button and 'Comment'. I would love to know your feedback.😊

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Chapter 4

Edited by barsha_dash - 9 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Me please

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Lo aagayi Jaipur ki raani, Matura ki vaani, teri always pyaari <3 Howe as my.intro? Stop laughing aru.. yeah I know you were.. see I know my behen too well *smirks*


Behen this is the third time am editing my res :P


Haye you know someone called this bakwaas?! You know that person na, give one thappad to her for calling this so..Okay will you?

I love your diary updates.. you have so many ideas up your sleeve.. I have seen a trailer of them...Hayee maar dala..Khushi said NO? Like seriously?! Omg no!! If I was in her place, I would have been bobbling my head till Arnav himself stops it! :D aww how can one resist a stunning absolutely dashing Arnav!

But Raizada won't give up easily na.. chahe woh tera Arnav ho ya mera.. again a similarly..don't act as if you are surprised! :D I loved this insight into Arnav's thoughts.. Oh he knew her before he saw her.. and expectations when meeting reality.. Oh it caused a conflict.. honey to.stern and smile to frown! Lol that was too.funny!!

Oh my pyaar is up early.. hope he got his due sleep.. even am.dubious like Khushi.. what is he up to? And hotwa appears here too? And a packet? What should profie not know?

Interest level up by several notches.. Aww am.waiting so much aru..update soonish..

P.S: choco for me.. yaay I am.so damn happy.. I love you too aru.. and me first always ;) won't give to anyone..better know that! Okay?
Edited by Sadh123 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
ARU! IT'S NOT DONE! HOW CAN SADH BE BEFORE ME? NAINSAFI!
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Posted: 10 years ago
Arnav, tu toh gaya beta! Amazing update, Aru! Really loved the way you have showed Arnav getting attracted to Khushi! I love the stories where Ladki Thodi Meri Jaisi Stubborn Hai Aur Ladka Usse Manata Hai! But next time tell me before Sadh okay?


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Posted: 10 years ago
Awake update
Loved it

Keep smiling
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Posted: 10 years ago
interesting ... the way arnav got attracted to khusi is shown so nicely...here khusi is not the typical bubbly khusi but somewhere deep in heart she is very much same... and who needs to observe this, he has already done!! 😉 but after so much waiting it is too short! 😒 plz update soon... 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wonderful update
Loved it
Well written
Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
Oh u left us hanging dear ...
Res...get back to u soon...

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